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sarahwelford
08-09-2005, 00:26
Hiya i am going to do a jake and chrissie fic. this is my first ever fic
Its set as if it was mondays episode.Few new characters aswell
Please give me your honest feedback
Kacey is chrissie and dens daughter she is 18
Upstairs in the vic
Kacey: You heard from mum
Sharon :No i have left message after message on her phone
Kacey :She will come back i know my mum she will not stay in the same outfit
Dennis :Maybe then we will get some answers
Sharon :Meaning?
Dennis : Why exactly did they arrest her?
Sharon : They just wanted help with there enquires,
Dennis : But she has a motive he got zoe pregnant
kacey : That would mean you had a motive for killing him then
Sharon : I am worried about her
Kacey : I am going to open the pub
Dennis : I will come sharon
Sharon : I will follow you down
HOTEL
Jake : You ok?
Chrissie : Much better thanks, I could nt belive it when i saw you
Jake : I would nt let you face this alone
Chrissie : really?
Jake : I would nt let you face this alone
Chrissie : So your coming back to walford with me then?
Jake : Yes
Chrissie : What about jonny?
Jake : I will talk to him
Chrissie : Well in that case i have something to tell you
Jake : Oh sounds intresting
Chrissie : When you left my erm daughter came over to stay with me.
Jake : You have a daughter
Chrissie : I would of told you its just you left and well i never heard from
you and well i
Jake : Its ok i understand
Back at the vic
Kacey dennis in the pub opening up
Kacey: So you think mum did it?
Dennis :No i never said that
Kacey : You did nt need to its written over your face whenever she is mentioned
Dennis : Things just dont add up like she said he came back and stuff
Kacey : But mum she loved dad she would nt of done that would she
Dennis : You dont think she is capable
Kacey : if she had something to gain
Dennis (laughs) Oh all heart she got this place
Kacey : He signed that over to her
Dennis : When? Why did she want to sell it? Why was she planning on going to spain
Kacey : she missed the sangria
Dennis and kacey laugh as sharon comes walking in
Sharon : Dont mind me
Dennis : Sorry
Kacey : Yes sorry sharon
Sharon : Going to paulines
Dennis : We will open up babe
Sharon leaves
Hotel
Jake : So this daughter of yours she anything like you?
Chrissie :She has my gorgeous good looks my golden curley hair my strong mind She is very much her own person
Jake : Oh my god 2 of you walking around how will i cope
Chrissie : Ey cheecky (kisses him) We should get going kacey will be worrying
Vic
Kacey : We should open up its time
Dennis : Suppose its about time we let the vultures in
Kacey : Lets have bet who you think the first person threw the door will be
Dennis : I know who it will not be
Kacey : I say Dot
Dennis : Oh dots a loevly lady
Kacey : If she was 20 years younger hey dennis
Dennis goes to open the door
Dennis : The only woman for me is (dot comes walking in) Dot
Kacey just laughs
Dot : I have been so worried you have all been in my prayers
Dennis : Thanks dot
Dot : Sharon or Chrissie not about?
Dennis : Nope sharon over paulines and chrissie not come back yet
Kacey : But she has been released
Dot : Maybe i should go see Sharon
Kacey : Yeah you do that
Paulines
Sharon : Chrissie has not phoned or been home all weekend
Pauline : She not even contacted Kacey
Sharon : No the thing is Kacey is not even worried
Pauline : She is only 19 maybe she just does nt wanna show it
Sharon : No her and dennis was having a right old laugh befor
Pauline : Everyone grieves in diffrent ways
Sharon : Yes but Kacey is dens real daughter i am his adopted one and she does nt even care
Pauline : You where his princess
Dot : Only me just been to the pub they said you was here
Pauline :The pub is open
Dot : Yes kacey and dennis opened it
Pauline : But the body was found on riday its only monday
Pub
Gary : So You ok?
Kacey : Yes fine really i am
Gary: Ok if there is anything we can do
Kacey : You seen my mum
Minty : Not since she got arrested
Everyone goes quiet when Chrissie and Jake walk in
Kacey : Where have you been?
Jake : Take it this is kacey
Kacey : And you are?
Chrissie : This is jake
Kacey : the jake who left you
Chrissie : Kacey not here your causing a scene
Kacey : I am you get arrested then you dont come home the whole weekend you come in here with a new man on your arm after your old one has been murdered,
Well if people thought you did nt kill den they do now.
I have been here all weekend trying to think to myself if you could of done some thing like this, And i thought no she really really loved my dad and now you come in here with the first man who pays you any attention.
