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Amber
01-10-2005, 22:24
It's set about 5 weeks from now but it is based on the spoilers from next week. Sort of anyway :rolleyes:.

I'm not sure how many parts there will be, but I know it won't be very long. Let me know what you think :)




Goodbye My Lover - Part 1

You touched my heart, you touched my soul
You changed my life and all my goals.
Love is blind and that I knew when, my heart was blinded by you.

Chrissie was sitting on the edge of the bath. She tapped her feet on the floor impatiently. Those three minuits had been the slowest minuits she'd ever waited in her life. In a few seconds she'd know if it was true or not. She'd know if she was going to have child of her own. Her own and Jake's. A smile appeared on her face when she thought about him. But then she thought about Sharon. Would she be able to accept it and be happy for her? After all, she had just had to bury her father 4 weeks ago. She sighed and looked at her watch. 10 seconds to go. She closed her eyes as she counted down the last few moments. She opened her eyes and looked down at the pregnancy test that was in her hands. She smiled as she saw a faint, blue line. Positive. A single tear of happiness rolled down her cheek.

--

Chrissie walked back into the bar of the pub. She couldn't help smiling. Jake walked over to her.
Jake: What's made so happy?
She so pleased she hardly noticed Jake.
Chrissie: Sorry. What?
Jake: I asked you why you were smiling so much.
She placed her hand on his shoulder.
Chrissie: Well why don't we go upstairs and I'll tell you?
Jake: Is it something worth celebrating? Because we could open a bottle of wine.
Chrissie: It's something worth celebrating but perhaps we should give the wine a miss.
He frowned, curious to know what she was talking about and went upstairs. She soon followed.

--

Chrissie sat down on the sofa beside Jake. She smiled and stroked his cheek gently.
Jake: Well darling, what is it then?
She edged closer to him. She placed his hand on her stomach.
Chrissie: Well, I'm pregnant..
His eyes widened.
Jake: Really? Are you sure?
Chrissie: Positive. You can see the pregnancy test if you don't believe me.
Jake: No, I do believe you, it's just.. Wow! I mean, I'm speechless.
She placed her hand over his. He was still in shock.
Chrissie: Are you alright Jake?
Jake: Yeah.. But is it mine?
Chrissie: What do you mean? I haven't slept with anyone else if that's what your asking.
Jake: Well how could anyone not be attracted to such a gorgeous woman like yourself?
She blushed a little. He grinned at her and pushed a stray curl out of her face before kissing her.

Carrie Bradshaw
01-10-2005, 23:59
Wow!! This looks really good - she's gonna have a baby!! :cheer:

Layne
02-10-2005, 10:50
Aww This is fab honey, you have to post more NOW, please for me! Awww baby yey! :wub:

lil baby tash
02-10-2005, 11:46
Yay!!!!!!! Do More I Love It!!!!!!!!!!

Chloe-Elise
02-10-2005, 16:07
Aww shes going to have baby :D please do more soon, great choice of song btw :thumbsup:

hayley
02-10-2005, 16:15
Awww!

Tamzi
02-10-2005, 16:38
Their having a baby! More soon please
xxx

Rain_
02-10-2005, 19:35
Keep going and lets see how much of it actually turns out to be in sync with EE

squillyfer
03-10-2005, 17:15
This is great do more soon goodbye my lover is my favourite song at the moment

Amber
03-10-2005, 22:00
Goodbye My Lover - Part 2

I've kissed your lips and held your head,
I've shared your dreams, I've shared your bed.
I know you well, I know your smell.
I've been addicted to you.

Chrissie woke up the morning after, with Jake's arms around her waist. She switched the alarm clock off. She wanted to stay like this forever. She kissed Jake's arm softly. He opened his eyes.
Jake: Morning beautiful.
Chrissie: Sorry babe, did I wake you?
Jake: Yeah but it doesn't matter.
He grinned at her.
Jake: You're bloody gorgeous, you know that?
She smiled.
Chrissie: Yeah well, so are you.
He kissed the top of her head.

