ForeBridge

[big bro fan]

hi this is my new soap it is basically an estate called ForeBridge that has a pub a bookies and old club a postoffice and a cafe please send me some feedback if you can i hope you enjoy it.

Episode 1

Scene 1
Post office

Denise walks into the post office and picks up the mail

Denise:scott we got a letter from paul he says he is coming to stay for a while.
Scott:great when's he coming.
Paul:he's coming about now dad.
Denise: oh my god paul come here and give your mum a kiss.
Paul:hi mum i got you these.(gives her flowers)
Denise:thankyou i better put these in water.
Scott:how about we go over the greyhound later for a drink.
Paul:great but i'll leave you and mum for a bit i can see your busy.

Scene 2
Outside the postoffice
Tina see's Paul walking down the street

Tina: paul hey paul
Paul:hi tina how are you
Tina:im good how are you
Paul:can't complain so are you still living with your grandad
Tina:yeah say what are you doing tonight
Paul:not much
Tina:fancy going for a drink
Paul:yeah see you about seven
Tina:allright see you then

Scene 3
Robbie and Emilys

Robbie:who was on the phone love
Emily:denise she's invited us to go to the greyhound later to have a drink
Robbie:allright then how anout we go out for dinner first and then go to the greyhound
Emily:that would be so romantic makes me remember why i married you anyway i had better get going all i'll be late for work you know what phil sullivans like if his pub is'nt clean
Robbie:bye love

Scene 4
The postoffice

Sheila and Scott are talking

Sheila:can i ask you something scott
Scott:for you sheila anything
Sheila:could me brian bob and betty come to the greyhound with you later
Scott:would'nt be a party if you were'nt there she
Sheila:well i better go and get brian and bob out of the bookies if were going to have any money for tonight
Scott:see you later then she

sheila leaves the postoffice and denise comes downstairs

Denise:i rang phil and louise they say they dont mind us having a bit of a shin dig tonight and even put some champagne on ice on the house
Scott:that was nice of them looks like everyone's going to be there tonight
that reminds me i had better go and see mike and tell him will you watch the shop
Denise:yeah ok see you later

Scene 5
bookies

Brian and Bob are waiting for the race results

Brian:come on number 7 number 7.....yesssss i've won i cant wait to tell she
Bob:speak of the devil
Sheila:Brian cole what have i told you about wasting money in this place
Brian:well i have just won about three thousand pounds
Sheila:brian that's great news we can finally get that new front door we wanted and that nice carpet
Brian:what ever you say love

Scene 6
Alfie and Tina's

Tina:grandad are you ready
Alfie:yep let's get going

Scene 7
upstairs postoffice

Paul:i've got to tell you something mum
Denise:whats wrong
Paul:im moving back home but dont worry i will find somewhere to live
Denise:just more reason to celebrate come on

Scene 8
greyhound

Phil:buisness should be good tonight
Louise:where are the lad's
Phil:gone out for a drink
Louise:better get that champagne scott and denise have arrived

scott denise and paul come in and everyone start's cheering

Paul:um mum i'll see you later i promised tina i would have a drink with her
Denise:can you believe it he's only been home a few hours and already got a girl at least tina's a nice girl
Scott:come on love let's get a drink in

Emily and Robbie are talking in the corner

Emily:robbie we've been together a long time and we've been married a long time
Robbie:what are you trying to say
Emily:i want to have kids
Robbie:well um
Emily:whats wrong
Robbie nothing it's just i need time to think

Paul and Tina are seen in the corner kissing
Denise:dont suppose he'll be home tonight
Scott:leave the boy alone denise he's old anough to make his own descisions
Denise:well excuse me for caring

Paul walks over to scott and denise

Paul:me and tina are going back to her house see you tommorow
denise:allright love take care

paul and tina walk out the pub

Denise:you know what your right he is old enough i hope he has a good time

Scene 9
Tina's beddroom

there are clothes on the floor and tina and paul start kissing in bed.

[diamond1]

thats really good

[big bro fan]

thanks im glad you like it i will put the next episode up tommorow

[big bro fan]

change of plan next episode will be up tommorow

[bakedbean]

Looking good once again more competition

[baileya]

very good again.

[big bro fan]

thanks im glad you likr it next episode up later today

[big bro fan]

Episode 2

Scene 1
Robbie and Emilys bedroom

Emily is asleep Robbie is starring at the ceiling

Scene 2
Tinas bedroom
Paul and Tina are in bed

Paul:i love you
Tina:i know
Paul:well theres something i want to ask you
Tina:yeah whats that
Paul:well i would like you to help me find a house and then maybe move in with me i mean i know if you dont want to it's a big step to make and
Tina:i'd love to
Paul:yeah
Tina: of course but know i have to get dressed because i have got work

Scene 3
Greyhound upstairs

Phil:i found something intesting out yesterday
Louise:what's that
Phil:sid wood's coming back

Louise drops her mug

Louise:your joking
Phil:no coming back this afternoon apparently he's decided to do up the club
Louise:well he did used to own it the neighbours are'nt going to like that

Scene 4
The cafe
Tina is serving Emily at the counter

Tina:are you allright emily
Emily:what oh yeah fine
Tina:are you sure
Emily:i told Robbie i want his kids
Tina:and what did he say
Emily:said he wants to think about it
Tina:im sure he will say yes
Emily:well things cant get any worse

Scene 5
Outside club
Sid woods and a girl get out of a car

Girl:i miss this place
Sid:yeah should be a nice buisness
Girl:i cant wait to be the manager again
Sid:just promise me you will behave yourself
Girl: oh come on dad you know i will
Sid:fancy a tea in the cafe
Girl:yeah go on then

Scene 6
The cafe
Sid and his daughter walk in

Emily:what the hell are you doing here
Rachel:look emily i have put what happned behin me it was an accident
Emily:you call getting my husband drunk and me catching you in bed together an accident
Rachel:well people have diffrent meanings of the word accident
Emily:you slept with my husband
Rachel:look the only reason robbie slept with me is because he found me good looking now you can put this behind you and get used to me living here or carry on remembering something that i was sorry about whats you pick
Emily:well if your staying then i leaving (walks out)
Rachel:well how about that tea then dad

Scene 7
garage

Emily:mike is robbie here
Mike:no sorry emily he's at home on his lunch break
Emily:thanks mike

Scene 8
Greyhound
Sheila Brian Bob and Betty are having a drink

Betty:hey did you here about emily and rachel woods in the cafe earlier
Sheila:unfortuantly yes makes me glad shed never want brian because he's older then her
Brian:i would'nt mind a bit of her
Sheila:brian i am your wife you know
Brian:i know its just she reminds me of you when we were younger
Sheila:well anyway betty do you and bob fancy coming round to our house for dinner tommorow
Betty:of course she

Scene 9
Robbie and Emilys

Robbie:you can't just leave because of her
Emily:well i am so lets get packed and go
Robbie:i can't
Emily:why not
Robbie:because i have a life here
Emily:fine then you'll get the divorce papers in the post
Robbie:well if thats the way you feel im off to the pub

Scene 10
Greyhound

Paul:well the guys moved out we should be able to move in by the end of the week
Tina:were just lucky the house is only across the road from me grandad's

Robbie comes in

Robbie:can i have a pint please louise
Louise:everything allright
Robbie:no emilys left me

Denise and scott come in the pub

Denise:robbie you might want to go outside

Robbie and the whole pub go outside and warch emily get into a taxi robbie goes over to emily

Robbie:please dont leave
Emily:goodbye robbie

emily gets into the taxi and drives off

Robbie:(drops to the floor)Emily

scott and paul run over to robbie

Scott:come on lets get him inside


i just want to let you know that emily has gone she may return or not no im undecided at the moment next episode up tommorow

[baileya]

Poor robbie. Bring emily back in a surprise!

[big bro fan]

first things first sorry for not having any episodes up lately i have been planning my christmas episode and the run up to christmas believe me its going to be dramatic. secondly i have decided to post a episode a day instead of every other day so tommorow to kick it all off again you will be able to read episodes 3 and 4 but here are some spoilers for the next few episodes and the big one the christmas episode.