You slag (Runs off)
Chrissie : Kacey please kacey
Dennis : Satisfied you should of run why you had the chance cause when i find the evidence you will be going down for a long time
squillyfer
08-09-2005, 16:56
This is good do more soon
xXxJessxXx
08-09-2005, 17:04
cool. good start
Chloe-Elise
09-09-2005, 18:56
Its really good, please carry on :)
xStephaniex
10-09-2005, 12:30
wow babes its amazing !!! very good work keep it up :p x x x
sarahwelford
10-09-2005, 16:53
part 2
Jake : Ok ok the show is over
Chrissie : I cannot believe that my own daughter thinks i
Jake : She is angry you have been away for two days with no contact with her
Chrissie : Yes and Dennis has been turning her against me
Jake : Lets go upstairs
Chrissie : Mo can you run the bar
Mo : Yes sure good to see you back
Chrissie : Thanks Mo
Jake and Chrissie walk upstairs
Kacey is sat outside on the bench when Dennis goes over.
Dennis : You ok?
Kacey : How can she just swan in like nothing has happened?
Dennis : I am not sure maybe its how she is coping
Kacey : What by going out and getting herself a toyboy
Dennis : Maybe you should talk to her
Kacey: You have changed your tune you thought she did it
Dennis : Yes but you have already lost your dad you do not want to loose your mum
Kacey : I got you and Sharon
Dennis : Yes but Chrissie might need you now
Kacey : She got Jake
Dennis : Please go and talk to her for me
Kacey: Where you going?
Dennis : Have to go see some one
Kacey : You are coming back
Dennis : Yes of course I am I am not leaving my little sister god only knows what you will do
Dennis walks of and Kacey walks back towards the pub
In the pub
Mo : You ok?
Kacey : Mum about
Mo : She went upstairs
Kacey : With Jake?
Mo : Yes Kacey Chrissie would never of killed your dad
Kacey : Maybe maybe not
Mo : And Chrissie stayed ours that night with Zoë and Stacey saw her
Kacey : Yes so they say
Pauline Sharon and dot are all sat having a cup of tea
Sharon : I should get back cannot leave Dennis and kacey to do it all
Dot : She looked like she had the weight of the world on her shoulders kacey
Sharon : It must be hard for her I mean she came here had a new brother and sister
We did not even know about her and then this happens
Pauline : Well she has you and Dennis looking out for her
Dot : Yes but at least she had them years with him in Spain
Dennis come sin
Dennis : Chrissie is back
Sharon : I should go over
Dennis : Leave it a bit babe her and kacey had words
Sharon : What about?
Dennis : Well Chrissie came back with someone
Sharon : Who?
Dennis : Jake Moon
Dot : Oh I say
Dennis : I need to pop out some where will come back here for you ok babe
Jake and chrissie are kissing when kacey comes in
Kacey : Don’t mind me
Chrissie : Kacey I am really really sorry about not coming straight home
Kacey : I was so worried I didn’t know if you was in trouble or anything
Chrissie : I should of phoned
Kacey : But you didn’t
Jake : Its more my fault I thought it was best that she lay low for a while
Kacey : I bet you did
Chrissie : Please its not Jake’s fault he was there for me
Kacey : And I wasn’t that what your saying
Chrissie : No your twisting what I am saying
Kacey : Your husband my dad was found dead and you go away for a dirty weekend
Chrissie : Its not like that
Jake : Really it wasn’t
Kacey : Den was found underneath the pub and here you are snogging another man
Chrissie : What has Dennis been saying? Twisting you against me
Kacey : Dennis told me to come and talk to you
Jake : Maybe I should go
Chrissie : No you don’t
Jake : I need to see Jonny and see Alfie I will come back later
Jake walks out, Kacey walks over closes the door
Kacey : Just you and me now mum
DID YOU KILL MY DAD
squillyfer
10-09-2005, 16:59
oooooooh more soon
Jessie Wallace
10-09-2005, 17:50
It's good, well done.
xXxJessxXx
10-09-2005, 19:50
Interesting... its really good more soon please :)
sarahwelford
10-09-2005, 21:32
Outside
Billy is walking threw the square
Dennis : How is sam?
Billy : Like you care
Dennis : I was wondering are you going to visit her today
Billy : Yes
Dennis : Well ask her if I could go and visit her
Billy : What for?