--

Chrissie spent most of the day laughing and flirting with Jake. Sometimes they'd kiss if they met in the hall. Jake brought in some crates. Chrissie watched his every move.
Chrissie: We should go out for dinner tonight.
He placed the crate he was carrying on the floor and stood up straight.
Jake: Yeah. That'd be nice. I'll book a table at Fargo's.
Chrissie: Ok.
She looked at him. She felt like she was drawn to him. He moved closer to her and put his arms around her waist. She didn't tell him to stop like before. She just let him kiss her. She blocked out everything and for one moment she felt like the whole world had been shut away from them. Like nothing mattered. She wanted to believe that nothing mattered, but deep down she knew she had a deadly secret, and inside it was hacking away at her. She felt the guilt creep up on her and she pulled away.
Jake: What's the matter?
His voice was so understanding and calm.
Chrissie: Nothing. Just go and book the table.
He released his arms from around her body and backed away. Hurt.
Chrissie: Oh Jake, I'm sorry.
He walked out into the hall. She followed him out..
Chrissie: Darling, I didn't mean it.
He sighed. She sounded so sincere. He gave in.
Jake: It's alright. I know you didn't.
He cupped her face in his hands and kissed her again.
Jake: I better book that table.
She grinned and kissed him again.
Chrissie: And I better get back to the bar.
She walked out. Jake smiled to himself as he picked up the phone. He dialled the number for Fargo's.
Jake: Hello. I need to book a table for two. Yeah half eight will be fine. Thankyou. Bye.
He put the phone down and walked out into the bar. He spotted Chrissie giving a cust omer their change and walked over. He slipped his arms around her waist from behind. She smiled.
Jake: Hello gorgeous. I've booked the table.
Chrissie: Great.
She turned around to face him.
Chrissie: Thankyou.
Jake: For what?
Chrissie: For just being here.
Jake: You don't need to thank me. It was a choice I made, I could've either stayed with Danny for the rest of my life, or come back to you.
Chrissie: And you chose me.
Jake: Yeah.
She looked into his eyes. He deserved to know the truth. She ignored this thought and kissed him softly.

Tamzi
03-10-2005, 22:49
He'll find out in the end! Fabbity, loving this script. More please
xxx

lil baby tash
04-10-2005, 16:53
Do More Tis Great Make Jakisie Happy Tho Dnt Go All Eastie Writiers And Bring The Worst Of The Situation Out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hayley
04-10-2005, 19:53
This is great amber! more asap!

Layne
04-10-2005, 21:31
Oh thisn is amazing i LOVE it you have to post more like now please please for me????
Luv ya
Layne
x x x

Rain_
04-10-2005, 21:39
yeah what she ^ said

Chloe-Elise
04-10-2005, 22:10
Awww they sweet :) its brilliant please update it soon :D

Amber
07-10-2005, 23:27
Goodbye My Lover - Part 3

I am a Dreamer, but when I wake,
You can't break my spirit, it's my dreams you take,
And as you move on, remember me,
Remember us and all we used to be

Chrissie walked back into the bedroom after having a shower. She sat down on the bed and ran her fingers through her wet curls. She went over and opened the doors of the wardrobe. She held her towel in place with one hand and with the other she pulled out dresses she thought she could wear. She didn't feel like any of them were right. She noticed something new. It was a black dress. She pulled it out. A note was attached to the sleeve. It said, 'Jake xx'. She smiled.

--

Jake knocked on the bedroom door. He walked in to see Chrissie sitting infront of the dressing table, adding the finishing touches to her makeup. She smiled as he saw his reflection in the mirror. He leant casually against the doorframe.
Jake: Are you ready yet?
Chrissie: Almost.
She sprayed some perfume on her neck and massaged it into her skin. Stood up and turned around to face Jake.
Chrissie: Well? What do you think?
He grinned.
Jake: You look gorgeous.
She smiled and walked over to him.
Chrissie: Thankyou for the dress.
Jake: It's alright.
He kissed her gently on the lips, slipping his arms around her neck.
Jake: Let's go.
Chrissie: Yeah.
He held her hand as they walked out.