Spoilers

the bitch rachel has got her claws into a man but who is it
the new opening of club sapphire is going to open with a BANG
and is there love instore for tinas grandad alfie and by the way cant wait for soap awards

[big bro fan]

just to say that i know my show has been rubbish but i promise hopefully it will be as good as Merseysiders and Exeter

[Rain_]

It's turning out great :) Post more please

[diamond1]

youve only had a few episodes its not rubbish its just getting started cant wait for your nominations

[baileya]

It has been great big brother fan. Bring emily back!!! Hurry up with the next part.

[bakedbean]

It is good, i started off rubbish look at me now lol

[big bro fan]

Well for starters im glad you like it and as promised here is the first of two episodes.

Episode 3

Scene 1
upstairs postoffice
Scott and Robbie are busy talking

Scott:i dont know about this plan what if she does not want you anymore
Robbie:she will trust me
Scott:well your my best mate and whatever you do im behind you all the way

Scene 2
Sids house
Sid is busy on his phone

Sid:so you can have the club finished this week thats great news
(Rachel comes in and starts putting her shoes on)
Sid:yeah i got to go bye(puts phone down)where do you think your going
Rachel:um shopping
Sid:after what you did yesterday
Rachel:look i didnt make her leave its not my fault that she cant put up with a little competion and robbie is a loser who cant get a grip and get over it i wish he would just leave.

Scene 3
Greyhound[Bar]
Phil is serving sheila at the bar when louise walks into the bar

Louise:hey babe look what i found
Phil:oh yeah thats when my family used to run the garage i forgot we had this photo
Sheila:oh yes your family used to own the pub and the garage quite a good business untill your mum and dad moved away and she sold it to mike remember phil
Phil:dont say that name
Louise:why whats mike ever done to you
Phil:took the only business i ever wanted i'll see you later(leaves)
Louise:whats eatin him
Sheila:mike and phil never really saw eye to eye after mike bought the garage
Louise:so maybe thats why mike never comes in here
Sheila:could be anyway i'll see you later love

Scene 4
Cafe
Denise Robbie and Scott are having tea

Denise:so run this through me one more time
Robbie:im going to go to scotland and get Emily back
Denise:well
Scott:it's his descion
Denise:well i supposed we had better get your car packed(get up and leave but paul overhears Robbie's conversation)
Paul:are you selling your house
Robbie:you can move in when you like all my stuff is going with me dont know how long i'll be
Paul:cheers bruv(smiles)
Scott Robbie and Denise leave
Tina:(excited)i'm so happy
Paul:i know our own place all i need now is a job

Scene 5
Alley
Phil is waiting for someone

Phil where is he

Scene 6
Postoffice
Robbie is packed and saying good bye to Scott and Denise

Robbie:well i'll be seeing you around
Scott:have fun
Denise:say hi to Emily for me
Robbie:i will bye(drives away)

Scene 7
Old Club
Sid is talking to builders

Sid:yeah the name sapphire acroos the top of the door(paul comes in)
Paul:mr woods could i have a word
Sid:make it quick i'm a busy man
Paul:i was wondering if i could have a job
Sid:ok you start now take my car get it cleaned then make sure your here at six on friday for the opening your my new manager
Paul:thankyou Mr woods
Sid:please call me Sid

Scene 8
Alley
Phil sees a car pull up

Jamie:whats up dad
Phil:in future dont leave your father waiting but anway tommorow at twelve i want you your girlfriend your brother Luke his girlfriend and your mum in the pub you know keep um busy it's time we got the Garage back
Jamie:and how are you going to get mike to sell you the garage
Phil:trust me he will now you got the plan
Jamie:yeah dad
Phil:keep this to yourself and tell no one heres fifty take violat out with luke and shelly have a drink and some dinner see you later son


Just to let you know Robbie and Emily may come back so if you could give me some suggestions for storylines for them that woulg be great.

[baileya]

when they come back have them starting a family.

[big bro fan]

when they come back have them starting a family.

i think i might do that but it wont be till after christmas because i have got a really big storyline starting soon any other suggestions please post

[big bro fan]

Episode 4

Scene 1
Greyhound[kitchen]
Louise is making Phil tea

Louise:so what you doing today love
Phil:why whats it to you im off see you later(leaves)
Jamie:you allright mum
Louise:yeah its just your dad
Jamie:see you later i've got to go out
Louise:where your not at work today
Jamie:just out

Scene 2
Paul Tina bedroom
Paul and Tina are in bed

Tina:it's so nice to have a place to our selves
Paul:yeah i can't wait to start work at the club tommorow earn some money
Tina:for the family
Paul:what do you mean family
Tina:i want to have kids with you
Paul:you read my mind
Tina:well lets go out tonight and lets take it from there

Scene 3
Garage
Mike is busy working

Jamie:hi Mike has my Dad been here
Mike:um no sorry mate he has'nt
Jamie:well i need to tell you something(mike looks at him)it's about you and my dad

Scene 4
Cafe
Judy and Dave are serving Alfie at the counter

Judy:so how is the house now Tina's left
Alfie:quiet wish i had someone there
Judy:well let's see you could always get a lodger
Alfie:a lodger
Judy:yeah you know earn bit of money and who knows might be your age
Alfie:but how do i do it
Judy:well theres lots of ads for people who want somewhere to syay put an ad in and i bet you get some replies
Alfie:thanks Judy you've made my day(leaves)
Dave:you always were good at giving advice
Judy:what can i say i'm gifted

Scene 5
Garage
Phil is talking to Mike

Phil:so you said you wanted to talk
Mike:yeah business
Phil:what kind
Mike:i want you and me to put our diffrences aside and become business partners
Phil:how much
Mike:fifty for you and fifty for me and dennis
Phil:deal(shakes hands with Mike)thanks
Mike:for what
Phil:making me happy and next time you come over the Greyhound free drinks on me.

Scene 6
Greyhound
Louise is serving bradley

Bradley:pint please
Louise:where you off anywhere nice
Bradley:hot date
Louise:do your mum and dad know
Bradley:yes and you can call Martin and Lucy i mean mum and dad at the bookies to check
Louise:allright got to make sure me nephew is allright....so come on then who is she
Bradley:bye auntie louise say hi to uncle phil for me as well

Scene 8
Sapphire

Sid:can't wait till tommorow
Rachel:me neither now i'll see you later
Sid:where are you going
Rachel:somewhere dont wait up

Scene 9
Greyhound[back room]
Jamie is watching tv but phil tirns it off

Jamie:i was watching that
Phil:i want a word
Jamie:about the garage
Phil:yeah Mike told me what you did
Jamie:well i did'nt want you to do something you would regret
Phil:thanks son

[diamond1]

ok so maybe we get a epsiode in scotland cause of robbie? wonder whats the history between mike and phil? really good cant wait for next episode

[big bro fan]

Just to say that over the next two epiosdes there is going to be a really big storyline ending and then from there instead of having storylines in two episodes or something have them more spread out but for now here is the climax episode.

Episode 5

Scene 1
Bookies upstairs
Bradley is looking for his wallet

Bradley:mum you seen my wallet
Vannesa:no sorry love

Scene 2
Sids house
Rachel is holding bradleys wallet and pulls out ten thousand pounds

Rachel:(on the phone)hello yes can i bbok a first class flight to paris...when today if possible...yes my name is Miss Woods

Scene 3
Alfie's house
Alfie is waiting by the post box

Alfie:thought the post would never arrive(opens letter)sounds intresting

Scene 4
Greyhound[bar]
Louise is talking to Bradley

Louise:so you say you had your wallet last night and then this morning it was gone
Bradley:yeah
Louise:who was your date with
Bradley:Rachel woods
Louise:(drops glass)
Bradley:are you allright auntie Louise
Louise:yeah fine um could you look after the bar for a while
Bradley:yeah sure what are you going to do
Louise:take care of business

Scene 5
Cafe
Judy is talking to Alfie

Alfie:you were right
Judy:well come on then who is she
Alfie:her name is Hazel and her grandson is danny
Judy:sounds good
Alfie:said she can't wait to get together
Judy:well good for you Alfie

Scene 6
Sapphire
Sid is in his office

Rachel:(knocks hte door)
Sid:come in
Rachel:hi dad i'm ready to go later
Sid:will you becoming back
Rachel:no i'm moving to Paris to live with mum for good
Sid:come and give your dad a hug
Rachel:i'll miss you