--

Chrissie placed her knive and fork on her plate, after finishing her meal.
Chrissie: I've been thinking.
Jake: About what?
She took his hands in hers.
Chrissie: I want you to move in with me.
Jake: Really?
Chrissie: Yes. I need to move on. We are going to have a baby and it just feels so right.
Jake: Yeah, it does. But don't you think we're moving to quickly?
Chrissie: Is that a no then?
Jake: Of course not! If you want me to move in I will.
Chrissie: But is it what you want?
Jake: Chrissie, I want this so much. I want to be with you. I want to wake up in the morning with you. I really do want to move in with you.
Chrissie: Are you sure?
Jake: I've never been more sure about anything in my life.
He kissed her knuckles softly. She smiled lovingly.

--

Chrissie lay in bed with her head on Jake's bare chest. He stroked her soft curls.
Jake: This time tomorrow I will have moved in.
Chrissie: Yeah. I can't wait.
Jake: Neither can I.
Chrissie: And soon it'll just be me, you and the baby.
He slid his hands down the silky material that covered her skin and onto her slightly, swollen stomach.
Jake: Yeah. We'll be a family.
She closed her eyes and smiled. A family, she thought to herself as she fell into a deep sleep.

Layne
07-10-2005, 23:39
awwwwwwwwwww how cute :wub: post more soon please this is amazing stuff! x

Rain_
08-10-2005, 00:01
I've decided you need to write me in to this story. I will have Jake thank you

Chloe-Elise
08-10-2005, 11:54
Awwww its great! Jakes so sweet :wub: please do more soon :D

lil baby tash
08-10-2005, 12:06
more more more..................

hayley
08-10-2005, 16:53
this so good! more asap!

squillyfer
08-10-2005, 16:56
this is great!!! do more soon

Amber
12-10-2005, 22:54
Goodbye My Lover - Part 4

Did I disappoint you, or let you down?
Should I be feeling guilty, or let the judges frown?

Chrissie walked up to Jake who was gathering some empty glasses in.
Chrissie: I'll help you.
She went to pick up a glass but Jake went for the same one. Their hands touched. Their eyes met. He smiled and leant closer to her. She kissed him gently. Both pulled away, each sharing a smile as they walked around the bar.

--

Chrissie watched Jake as he brought in a suitcase and a couple of boxes of his stuff. She went to serve Dot and Pauline, who were also watching him.
Chrissie: What can I get you two?
Dot: I'll just have an orange juice. Pauline what would you like?
But her mind was on other things as she watched Jake disappear out the back. She looked at Chrissie, digusted.
Pauline: What's he doing?
Chrissie: Moving in.
Pauline: But he can't! Didn't you think about Sharon? That's typical! You showed no interest what so ever in the plans for Den's funeral and..
She was interrupted by Chrissie.
Chrissie: I did think about Sharon, but I need to move on and so does she.
Dot: I think it's a good idea. After all you've been through this year, you need to look to the future.
Chrissie: Thankyou Dot.
She gave her the orange juice.
Chrissie: It's on the house. Now Pauline, are you going to buy a drink or just stand here going on at me? I'd choose the first one if I were you.
Jake reappeared and joined Chrissie, putting his arm around her.
Pauline: -She spoke with a false smile- I'll have a tonic water please.
Jake got her the drink and placed it on the bar.
Chrissie: That's 50p please.
Pauline got the right change out and dropped it into the palm of Chrissie's hand.
Chrissie: Thankyou.
Jake kissed Chrissie on the lips gently. Pauline tutted and took her drink.

--

Sharon and Dennis arrived back in the square after their honeymoon. Sharon went into the Vic. Chrissie called her over.
Chrissie: Hi. How was your holiday?
Sharon: Great.
She hugged Chrissie.
Chrissie: Can we talk?
She nodded and followed Chrissie and Jake up to the living room.
Jake: Well, alot has happened since you've been away..
Sharon: Has something bad happened?
Chrissie: No, nothing like that.
Sharon: Well what is it then?
Chrissie looked at Jake.
Chrissie: I'm pregnant.
Sharon blinked.
Sharon: Pregnant?
Chrissie: Yes..
Sharon: I take it the baby's Jake's, yeah?
Chrissie: Yes.
Sharon: Congratulations!
Chrissie was shocked by her reaction. She didn't expect this at all. Sharon came over and hugged her.
Chrissie: But that's not all.
Sharon: What?
Chrissie: Jake's moved in with me.
Sharon: Oh..
Jake: I can move back out if you want..
Sharon: No it's alright. I guess I'm glad you're happy.
She smiled. Mo called up for help in the bar. Chrissie started to get up.
Sharon: I'll go.
Chrissie: Are you sure?
She nodded with a smile and left the room. Chrissie turned back to Jake.
Jake: Well now we're alone.
Chrissie: So we are.
Their eyes locked and they kissed. They let the passion take over.

sarahwelford
13-10-2005, 00:31
great more a.s.a.p

lil baby tash
13-10-2005, 09:05
more more more

Tamzi
13-10-2005, 14:32
This is very good. They all seem happy. More soon please
xxx

Amber
13-10-2005, 17:05
They all seem happy.
For now *hint, hint..*

Layne
13-10-2005, 18:22
Awwwww sharon is not angry wow!!!

This is fabbity! please post more soon honey x

Chloe-Elise
13-10-2005, 21:18
Awww they are so sweet :wub: Please do more soon :D

Rain_
14-10-2005, 04:07
I don't see the whole Rain&Jake storyline appearing anywhere. I'm gutted !!!!!!

hayley
14-10-2005, 17:37
awwwwwwww! this is brill! more asap!

Rach33
16-10-2005, 15:26
Amber I just caught up honey this is brillaint I love it please post more soon

Amber
20-10-2005, 19:57
Sorry I haven't posted in a while. I'll try to post over the weekend :)
Here's a long part to make up for not posting :D


Goodbye My Lover - Part 5

Did I disappoint you, or let you down?
Should I be feeling guilty, or let the judges frown?
'Cause I saw the end, before we'd begun,
Yes I saw you were blinded and I knew I had won.

Jake and Chrissie lay curled up under a blanket on the sofa. He smiled at her.
Jake: Are you going to tell anyone else about our baby?
Chrissie: I don't know. I could just make an announcement and get it over with.
Jake: Just do what you feel is right.
'Tell him about what really happened to Den. Tell him the truth. Like he said do what you feel is right. It's wrong not to tell him..' She shook her head trying to get rid of the voice of doom in her mind.
Chrissie: I feel like nothing is right. What do you want to do about this? Everybody will find out when I start to look like a whale.
He laughed at her last comment.
Chrissie: Jake this isn't funny! What do we do?
Jake: I think we should get it out in the open. It just seems easier than waiting for someone to figure it out.
Chrissie: Ok.
She sighed and sat up. She tried to stand up but Jake's arms were still around her waist.
Chrissie: Let me go.
Jake: No
She giggled loudly as he pulled her down. He tickled her, making her scream with laughter.
Chrissie: Jake.. stop I can breathe!
Jake: Well you seem to be managing it!
He let her catch her breath and looked at her. She looked back at him and before she knew it, he was kissing her passionately.

--

Later that night Jake and Chrissie were working in the bar together. She rang the bell to make their announcement.
Chrissie: Right can I have everyone's attention please.
The pub quietened down. She took a deep breath.
Chrissie: I-- Me and Jake have an announcement to make.
Peggy walked in through the doors. Chrissie's eyes widened. He placed his hand on her shoulder as a sign of reassurance. She carried on.
Chrissie: Well as you may already know, Jake's moved in with me and one of the reasons why is because I'm..
She felt too scared to say it. Jake noticed this and finished her sentence.
Jake: Chrissie's pregnant.
There were a couple of gasps and whispers but half of the pub was happy for them. Dot walked over to them.
Dot: Congratulations! It is wonderful that you're bringing a child of your own into the world, just wonderful!
Chrissie: Thankyou.
She smiled. Jake put his arm around her.