Scene 7
Greyhound[bar]

Phil:wheres louise
Bradley:gone to take care of business
Phil:all right i'm going to go and see if i can find her

Scene 8
Sapphire

Louise:where's Rachel
Rachel:she's getting ready to leave in about twenty minutes
Louise:right(leaves)

Scene 9
Outside Greyhound

Phil spots Louise getting into a taxi then gets into his car

Scene 10
Outside Sids house
Rachel gets into the taxi

Rachel:airport please
Louise:were going somewhere but it is'nt the airport


Episode 6

Scene 1
Taxi

Rachel:louise let me out
(louise starts the car and drives off phil follows her)

Scene 2
Cafe
Alfie is with Tina

Tina:so she's coming soon
Alfie:next few days
Tina:i'm happy for you Grandad
Alfie:i thought you would be

Scene 3
Taxi

Rachel:slow this car down your going to kill us
Louise:if it happens it happens
Rachel:why are you doing this
Louise:you should'nt have come back
Rachel:what
Louise:you come back drive two people away then steal from my nephew leave him pennyless while you live it up in Paris i dont think so
Rachel:please i'll give the money back just let me out
Louise:dont start with the innocent act it dont suit ya
Rachel:i'm not taking this from you it's not your problem9gets out phone)
Louise:you call the police i'll crash this car

Scene 4
Sapphire
Paul is working

Tina:hi babe
Paul:what are you doing here
Tina:well i had an idea after you finish work tonight we could you know what we talked about
Paul:sounds good see you later

Scene 5
Taxi

Rachel:your gone in the head
Louise:no i'm just getting you back for last time
Rachel:Phil wanted to sleep with me
Louise:yeah but you did'nt stop there did you ya did it again and then with Robbie
Rachel:i can't help if men want me i am good looking
Louise:no your just a bitch
Rachel:i'm not putting up with this(leans forward and turns the wheel the car hits a lorry the car goes up in flames

Scene 6
Phils car

Phil:nooooooooooooo Louise
(gets out phone)AMBULANCE NOW

Scene 7
Greyhound[kitchen]
Jamie is on the phone

Jamie:right we'll be there right away
Luke:who was that
Jamie:dad i'll explain on the way

Scene 8
Phils car
Phil is talking with a paramedic

Phil:is my wife allright
Paramedic:we dont know it's pretty serious
Phil:what about Rachel
Paramedic:she got out and is fine
(phil starts to cry)

[baileya]

wow very good.

[big bro fan]

Thanks basically the history between mike and phil was that phil's mum and dad owned the garage where phil worked then when phil's mum and dad left they sold it to mike who fired Phil and then recently mike sold half to Phil and the diffrences were forgotten.

[big bro fan]

Episode 7

Scene 1
Hospital
Phil is talking with Louise

Phil:i'm glad your ok now
Louise:me to i don't know what would have happned if i had lost you
Phil:well we dont need to think about it
Louise:yeah your right you should go to the new club opening it's only just started
Phil:i'm not bothred the doc said you should be allowed out soon
Louise:can you get Rachel to come here
Phil:i'll try

Scene 2
Sapphire
The club is in full swing every onefrom forebridge has turned up

Sid:(on phone)hello yes this is Mr woods what yeah ok i'll be right there(puts phone down)Paul
Paul:yes boss
Sid:i need you to look after the club and lock up for me
Paul:sure thing boss

Scene 3
Hospital
Louise is in bed there's a knock on the door

Louise:come in
Rachel:you wanted to see me
Louise:yeah i know what i did was wrong
Rachel:no i was wrong i should'nt have come back
Louise:well i suppose your right but you could be more nicer
Rachel:i could'nt do that
Louise:why not
Rachel:because i'm leaving
Louise:well if that's your choice then i want us to be friends before you leave
Rachel:it's a deal(hug)here's the money
Louise:thanks have a safe trip
Rachel:i will and who knows in the future i could come back and we could carry on being friends(leaves)

Scene 4
Jamie's car
Jamie is on the phone

Jamie:so mum's allright
Phil:yeah she should be out in a few days
Jamie:me and luke are on are way see you in a bit

Scene 5
Sapphire
Paul is talking with Tina

Paul:so i have to stay a bit late
Tina:well i'll go home and you know get things ready(kisses paul)dont be long
Martin:i reckon you got the right bird there mate
Paul:she's special
Martin:yeah i feel the same way about Vannessa then we had Bradley and it bought us closer together
Paul:so when you got her pregnant did you marry
Martin:of course
Paul:thanks bruv

Scene 6
Hospital Rachel's room

Sid:you allright darling
Rachel:fine dad
Sid:doctor said we can go home
Rachel:i'm not going home
Sid:where else are you going to go
Rachel:to mum's
Sid:what
Rachel:to mums house see roxanne and dawn mum and mickey
Sid:well i'll get you booked on the first flight tommorow
Rachel:thanks dad

Scene 7
Hospital
Louise is with Phil Luke and Jamie

Louise:thanks for coming boys
Luke:anything for you mum
Louise:well now your dad's working full time at the garage we thought it the right time to tell you that the pub is yours
Jamie:both of ours
Louise:and the girls can help out
Jamie:what about you
Louise:your dad rang Scott i'm going to start work there
Luke:thanks mum

Scene 8
Paul and Tina's house

Cloths are all over the floor Paul and Tina are kissing passionatly in the bed

Tina:to the baby
Paul:to the baby(starts kissing tina)

[Rain_]

This is turning out great. Post more soon

[big bro fan]

Just to say that the next episode is up tommorow or tonight mostlikey tommorow here is whats happeing

There is two new arrivals on the street for alfie
the greyhound has its first night under new management but neither manager can agree on the name of the pub which ends in a intresting way
Lucy is in hospital but is in for a suprise from Phil

[bakedbean]

lookin good

[big bro fan]

Episode 8

Scene 1
Tina's bedroom
Tina is getting dressed Paul is in bed

Tina:that was great last night
Paul:i know
Tina:so i suppose i had better get a test
Paul:yeah but dont do it till tommorow
Tina:why
Paul:because you wont find out if your pregnant it is to soon
Tina: oh
Paul:plus it means that we can have a couple more attempts at it
(Tina gets back into bed they start kissing)

Scene 2
Hospital
Phil is asleep at Louise's bed

Louise:wake up
Phil:what oh sorry must of dozed off
Louise:you should go home get in the garage it will do you good
Phil:Mikes given me the week off
Louise:that's nice of him
Phil:i want to do something nice for you but i dont know what
Louise:do you remember when we got married and i said i dont want a honeymoon because i'm happy as long as i have got you
Phil:yeah
Louise:it's still the same
Phil:you have just given me a great idea(kisses her)see you later

Scene 3
Greyhound[bar]
Luke and Jamie are hard at work

Luke:this place needs a new name
Jamie:like what
Luke:the bear
Jamie:that's rubbish,besides i like the name nan gave this place it's name you know what she's like
Luke:i know but were the owners now
Jamie:so
Luke:well i'm changing
Jamie:no your not
Luke:i own half
Jamie:me too and your not changing it
Luke:change the name
Jamie:make me
Luke:allright tonight openong night me you darts best three out of five
Jamie:deal

Scene 4
Alfie's house
Alfie is cleaning the house

Alfie:thanks for helping me love
Tina:no problem grandad
Alfie:i hope she likes me
Tina:why
Alfie:because i have'nt had female company since your nan left me
Tina:oh,whens she coming
Alfie:tommorow

Scene 5
Phonebox
Phil is on the phone

Phil:yes that's two for mr sullivan ok thanks

Scene 6
Hospital
Louise is with the doctor

Louise:come on then tell me how bad it is
Doc:well the good news is that you can go home today
Louise:that’s fantastic phil will be happy that reminds me I had better call my sister she said she wants to come and see me

Scene 7
Greyhound
Jamie is winning the darts

Jamie:and a double two wins the game(throws dart)and he does it
Shelly:oh I’m so happy for you(she kisses him)

Scene 8
Hospital
Phil is picking Louise up from the hospital

Louise:nothing like relaxing in the pub
Phil:your not going to the pub
Louise:what do you mean
Phil:were going on vacation
Louise:where
Phil:you me Hawaii two weeks and longer if we decide
Louise:what about my sister
Phil:well she did’nt want to not see you so she’s catching a plane and meeting us there

Scene 9
Alfie is on the phone

Alfie:so you will be here tomorrow
Hazel:yes I can’t wait to see you you sexy thing
Alfie:(goes red)


Just to let you know hazel is one of those really lively people Alfie is still in his fiftys and Hazel is in her early fiftys so romance could be on the cards but I’m not giving anything away.