--

Chrissie and Jake had been congratulated all through the night and they were just closing. Chrissie locked one of the doors and Jake did the same with the other doors.
Chrissie: I'm glad everyone knows now.
Jake: Yeah me too.
Chrissie locked the last door and moved closer to Jake. He grinned and pulled her into a long, passionate kiss. He pulled away, leaving Chrissie smiling to herself. Jake yawned.
Jake: I'm tired. I'm going to bed.
Chrissie: Ok I'll come with you.
He held out his hand. She took it and followed Jake upstairs.

--

Chrissie was just about to get into bed when she heard her mobile ring. She must've left it in the bar.
Chrissie: I'll be right back.
She went downstairs in her dressing gown. Just as she found her phone it stopped ringing. 'New voicemail' flashed onto the screen. She went to listen when she heard a voice. A voice she despised. A voice belonging to Peggy Mitchell.
Peggy: You know you really should check that people aren't in after closing time.
Chrissie: Get out.
Peggy walked around the bar.

Jake got out of bed, wearing just a pair of boxers. He wondered where Chrissie was.
Jake: Chrissie?
He was about to walk out onto the landing when he heard talking. He pushed the door open a little, just enough so he could make out what they were saying. He could hear Peggy's voice coming from downstairs.

Peggy: You are just an evil little cow, you know that?
She pushed Chrissie out into the hall.
Peggy: You might be able to fool everyone around 'ere, but you ain't foolin' me!
Chrissie: Just go away.
Peggy: I know you killed Den and I am gonna make you wish you'd never let Sam take the blame.

The more Jake listened, the more he doubted Chrissie and the more he believed Peggy.

Peggy: You might think your life is great with your toyboy and that kid, -she pointed to Chrissie's stomach- but when he finds out the truth, he ain't gonna forgive you. And you know what? I won't blame him.
She knew Peggy was right, but she didn't want to believe her.
Chrissie: Just get out. Now.
She tried to sound strong but her voice sounded weak.
Peggy opened the door and turned back to Chrissie.
Peggy: You killed your 'usband and you just carry on as if nothing's happened. You make me ill.
She walked out. A tear rolled down Chrissie's cheek as she leant against the door.

Jake could hear Chrissie crying softly downstairs. That was it. It all made sense now. All of those time where she'd pushed him away. When she shouted at him when he changed the barrel. When she'd snapped when he changed into one of Den's shirts. It was all so clear. She did it. She killed Den.

lil baby tash
20-10-2005, 20:06
omg ahhhhh noooooooooooooooo

Chloe-Elise
20-10-2005, 20:11
No Jake it wasn't her fault! :( Great update,please post more soon :D

Amber
20-10-2005, 20:14
Wow! That was quick!

Tamzi
20-10-2005, 21:44
Knew it would come out. Fabbity. More soon please
xxx

Layne
20-10-2005, 21:52
God i hate peggy!
You have to post more now please
xxx

sarahwelford
21-10-2005, 00:15
omg this is brilliant more soon please

Amber
22-10-2005, 11:05
Thanks for the replies :) The final part is coming soon.


Goodbye My Lover - Part 6

Goodbye my lover,
Goodbye my friend,
You have been the one, you have been the one for me.

Chrissie climbed the stairs. She had been crying because she was scared of losing Jake. She didn't know what she'd do if he found out.

Jake sat on the bed. He wanted the truth. He didn't know what he'd do if what he thought was true.

Chrissie walked into the bedroom. She frowned when she saw Jake sitting on the bed, fully clothed. She sat down beside him.
Chrissie: What's going on?
Jake: That's just what I was going to ask you.
Chrissie: What do you mean?
Jake: Did you do it?
Her eyes widened. Had he heard what Peggy had said?
Chrissie: Did I do what?
Jake: Did you murder your husband?
Chrissie: No! I've told you before. I didn't kill Den.
He stood up and paced around the room.
Jake: You told a pub full of people but you've never once looked me in the eye and told me
Chrissie: Jake, I didn't do it.
Jake: It doesn't make any sense at all. You, Zoe and Stacey just go and have a sleepover together?! Who do you think I am? Did you expect me to believe that?
She stood up and walked over to him. He looked at her.
Jake: Did you kill him?
Chrissie: No..
Jake: Your lying.
She broke down into tears. She couldn't lie anymore. She couldn't keep it in any longer.
Chrissie: I did it. I killed him.
He felt his anger get the better of him as he grabbed her wrists tightly.
Jake: What you mean to say, is that you lied to me all this time. You'd rather let me find out for myself than you just tell me.
Chrissie: No. I didn't mean for this to happen. Just let me explain.
Jake: Chrissie, I gave you every chance to explain but you didn't, did you?
He could see the fear in her eyes and he loosened his grip.
Jake: Why didn't you tell me?
Chrissie: I don't know. I was scared you wouldn't understand, scared that you'd leave me.
He let go of her wrists. He couldn't deal with this.
Jake: I'm moving out. I just need to be on my own. Without you. I need to think.
His words stung. She clung onto his shirt.
Chrissie: Please, Jake, don't leave me. I need you.
Jake: Get off me.
He pushed her so hard she hit the wall. She fell to the floor. She felt blood run down the side of her face.
Jake: Just stay away from me.
He picked up his suitcase that he hadn't unpacked in the first place, and left the room.

lil baby tash
22-10-2005, 11:26
NOOOOOOOOO JAKEY YOU FOOL dnt leave her she is bleading she might die meany COOOOOOMMMMMMEEEEE BAAAACCCCCKKKK!!!!!

hayley
22-10-2005, 11:34
Jake you twit! stay with her!
more soon! (",)

Amber
22-10-2005, 12:35
Don't worry she only cut herself on a picture frame or something. She isn't going to die.. or is she? *Is so evil*

Btw, I'm doing a sequel because I have something hidden up me sleeve.. Mwahahahahahahahahaha..(5 hours later..)..hahahahahahahahaha!

sarahwelford
22-10-2005, 12:57
this is brilliant more soon

lil baby tash
22-10-2005, 12:58
please please please do more more more more more more!!!!!!DNT MAKE HER DIE TIS MEAN

Tamzi
22-10-2005, 13:11
Please post more. Please
xxx

lil baby tash
22-10-2005, 13:42
jake moon rox may i ask are you going to the clothes show at the NEC in bham because im going to the same one if you are?

Chloe-Elise
22-10-2005, 16:30
Nooooo don't go Jake! Aww poor Chrissie, please post more soon :)

shannisrules
22-10-2005, 17:56
jake cant go!

Jada-GDR
22-10-2005, 18:02
thats brilliant! DONT GO JAKE YOU IDIOT SHE'S BLEEDING HERE!!! :wall:

Layne
22-10-2005, 19:28
Don't worry she only cut herself on a picture frame or something. She isn't going to die.. or is she? *Is so evil*

Btw, I'm doing a sequel because I have something hidden up me sleeve.. Mwahahahahahahahahaha..(5 hours later..)..hahahahahahahahaha!


No she is not going to die and a sequel yey *jumps up and down* Is it bad? I hope not this is fab honey! x

lil baby tash
22-10-2005, 23:58
pleaasse please more sooon!!!!

kirstienod
24-10-2005, 16:23
Just started reading this, it brill well done

Amber
29-10-2005, 00:15
Thanks for reading :D
Here's the final part..



Goodbye My Lover - Part 7

I've seen you cry, I've seen you smile,
I've watched you sleeping for a while,
I'd be the father of you child, I'd spend a lifetime with you.

Jake woke up the next morning. He felt awful. He wished that he didn't know the truth, but then again, honesty is the best policy. But she wasn't honest. She didn't tell him the truth. She just let him find out on his own. Deep inside he knew he loved her, but that kind of love just hurt too much.

Chrissie was lying in bed. She hadn't slept at all. She was still shaken by what had happened the night before. She touched the cut on her head. It still stung. She sighed. She loved Jake but she knew he didn't love her after last night.

--

Jake looked up at the Vic. The curtains were drawn but he couldn't see Chrissie. He sighed and pushed the doors of the pub open.