[baileya]

get in there alfie!

[Rain_]

Alfie and Hazel sittin in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G

[big bro fan]

All i can say is wait till christmas there love is going to go one step further but may end in tears.

[big bro fan]

I was thinking that there are some characters in ForeBridge that we have'nt heard about yet so here is a bit about them all


Phil sullivan:is married to Louise and owns half the garage.Had massive feud with Mike when his mum sold the business to Mike but they are now friends has two sons Jamie and Luke and a daughter who we have not yet met but i will tell you about her anyway.Also Phil's parents are currently living in Spain they are Frank and Linda.

Louise sullivan:is married to Phil and has two sons and a daughter she works in the postoffice and has a sister who she has not seen in years except for the telephone calls they have.

Jamie sullivan:Owns half of the pub. His girlfriend is shelly they live with Phil and Louise upstairs of the pub saved his dad from killing Mike owen

Luke sullivan:younger brother to Jamie and is going out with Lisa Owen Mike's daughter

Sam sullivan:Phil and Louise's daughter has not been seen for years because she went travelling around the world but may come back


Mike owen:Mike is married to lynn and have a son dennis with whom he owns the garage with and a daughter lisa.

Lynn owen:married to Mike works out of forebridge as a hair dresser

Dennis owen:sexiest man on the estate all the girls want him has been known for one night stands owns garage with dad Mike.

Lisa owen:is a student and is dating Luke sullivan


Sid woods:has a daughter rachel who left to live with mum gina in france also has a son mickey and two more daughters dawn and roxanne also used to own nightclub sapphire untill it was burnt down but came back and re-opned it.


Sheila cole:married to Brian and usually spends her time with sister in law betty

Brian cole:married to Sheila and works in the local park but spends other time in the bookies with brother bob

Bob cole:brother to brian married to betty

Betty cole:married to bob


Martin wilkinson: owns the bookies with wife vannessa have one son bradley

Vannessa wilkinson:married to martin bit of a shop a holic

Bradley wilkinson:serious competition to Dennis as is a ladys man


Alfie evans:Tina's grandad known and liked by every one
Tina evans:lives with boyfriend paul


Scott phillips: owns postoffice with wife denise and has son paul best mates with robbie

Denise phillips:married to Scott runs post office

Paul phillips:currently dating tina


Hazel moon:lives with Alfie and grandson danny

Danny moon:new competion for dennis and bradley lives with nan hazel


Dave scott: owns the cafe with wife judy

Judy scott: owns cafe with husband Dave

i know your probably thinking about emily and robbie they should be back soon.

[big bro fan]

Sorry i have not posted anything recently please could you give me some feed back.

Episode 9

Scene 1
Tina bedroom
Tina is busy getting dressed while Paul is in bed

Tina:last night was great
Paul:yeah it was
Tina:should i take the test today
Paul:yeah but wait till i finish work ok
Tina:wow
Paul:what do you mean wow
Tina:you know the fact that you want to be there with me
Paul:what can i say i'm a ladys man

Scene 2
Cafe
Alfie is having tea with Judy

Judy:so she is coming today
Alfie:yeah about five
Judy:fancy going for a drink later
Alfie:yeah allright i'll bring hazel with me

Scene 3
Greyhound
A women is talking with Luke

Luke:so you moving in round here
Lady:yes me and my grandson
Luke:what's your grandson like
Lady:well he is always a hit with the ladys give him the end of the week and he will be hooked with someone
Luke:allright i bet you a free drink that he could'nt win the sexiest man in forebridge award
Lady:where's it held
Luke:here at the greyhound tommorow night
Lady:better get that drink ready

Scene 4
Alfie's house

Alfie:(doorbell rings alfie jumps)coming
Lady:why hello goodlookin
Alfie:Hazel
Hazel:you betcha
Alfie:its so nice to finally meet you
Hazel:same here now about a cuppa
Alfie: ok bring your stuff in where's your grandson

Scene 5
Bookies
A man walks in and talks to Vannessa at the counter

Danny:allright darlin
Vannessa:not bad
Danny:whats a pretty women such as yourself doing stuck in here
Vannessa:your good
Danny:pardon
Vannessa:you got the right moves but i'm married and have a son
Danny:oh i am sorry i'll see you around

Scene 6
Greyhound
Luke is talking with Lisa

Lisa:how about dinner tonight
Luke:can't got work
Lisa:you've always got work
Luke:well you know that's what happens when you run a pub
Lisa:yeah same excuse as last time i'm off see you later maybe

Scene 7
Alfie's house
Alfie is sat with Hazel

Alfie:well erm er my its hot its hot in here
Hazel:it sure is(puts hands on his lap)
Alfie:well um oh wow
Hazel:shhh lets not talk it ruins the moment (kisses him on the cheek)
Alfie:your incredible
Hazel:well if you think im good with the guys you should see him with the ladys(start kissing)
Danny:nan you in(sees Alfie and her kissing)well nan i think this is a new record for you
Hazel:well i did learn from you

Scene 8
Greyhound
Luke is serving Sid

Sid:so whats with you today
Luke:oh just Lisa she says i never have time for her
Sid:what you want is a job in the afternoon that will me your free when she is
Luke:yeah but how am i going to do that
Sid:here's my card see me any time you like

Scene 9
Tina Paul bedroom

Tina:so if it is a boy then we are going to call it scott like your dad
Paul:and a girl lucy
(Tina looks at the test)

Tina:oh my god
Paul:what is it
Tina:i'm not pregnant

[big bro fan]

SPOLERS COMING UP DONT READ IF YOU DONT WANT TO KNOW













Hazel and tina are planning to tie the knot in December but will it end in tears
Luke works for sid but ends in disaster
Paul and Tina get a Lodger from the street :eek:

[big bro fan]

Sorry about not having anything posted but i will have loads coming up really soon i promise. Also could you please let me know if you have any ideas on how i could change my soap thankyou.

[big bro fan]

Hope you enjoy this episode please could you tell me what you think because im starting to think its rubbish and may as well quit and do something else.

Episode 10


Scene 1
Paul and Tina house
(Paul is sat with Tina in the bedroom)
Paul:look i know you think its bad but we can try again
Tina: (angry)you what try again if i cant get pregnant the first time then what are the chances of it happening again
Paul:fine dont have the baby
Tina:what is that supposed to mean(stands up)i think that you should leave
Paul: (angry)look it is not my fault you cant get pregnant(sarcasticly)makes me wish i had stayed in Australia
Tina:get out
Paul:what
Tina:GET OUT
Paul:fine (leaves)
(Tina drops to the floor and starts crying)

Scene 2
Alfie house
(Alfie is about to eat his breakfast when Hazel comes in to the Kitchen)
Hazel:morning
Alfie: (jumps)what oh hazel(looks at clock)oh look at the time got to get to the bookies(leaves)
Hazel:but you have not eaten your breakfast
(just then Danny comes in)
Danny:allright gorgeous
Hazel:mornin flower
Danny:what you got planned today then
Hazel:thought i might go see the neighbours
Danny:nice you could'nt get me some spray why your out could ya startin to smell
Hazel: ok then

Scene 3
Sapphire
(Paul is at the bar cleaning)
Sid:Paul your a bit early
Paul:sorry Sid
Sid:so are you going to tell me whats wrong or should i guess
Paul:it's Tina she was going to have a baby
Sid:that's brilliant
Paul:yeah was going to
Sid: oh.well i'm sure you could try again could'nt you
Paul:well thats what i said but she bit me head off
Sid:well you need to think is this women something to you or is just nothing
Paul:what do you mean
Sid:well is she the one that you want to spend your life with or not
Paul: (goes silent)you genius
Sid:what
Paul:cant stop got to go
Sid:kids today