Chrissie walked out into the hall to get a packet of crisps for a customer. She returned.
Chrissie: There you go.
She took the money.
Jake: Chrissie..
Chrissie: Jake..
He wanted to hold her, kiss her and tell her he didn't care about what she'd done.. but he had made his decision. He remembered why he was there.
Jake: Can we talk?
Chrissie: Well we're kind of busy now..
He noticed the cut on her forehead. He felt guilty.
Jake: I guess I could come back later..
Does he want to try and make a go of our relationship? She thought as a glimmer of hope appeared for them.
Chrissie: Why don't you come back at about nine?
Jake: Yeah,ok. I'll see you then.
He walked out. Mo came over.
Mo: Jake, was a bit quiet. Do you know why Chrissie? I mean he's usually flirting with you but he seemed.. I dunno, upset about something.
Chrissie: Mo, do you have to know everything about my love life?
Mo: Oh sorry. I didn't mean to--
Chrissie: No, I'm sorry I snapped at you. It's just me and Jake.. well..
Mo: You haven't fallen out, have you?
She nodded.
Chrissie: And it was about Den, of all people. I don't know if he'll forgive me. He did ask if we could talk so that's got to be a good sign, right?
Mo: Yeah. It'll be alright, I can feel it.
Chrissie smiled.

--

Chrissie placed another plate on the table and lit a candle. She was wearing a silver, sequinned, halter-neck dress. She looked beautiful. She heard a knock and went downstairs. She opened the door.
Jake: Hi..
Chrissie: Hi. Come in it's freezing.
Jake walked in and Chrissie shut the door. He sighed and sat down on the stairs.
Jake: I'm sorry about what happened.. I shouldn't have pushed you like that, especially when you're pregnant..
Chrissie: Well, I deserved it.
He pulled her down to sit next to him.
Jake: You didn't deserve it.
Chrissie: The baby didn't deserve it. I did.
They sat in an awkard silence for a couple of minutes.
Chrissie: What was it you wanted to talk to me about?
He took a deep breath.
Jake: I'm leaving.
His words echoed in her mind. Her eyes filled with tears.
Chrissie: But why?
Jake: Why do you think?
Chrissie: But it wasn't my fault. He was going to kill me. It was self defence. Please, Jake believe me, I never wanted him dead, I swear.
Jake: You lied to me and that's something I don't know I can forgive you for.
Chrissie: I'm so sorry Jake. I hate myself for it. Just please don't go.
Jake: I need some time away from here. Away from you.
Chrissie: But.. what about the baby?
Jake: What about the baby?
Chrissie: Well you're the father.
He sighed knowing that fact would never change.
Jake: I don't know what to do anymore.
Chrissie: Stay, please, I'm begging you.
Jake: I need to get away. I can't deal with this.
She looked up at him with tears falling down her face. He looked so young and troubled, like a little boy who'd lost his parents in a crowd.
Chrissie: I'm sorry for everything. I'm going to miss you so much.
He stood up.
Jake: I've got to go. The train leaves at ten.
She stood up beside him.
Chrissie: Bye Jake.
Jake: Bye.
He kissed her. It was a kiss goodbye. It wasn't long but it was the last kiss they'd ever have together. He pulled away. He opened the door and walked away. She watched him disappear around the corner.
Chrissie: Bye Jake.
More tears fell from her face as she closed the door.


I know your fears, and you know mine,
We've had our doubts but now we're fine,
And I love you, I swear that's true,
I cannot live without you.

princss
29-10-2005, 00:29
awwww no come back Jake!!!!!!!! please do more

Amber
29-10-2005, 09:44
I'm doing a sequel soon so it doesn't end there :D

Chloe-Elise
29-10-2005, 10:57
Awwwww no Jake!Brilliant script :D I hope hes back in the sequel though! :)

Tamzi
29-10-2005, 16:03
Oh dear Jake left!Will have to read the sequel to see if he comes back. That was great though
xxx

Layne
29-10-2005, 16:43
I'm doing a sequel soon so it doesn't end there :D

Oh thank god for that!

i can't belive jake left i was reading that with tears in my eyes!
Fab stuff honey and post this sequel!!!! x

Rach33
31-10-2005, 22:15
awwww he better come back SOON this is fabbie babes and really really hope the sequel will be on here very soon