Scene 4
the bookies
(Alfie is with Martin)
Martin:so your afraid of her
Alfie:well no but i hav'nt had that kind of contact for a while
Martin:well i'm sure you will work it out i mean just be honest and see where it goes from there
Alfie:i think your on to something there
(Brian comes in)
Brian:allright Alfie
Alfie:not bad
Brian:how are you and Hazel getting on hear she touched your leg and kissed you
Alfie:who told you that
Brian:you know what sheila's like
Alfie:i just can't get the courage to talk to her
Brian:tell you what bring her round for tea tommorow then go back to your place and you know
Alfie:your on

Scene 5
Tina house
(Hazel is making a cup of tea for her and Tina)
Hazel:calmed down now
Tina:yeah thanks for coming round
Hazel:no problem
Tina:i dont get it
Hazel:whats that duck
Tina:why can't Paul see how i feel
Hazel:well i might not know much but i do know that you can try for another baby and if Paul is special to you then keep him close because any girl who see's him will have him like that just like my Danny
Tina:what do you mean like Danny
Hazel:the amount of times Danny has come downstairs in his underwear with a girl in bed upstairs you start to learn a few things
Tina:thanks Hazel you have been a great help
Hazel:anytime

Scene 6
Sapphire office
(Paul is busy on the phone)
Paul:yeah thats dinner for two tommorow at the blue moon(puts phone down and smiles)

Scene 7
Greyhound
(Brian Sheila and Betty are talking)
Sheila:i can't wait till tommorow
Betty:should be a nice dinner
Sheila:wonder what i should cook
Brian:not that spag bol gavee me food poisoning and the runs
Sheila:cheeky

Scene 8
Alfie's house
(Alfie is back)
Hazel:had a nice day
Alfie:not bad
Hazel:you have'nt seen Danny have you
Alfie:i sent him out for a bit
Hazel:why
Alfie:so we can have the place to ourselfs

[baileya]

good as usual dont be stupid your soaps doing fine!

[big bro fan]

Thanks that means a lot

[Rain_]

It's great. Don't you dare give up. I'm slowly introducing my workmates to the joys of SB and the scripts are a big bonus !!!

[big bro fan]

Thanks im glad you like it do you know how to get a rating

[big bro fan]

I will have a new episode up later today :cheer:

[big bro fan]

Episode 11

Scene 1
Upstairs postoffice
(Paul is talking with Denise)
Paul:thanks for letting me stay last night
Denise:well you are my son
Paul:dad still asleep
Denise:yeah wont be up for another half an hour yet,so why did'nt you stay with tina last night
Paul:well we um tried for a baby
Denise:thats great news
Paul:but it turns out she is'nt
Denise: oh
Paul:yeah so she got moody and told me that she does'nt want me any more
Denise:i'm sure she will see sense
Paul:dont worry i've got a plan

Scene 2
Alfie house
(Alfie is with Hazel drinking coffee)
Alfie:so you dont mind coming to dinner with me tonight
Hazel:not at all its a great way to meet people
(Danny comes in)
Danny:mornin nan Alfie
Alfie:allright son sleep well
Danny:fantastic(leaves)
Alfie:your going to have to do something about him
Hazel:why
Alfie:i dont want him walking around in his shorts first thing in the morning
Hazel: (laughs)i'll have a word

Scene 3
Greyhound
(luke is cleaning the bar)
Jamie:you aint done a good job have ya
Luke:well if you can do better(hands him the cloth)i'll be going cause i have had enough of you

Scene 4
Sapphire office
(Sid is on his phone)
Sid:yeah i think that we should have a big family business soon.....well when you want to come over thats fine see you darling take care bye
(there is a knock on the door)
Sid:come in
Luke:sorry to disturb you mr woods
Sid:not at all what can i do for you
Luke:if you want my half of the Greyhound then its yours
Sid:are you sure
Luke: possitive i would like the job you offred me
Sid:great come with me nd we can get the contract signed and you can start tonight
Luke:great(they both leave)

Scene 5
Garage
(Mike is talking with Dennis)

Mike:so what you got planned for tonight then son
Dennis:got a date
Mike:who with
Dennis:not saying
Lynn:hi darling(kisses Mike)
Mike:whats up
Lynn:well Lisa is going out with Luke tonight
Mike:but he has the pub to run
Lynn:apparently hes sold his half
Mike:your joking
Lynn:no Lisa just told me
Mike:Phil is going tp have a fit(looks at the phone)im going to have to tell him

Scene 6
Sapphire
(Betty Sheila Brian and Bob are having a drink)

Sheila:not many in tonight is there Sid
Sid:well you could say that business is going to get better
Betty:what do you mean
Sid:meet me at the pub tonight drinks on me
Brian:well thanks Sid
Bob:yeah that’s really nice of you

Scene 7
Café
(Judy is talking to Mike)

Judy:does Phil know
Mike:yeah I just told him
Judy:he aint going to be happy when he comes home
Mike:well whatever happens I’m behind him all the way

Scene 8
Greyhound
(Luke comes out all dressed up)

Jamie:where do you think your going
Luke: out
Jamie:but you have work tonight
Luke: oh no I have’nt

Scene 9
Mikes house
(Mike is on the phone)

Mike:Phil its worse than we thought
Phil:what do you mean
Mike:Sid woods has bought the pub
(the phone goes dead)
Mike:hello hello
Phil:im still here look watch Jamie don’t let Sid bully him into selling his half ill be home tomorrow

Scene 10
Greyhound

Jamie:but its your shift tonight I mean you do own half this place
Luke:no I don’t
Jamie:what
Luke:I sold it
Jamie: oh yeah to who
Sid:me
(whole pub goes silent)
Sid: put it there partner

[big bro fan]

Episode 12

Scene 1
Greyhound
(the whole pub is in silence)

Jamie:you cant sell the pub
Luke:why not
Jamie:because mum and dad gave it to us
Sid:yes your mum and dad did give it to you so Luke now owns half and if he wants to sell it he can
Jamie:but
Sid:Luke i need you at the club
Luke:sure thing boss
(Luke leaves Sid goes behind the bar)
Sid:free drinks for everyone

Scene 2
Mikes house
(Mike and Lynn are at the coffee table)

Mike:i cant imagine what Phil is going to do
Lynn:there's nothing he can do
Mike:if there is something that Phil wants doing then he will get it done

Scene 3
Greyhound
(the pub is back to its usual self)

Brian:well congratulations Sid
Sid:thankyou Brian
Bob:i hope you do a good job at this place its been here for as long as i can remember
Sid:well i'll try my best
Jamie:look there are customers
Sid:your capable are'nt you
Jamie:well you could do some work
Sid:look sell this place to me and you wont have to worry
(Jamie walks away)

Scene 4
Mikes house
(Mike is on the phone)

Mike:are you sure Phil thats a bit dangerous
Phil:he wants that pub then he can have it
Mike:when are you home
Phil:in an hour can you pick me up
Mike:no problem

Scene 5
Sapphire
(Luke is serving Lisa at the bar)

Lisa:you look so much better behind this bar
Luke:thanks
Lisa:how about a kiss
(they go to kiss but Jamie comes in)
Jamie:how could ya
Luke:look im not getting in to this either sit down and have a drink or get out
Jamie:when im done talking
Luke:security
(Security comes and drags Jamie off)

Scene 6
outside sapphire
(Security toss Jamie into the road)

Jamie:you'll pay for this
Mike:Jamie
Jamie:Mike what are you doing here
Mike:i'll explain in the car lets go

Scene 7
Greyhound
(Sid is talking with Luke)

Sid:so how was your first night
Luke:good
Sid:has the otyher girl taken over
Luke:yeah
Sid:so how about i buy you a drink and we can discuss plans
Luke:ok

Scene 8
Alfie house
(Alfie and Hazel are watching tv)

Alfie:what is that rackett
Hazel:well Dannys got a girl upstairs
Alfie:i aint having this
(Alfie goes upstairs)
Alfie:could you keep the noise do...(walks in)get some cloths on to think your doing it in my house
Hazel:whats the .....oh Danny what are you doing
Danny;i can explain
Hazel:how do you explain having it under someone elses roof
Danny:well um
Alfie:get some cloths on and get out
Danny:nan help me out here darlin
Hazel:im sorry but he is right

Scene 9
Greyhound
(Jamie is back behind the bar)

Jamie;Sid sorry about earlier
Sid:its ok
(Phil Louise and peggy and Roy come in)

Peggy:get oy from behind my pub
Sid:Peggy
Roy:you heard the lady get out
Phil:calm down mum
Sid:oh Phil nice to see you
Phil:look you own half the pub so we are just going to go and get are things and leave
Sheila:you can stay at our house Peggy
Peggy: thanks she
Roy:you think you got of lightly with Phil just wait till grant gets back tommorow

[big bro fan]

Episode 12

Scene 1
Greyhound
(the whole pub is in silence)

Jamie:you cant sell the pub
Luke:why not
Jamie:because mum and dad gave it to us
Sid:yes your mum and dad did give it to you so Luke now owns half and if he wants to sell it he can
Jamie:but
Sid:Luke i need you at the club
Luke:sure thing boss
(Luke leaves Sid goes behind the bar)
Sid:free drinks for everyone

Scene 2
Mikes house
(Mike and Lynn are at the coffee table)

Mike:i cant imagine what Phil is going to do
Lynn:there's nothing he can do
Mike:if there is something that Phil wants doing then he will get it done

Scene 3
Greyhound
(the pub is back to its usual self)

Brian:well congratulations Sid
Sid:thankyou Brian
Bob:i hope you do a good job at this place its been here for as long as i can remember
Sid:well i'll try my best
Jamie:look there are customers
Sid:your capable are'nt you
Jamie:well you could do some work
Sid:look sell this place to me and you wont have to worry
(Jamie walks away)

Scene 4
Mikes house
(Mike is on the phone)

Mike:are you sure Phil thats a bit dangerous
Phil:he wants that pub then he can have it
Mike:when are you home
Phil:in an hour can you pick me up
Mike:no problem

Scene 5
Sapphire
(Luke is serving Lisa at the bar)

Lisa:you look so much better behind this bar
Luke:thanks
Lisa:how about a kiss
(they go to kiss but Jamie comes in)
Jamie:how could ya
Luke:look im not getting in to this either sit down and have a drink or get out
Jamie:when im done talking
Luke:security
(Security comes and drags Jamie off)

Scene 6
outside sapphire
(Security toss Jamie into the road)

Jamie:you'll pay for this
Mike:Jamie
Jamie:Mike what are you doing here
Mike:i'll explain in the car lets go

Scene 7
Greyhound
(Sid is talking with Luke)

Sid:so how was your first night
Luke:good
Sid:has the otyher girl taken over
Luke:yeah
Sid:so how about i buy you a drink and we can discuss plans
Luke:ok

Scene 8
Alfie house
(Alfie and Hazel are watching tv)

Alfie:what is that rackett
Hazel:well Dannys got a girl upstairs
Alfie:i aint having this
(Alfie goes upstairs)
Alfie:could you keep the noise do...(walks in)get some cloths on to think your doing it in my house
Hazel:whats the .....oh Danny what are you doing
Danny;i can explain
Hazel:how do you explain having it under someone elses roof
Danny:well um
Alfie:get some cloths on and get out
Danny:nan help me out here darlin
Hazel:im sorry but he is right

Scene 9
Greyhound
(Jamie is back behind the bar)

Jamie;Sid sorry about earlier
Sid:its ok
(Phil Louise and peggy and Roy come in)

Peggy:get oy from behind my pub
Sid:Peggy
Roy:you heard the lady get out
Phil:calm down mum
Sid:oh Phil nice to see you
Phil:look you own half the pub so we are just going to go and get are things and leave
Sheila:you can stay at our house Peggy
Peggy: thanks she
Roy:you think you got of lightly with Phil just wait till grant gets back tommorow

[big bro fan]

Sorry about the episode 12 getting posted twice

[big bro fan]

The next episode is up tommorow

[big bro fan]

change of plan next episode up later today

[big bro fan]

Episode 13

Scene 1
Sheila house
(Jamie Phil Louise Peggy Roy Sheila and Brian are sat having breakfast)

Jamie:so whats the plan dad
Phil:i dont know son
Peggy:well that Sid Woods is gonna get whats coming to him
Sheila:i'm behind you all the way
Phil:look everyone lie low today the last thing we want is everyone questioning us
Louise;Sheila you dont mind do you
Sheila:not at all
Phil:should be here soon
Jamie:who
Phil:your uncle Grant

Scene 2
Sid Woods house
(Sid is watching the news with Luke)

Sid:are you going to see your family today
Luke:no
Sid:well i need you at the club this afternoon any problems call security
Luke:thanks boss

Scene 3
Cafe
(Tina is talking with Alfie)

Tina:Grant Sullivan know he is a hardman
Alfie:yeah
Tina:you would think that Sid would know not to mess with him
Alfie:he would'nt
Tina:what do you mean
Alfie:Grant was born when Sid left
Tina:well he is in for a shock

Scene 5
Bookies
(Danny is talking with Martin)

Danny:so you dont need any lodgers
Martin:no sorry mate
(Vannessa comes in screaming)
Martin:whats the matter
Vannessa:my uncle he has left us his house in Boston we can move when we want
Martin:are you serious
Vannessa:look(shows him the letter)
Martin:i'll book the plane
Danny:if your going to move abroad then who's gonna run this place
Martin:good point
Danny:well i will buy it off you
Martin: well were going to have to look for better offers but if there is none then this place is yours

Scene 6
Postoffice
(Denise is serving Sheila at the counter)

Denise:so how are they today
Sheila:excuse me but it is none of your business
Denise:sorry
Sheila:i should think so(leaves)
Scott:whats up with her
Denise:dont know

Scene 7
Alfie house
(Danny is in the kitchen with Hazel)

Hazel:well this business will be good for you
Danny: i know me and you can move out
Hazel:well you can but i um cant
Danny: what do you mean
(Alfie walks through the door and kisses Hazel)
Danny:nana are you two
Hazel:yes darling
Danny: well good for you(smiles)
Hazel:Danny might have the bookies
Alfie:serious
Danny: yep
Alfie:well done son

Scene 8
Greyhound
(there is no one in except for Vannessa)

Sid:where is everyone
Vannessa:no one wants to come in here after what you did
Sid: oh

Scene 9
Airport
(Phil is waiting)

Phil:where are you
Grant:you looking for me
Phil:good to see you
Grant:good to see you

[big bro fan]

Here is basically what is going to happen over the next few months and next year


Martin and vannessa are leaving with bradley
Paul is leaving

now to the good stuff

a new family is moving in more info on them coming soon
Phil and louise daughter is back
Robbie and emily are back from scotland
The bitch rachel is back with her brothers and sisters but will there dad be there
Hazel and Alfie tie the knot at christmas

[big bro fan]

next episode up later today here is whats happenin

grant goes to see luke
peggy has a heart to heart with sid
danny awaits news on the bookies
martin and vannessa have a farewell party in the greyhound with the sullivans making an entrance

[big bro fan]

here is the next episode

[big bro fan]

Episode 14

Scene 1
Airport
(Phil and Grant are talking)

Grant:i cant believe he would do this
Phil:how do you think i feel he's my son
Grant:i think its time me an im had a little talk

Scene 2
Sapphire office
(Sid is at his desk)

Luke:visitor mr woods
Sid:send em in then you and Paul have your lunch early
Luke:thanks boss
(Luke leaves visitor walks in)
Sid:Peggy what can i do for you

Scene 3
Greyhound
(Jamie is serving Roy)

Jamie:there you are grandad
Roy:thanks son
Jamie:so what you up to today
Roy:just go see Alfie Bob Betty go over the bookies stuff i used to do when me an your nan ran this place
Jamie:where is nan

Scene 4
Sapphire office
(Peggy is talking with Sid)

Peggy:so come on then how did you con him this time
Sid:what are you talkin about Peggy
Peggy:dont play stupid with me Sid it dont work
Sid:i did not con Luke he wanted to sell i offred he took simple as
Peggy:come off it you wanted that place ever since i got it
Sid;i'm not to blame
Peggy:dont try an play the innocent act it dont look good on ya
Sid:when we were dating i wanted half the pub so we could run it together
Peggy:an i nearly dell for it till Roy made me see what you where then you open this place
Sid:i loved you
Peggy:and i loved you but you opned this place to run me out of business

Scene 5
Cafe
(Luke is having lunch)

Grant:i thought i might find you here
Luke:uncle Grant
Grant:i aint here to hurt you i just want answers

Scene 6
Sapphire office

Peggy:so are you going to sell us the pub back
Sid:....no
Peggy:(stands up)then you leave me no choice

Scene 7
Bookies

Roy:this takes me back
Martin:shame it is'nt staying
Roy:what do you mean
Martin:i've sold it to some rich family me and vannessa are leavig so is Bradley
ROy:when you going
Martin:tommorow we are having a party at the greyhound come if you want
Roy:i think i will

Scene 8
Greyhound
(Jamie is busy getting things ready when his phone rings)

Jamie:allright darlin when you back.....next week cant wait to see you....bye

Scene 9
Sheila house
(Peggy is with Roy)

Peggy:where you goin
Roy:party at the pub
Peggy:well im coming
Grant:and me
Peggy:Grant come and give your mum a kiss
Grant:allright mum dad
Roy:where you been today
Grant:to see Luke
Peggy:what di he say

Scene 10
Greyhound
(part is in full swing)

Denise:im going to miss you
Vannessa:i know but take care
Denise:and you oh and take care of Bradley
Peggy:i'll be sad to see you go
Sid:get out of my pub
Peggy:Jamie can we stay
Jamie:course nan
Peggy:then i'll have a gin and tonic

[Bryan]

peggy! phil! grant! jamie! have the mitchells moved to forebridge? :lol:

[big bro fan]

no there based on people i know

[big bro fan]

I know that my names are ones you recognise from Eastenders so if you want i will get rid of them

[big bro fan]

Scene 1
Greyhound
[Sid is drinking heavily at the bar camera turns two show two empty whiskey botles]

Scene 2
Sheila's house
[Peggy Roy Sheila and Brian are eating toast]

Sheila:i reckon you stumpd Sid last night
Peggy:what makes you say that
Brian:well the way we walked in and showed him who's boss,i mean he spent most the night down the other end of the bar
Peggy:well maybe he will se we mean buisness

Scene 3
Greyhound
[Sid is writing on a piece of paper]

Sid:should anyone find this piece of paper take note that i am giving the pub back to the sullivans any paperwork will be changed into there name
[put the pen and paper down and walks over to the door]
Sid:goodbye[leaves]

Scene 4
Outside
[Sid is locking up]

Luke:Mr woods where you off
Sid:maybe heaven maybe but the way i lived my life i would'nt count on it
Luke:what do you mean
Sid:your nan showed me up last night infront of the whole estate
Luke:yeah but
Sid:listhen she also made me realise how much this place means to her,and when you still have feelings for someone you think of them before yourself,now run along and give these to your nan and grandad im off[leaves Luke standing there puzzled]

Scene 5
Alfie's house
[Alfie and Hazel are waiting for urgent news]

Alfie:where is the lad i can't wait anylonger
Hazel:give him time he's probably having a drink to celebrate

Scene 6
Outside the bookies
[Danny is walking very slw and looking unhappy]

Tina:[shouts]Danny
Danny:what oh hi Tina
Tina:whats up?
Danny:nothing much
Tina:you look do down
Danny:[looks at the bookies then back at tina]like i said darling nothing's wrong
Tina:you did'nt get the bookies did you?
Danny:no
Tina:it's not the end of the world
Danny:yeah it is,if i had that place then i would have somewhere to live
Tina:i thought you lived with me grandad
Danny:well he caught me um you know and he wants me out
Tina:[thinks for a minute]well you could move in with me and Paul
Danny:really
Tina:course
[Danny smiles]
Danny:well when can i move in
Tina:now i'll give you a hand
[Danny hugs Tina they walk off]

Scene 7
Sapphire
[Paul is cleaning the bar Sid opens the door]

Sid:take the rest of the day off
Paul:oh um thanks boss
Sid:dont mention it[Puts hand on Paul's shoulder]take care allright
Paul:yes boss
[Paul leaves Sid locks the doors behind him]

Scene 8
Sheila's living room
[Luke is telling Peggy and Sheila the story of what Sid said]

Luke:and then he said to give you these
Peggy:that's strange
Sheila:did he say why?
Luke:no
Peggy:did he tell you where he was going?
Luke:well he said maybe heaven but he does'nt count on it
[Peggy looks suspicious]
Peggy:i'm going over the pub
Sheila:i'm comin....
Peggy;no you stay here i'll go
[Peggy leaves we hear the front door close]
Sheila:wonder what thats about

Scene 9
Sapphire bar
[Sid is drinking more whiskey and tipping all over the place as well]

Scene 10
Alfie's house
[Alfie and Hazel are sat at the table in silence]

Danny:nan
Hazel:in here darling
[Danny enters the kitchen followed by Tina]
Alfie:oh hello Tina
Tina:hi grandad
Hazel:come on then did you get it
Danny:no
[Alfie looks annoyed]
Hazel:what's up love
Alfie:nothing,look if you can't get anywhere to stay then[sighs]you can stay with us
Danny:that's allright Alfie
Alfie:why?
Danny:i'm moving in with Tina and Paul they have a spare room
Tina:come on lets go pack[They both leave]
Hazel:well that was unexpected

Scene 10
Greyhound
[Peggy is standing at the bar examing it]

Peggy:what's this[picks up the piece of paper]i give my half of the pub to the sullivans{she drops the paper and gets out her phone]..hi Roy look bring Phil Grant and Louise back now something aint right at the pub

Scene 11
Sapphire
[The place is soaking wet there is smashed glass everywhere]

Sid:good bye world{lights a match then in slow motion we see it hit the floor then the whole place goes up in flames Sid walks off to his oofice]

Scene 12
Alfie's house
[Danny brings his stuff downstairs and opens the front door]

Alfie:wait Danny i want to say something
Danny:go on then
Alfie:i'm sorry i treated you the way i did and i want you to know your part of the family
Danny:thanks[goes silent]grandad
[Alfie smiles Tina and Danny go out the door]
Danny:fancy a drink later
Alfie:go on then see you about seven

Scene 13
Greyhound
[Roy Grant Phil and Louise are back from town]

Roy:your right love somethings not right
Phil:why would he say he's going to heaven
Peggy;that's what i thought
Grant:i think we need to talk to someone who saw him last
Louise:maybe he's at the club
[Grant stops for a minute then runs out the door]

Scene 14
Forebridge

[Danny and Tina bump into Paul]

Tina:i thought you where at work
Paul:i was but i got the day off,anyway what are you to doing
Tina:Danny's moving into our spare room
Paul:well as long as you pay towards the rent it is'nt a problem
Danny:thanks Paul,i better get mys uitcasr home
Tina:i'll give you a hand, see you later babe[they kiss]
[Paul carrys on walking]
Grant:Paul Paul
Paul:what up Grant
Grant:have you seen Sid this morning
Paul;yeah at work but he gave me the day off
[Grant turns to look at the club to see smoke coming out the windows]
Grant:oh my god[he runs off to the pub Paul runs to the club entrance]

Scene 15
Greyhound
[Grant runs in]

Grant:the clubs on fire and Sid's in it
Peggy:what
[they run out the pub]

Scene 16
Sapphire
[most of the estate are gathred around some are trying to help Paul open the door]

Paul:it's no good
Grant:let me try{runs at the door with Phil]
Paul:man you guys are strong
Phil:there's no time
[Phil Grant and Paul enter the club]

Scene 17
Inside the club
[Everywhere is burning]

Grant:me an Phil will try and put this fire out you go to the office and get Sid

Scene 19
Outside
[Tina runs over to her grandad]

Tina:whats goin on
Alfie:Sid's trying to kill himself
Tina:has anyone gone in
Alfie:yeah Phil Grant
Tina:good
Alfie:and Paul
Tina:WHAT[she trys to run to the club but Alfie holds her back]
Alfie:Paul would'nt want you getting hurt

Scene 20
Inside the club
[the fire is out of control]

Grant:where going to have to bail
Phil:what about Paul
[a piece of the ceiling caves in]
Phil:we have to get out

Scene 21
Outside
[everyone is outside]

Tina:where's paul
Alfie:someone's coming out
[Phil Grant run out and duck on to the floor]
Peggy:BOYS
[a huge explosion goes off everyone ducks down except for Tina]
Tina:PAUL PAUL[she starts crying and trying to get to the fire]
Grant:it's not worth it he's dead

Scene 22
Sapphire
[it's later on and the fire fighters have finished putting the fire out]

Scene 23
Greyhound
[everyone is there]

Peggy:a toast to Paul and Sid
Everyone:Paul and Sid
Peggy:and may we wish Martin and Vannessa a safe trip to Australia
[Brian stands up]
Brian:and here is to the new landlady of the pub

Scene 24
Tina house
[Tina is alone in silence the camera fades away as we hear her crying it takes us outside the remains of the club]


Hope you enjoyed

[baileya]

wow big bro fan thats what i call brilliant!!!

[big bro fan]

thanks all my episodes are going to be like that from now on

[big bro fan]

hey this is a confirmed list of who is leaving Forebridge and new character plus when there leaving/entering Forebridge

Charcters leaving for good
Sid Woods
Paul Philips
Danny

characters leaving but possible return later on
Tina Evans

Returning characters
Emily
Robbie
Rachel Woods

Andfinally new characters
Michelle Woods-Sids Wife
Mickey Woods-Sids son
Dawn Woods-Sids daughter
Roxanne-Sids Daughter

and the Rodgers family

Max-Dad
Tiffany-Mum
Carl-son
Rob-son
Freddy-son
Steve-son
Sadie-Carls wife

[big bro fan]

Scene 1
Tina's bedroom
[Tina is sat in bed tears and running mascara down her face]

Danny:i made you some breakfast
Tina:what...oh thanks
[Danny puts the plate down then heads towards the door]
Tina:dont go
Danny:allright[sits on the edge of the bed]
Tina:so what have you got planned for today
Danny:not much what about you
Tina:well i need to glam myself up a bit
[they both laugh]
Danny;so are you going to stay in Forebridge
Tina:no i've got my grandad to think about
Danny:what if he wanted you to
Tina:well i dont know...anyway what about you what would you do if i left
Danny:well i could'nt afford this place so i would have to leave
Tina:where would you go
Danny:well my ex-wife would'nt want me back
Tina:you where married
Danny:got three kids
Tina:how old
Danny:2 4 and 6
Tina:how come you and your wife split up
Danny:she had an affair with someone so i left she's been begging me to go back ever since

Scene 2
Upstairs of the Greyhound
[Roy Peggy Louise Grant and Phil are busy moving back in]

Peggy:feel's good to be back where you belong
Roy:it does
Phil:Sid was nice to give us the Pub
Peggy:he was
Louise:who's running this place now
Peggy:well Jamie is starting college Luke's out of a job but i'm sure he will get one somewhere Phil's at the garage Louise your working at the cafe that just leaves Grant
Grant:what about you and dad
Peggy:were running the pub
Roy:but we could use another pair of hands if we decide to pop out somewhere
Peggy:your working with us then
Grant:great i'll go open up

Scene 3
Tina's house
[Tina walks into Danny's room there is stuff everywhere]

Tina:what's going on
Danny:i'm leaving i got a job in a garage and a flat
Tina:that's great news
Danny:you could come to if you wanted
Tina:i could'nt
Danny;where are you going to go
Tina:Scotland

Scene 4
Greyhound[bar]
[Everyone is talking abot Sid]

Sheila;he needs a funeral
Betty:well should'nt his family be there
Sheila:but there in Paris
Betty:we could contact them tell um and get them over here
Bob;sounds good to me
Brian:how about we go over there for a week stay in hotel then find them and take it from there
Sheila:well there's only one thing to say to that
Brian:what's that love
Sheila:bonjour Paris

Scene 5
Alfie's house
[Danny is with Hazel]

Hazel:are you sure
Danny:yes
Hazel:i'm going to miss you
Danny:i'll miss you to
[a taxi horn is heard from outside]
Danny:i better get going
Hazel;dont be a stranger
Danny:i wont

Scene 6
Outside
[we see Danny get into a taxi he waves to Hazel the car turns a corner and he's gone]

Scene 7
Tina's house

Tina:yeah to Scotland....great thankyou

Scene 8
Greyhound
[Phil walks into the bar]

Grant:should'nt you be at work
Phil:not open today
Grant:what do you think they will do with all that land
Phil:i dont know
Grant:well when Sids wife turns up the place the club was will be hers and the house
Phil:it's funny
Grant:what
Phil:first time that place burns Sid's not there second time he is
Grant:perhaps he did'nt want to miss it before he left

Scene 9
Sids house
[Sheila and Betty are looking for contact documents]

Sheila:good job you had that key
Betty:good job i'm his cleaner
Sheila:got em 123 eve street Paris
Betty:i wonder if who owns this house next will need a cleaner
Sheila:will you stop daydreaming come on

Scene 10
Greyhound
[Phil and Grant are at the bar]

Louise:is anyone upstairs
Grant:no
[Louise and Phil go upstairs]
Grant:lucky thing

Scene 11
Sheila's house

Brian:oh good your back
Sheila:did you book it
Brian:yes did you get the adress
Sheila:yes now when are we going
Brian:two days time
Sheila:good good
Brian:so what do you want to do
Sheila:it's quiet with out Peggy being here
Brian:Greyhound
Sheila:yeah
Brian:ring Bob and Betty
Sheila:of course

Scene 12
Airport
[Tina is with Alfie]

Alfie:have a good time
Tina:i'll tell mum you said hi
Alfie:good
Announcer:now boarding plane to Scotland
Tina:well that's me
Alfie:will i see you again
Tina:dont worry grandad i'll be back

Scene 13
Phil and Louise's bedroom
[they are both in bed together talking]

Phil: i love you
Louise:me too
Phil:i want to spend the rest of my life with you
Louise:yesterday made me realise
Phil:what?
Louise:that i love you and i want a family
Phil:me too
Louise: you'd better give Grant hand
[Phil gets dressed and goes downstairs]

Scene 14
Alfie's house
[Alfie arrives back home]

Hazel:are you allright love
Alfie;yeah i've got you
Hazel:and i've got you

Scene 15
Greyhound[bar]
[Grant is poring pints]

[camera focuses on Sheila]

Sheila;this is so exciting i've never been abroad
Bob:well dont forget we are going to deliver bad news
Brian:lets hope his missus will come back to England
Betty:here here

[camera goes back to the bar]

Phil:allright bro
Grant:yeah
Phil:you might be an uncle soon
Grant:great
Phil:dont tell mum i want it to be a suprise
Grant:i wont


Hope you liked it just to say that Grant's love life is soon to change :o

[big bro fan]

I've been doing some thinking about my soap and i was talking to someone they said that i should keep this soap but do another one as well but more original like not having so many names that have been used in other soaps. im happy to do it i just want to know what you think.

Just reply saying yes do two soaps or no stick with the one.

if mostly yes's i will have characters etc up later and info on the places etc. :lol:

[kirstienod]

I've just started reading this and its brill! Well done

[baileya]

big bro fan keep this soap so what if there is names in other soaps the same there not the same people. Anyway I like this.

[big bro fan]

Dont worry i am keeping this but i am writing something else as well

[big bro fan]

ok i have made a descion I am going to write eastenders for a while and then i am going to bring Forebridge back at christmas when it will be season 2

[big bro fan]

As sad as i am to say this i am giving up writing Forebridge i am going to write my EastEnders scripts and after christmas or maybe before i will have a brand new soap which will be totally original.

GOODBYE FOREBRIDGE

[baileya]

very silly idea big bro fan i always enjoyed reading forebridge

[big bro fan]

I know you were like the number 1 fan but its time to move on try other things plus in my new soap there may be some characters from Forebridge in it so look out for them

[big bro fan]

Could someone close this thread please