Dennis : I need to ask her a few things
Billy : You think she will want to see you, Chrissie is the reason she is in there
Dennis : Please Billy I am on your side
Billy : What you mean by that
Dennis : Just let me go and see Sam I may be able to help
Billy : I will ask her ok but I am not promising anything
Dennis : Thanks Billy
In the vic
Kacey : Tell me the truth you may be able to sweet talk lover boy round
Chrissie : Please babe
Kacey : You cannot answer me because you killed him
Chrissie : I never killed den I swear
Kacey : You know what your word means nothing to me anymore
Chrissie : You may not trust me but the police they let me go you think if I did kill den then they would let me walk
Kacey : I don’t know what to think anymore
Chrissie : I am your mum
Kacey : And I have just lost my dad if you did do what people and Sam are saying then I will end up loosing you to
Chrissie : You will not loose me
Kacey : Look what happened when you got released you went with Jake
Chrissie : I am sorry about that
Kacey : You could of phoned text anything but you never
Chrissie : I could not face it everybody whispering about me
Kacey : But things don’t add up you said you saw den
Chrissie : I was protecting Sam
Kacey : Why was you protecting Sam
Chrissie : I suppose in a way I knew that night when I went to the slaters some thing happened between Sam and Den
Kacey : So you knew she killed him and yet you did nothing
Chrissie : No you are twisting things
Kacey : You knew Sam did some thing what you think she did put him in a taxi and waved him goodbye
Chrissie : I knew she wanted revenge
Kacey : But that’s stupid he took her pub yes but he got another girl pregnant if anyone wanted revenge it would have been you
Chrissie : No I was upset about that but I loved him
Kacey : I know what your like mum we are both the same in many ways and I know if I was put in that position I would of wanted revenge
Chrissie : No I never
Kacey : You destroyed anything Sharon ever believed in about her dad
You pushed him and pushed him and you knew the only way to get to den was to bring Sharon back
Chrissie : I could not take it anymore it was not meant to end like that i just lost it
Carrie Bradshaw
11-09-2005, 18:40
This is great! Can't wait to read more!! :D
sarahwelford
11-09-2005, 19:23
Kacey : lost it what you mean
Chrissie : I got Sharon back and she heard everything about how den had took the pub from Sam got Zoë pregnant and made him lie about how badly he treated all three of us
Kacey : What did you do
Chrissie : He left and went after Sharon, then when he came back he was so angry he ran at me grabbed me and he pushed my head into the fruit machine Zoë tried to get him of but she couldn’t
Kacey : So what happened?
Chrissie : erm
Kacey : Mum what happened
Chrissie : Sam she hit him he fell to the floor. I just thought we have to get out so I grabbed Zoë and we ran we ran and never stopped we ran to the slaters.
Stacey answered the door we went in and Sam she never came
Kacey : You just left Sam in the Vic
Chrissie : I thought she followed us I was so scared to go back I thought he would kill me
Kacey : But instead dad got killed
Chrissie : I never Killed him
Kacey : No but the next day Sam what did she say
Chrissie : She said Den had left and signed the pub over to me
Kacey : But Sharon she said he would never of left the pub but you believed he had signed it over
Chrissie : Den bought the Vic for Sharon and once she had heard what he had done to everyone she dis owned him he had nothing I saw the anger I believed what she said
Kacey : But
Chrissie : For all I knew he had ran of
Kacey : But non of it makes sense
Chrissie : You think I would lie to you
Kacey : oh I don’t know how about not telling me that I had a brother and 2 sisters
Chrissie : That was dens place to tell you they are his kids
Kacey : But you’re my mum You never thought to mention it
Chrissie : Please don’t
Kacey : I don’t mean anything to you do I
Chrissie : Of course you do
Kacey : I am sorry I am just scared I thought when you did not come back you left me and I already lost dad I would have no idea what I would do if I lost you
Chrissie : I am not going anywhere
Kacey : Promise
Chrissie : I promise
Kacey : You should go down to the pub show your face we have not got anything to hide
Chrissie : Sharon around
Kacey : Well she went over to Pauline’s probably round in a bit
Chrissie : I should go see her
Kacey : She will come round later
Chrissie : Ok what would I do without you (walks out)
Kacey : Get away with murder
In the pub
Kat walks in
Mo : You ok Kat
Kat : I heard Chrissie was back
Mo : Yes
Kat : I will go threw
Mo : NO KAT YOU CANT
Chrissie : Its ok Mo punters need serving
Kacey has heard this and goes and stands on the landing
Kat : Where have you been?
Chrissie : I had to get away
Kat : Stacey has been so worried she gave you a false alibi and you go missing for two days
Chrissie : Yes well I am back now and I am very very grateful for what she did
Kat : If she gets into trouble for lying to the police for you
Chrissie : Tell her I am very grateful please
Kat walks out Chrissie goes to the front of the pub
Kacey gets her mobile out and sees Stacey’s name
Kacey : Hiya Stacey its Kacey, I was wondering you want to go and do some thing. Why don’t you come over here we got loads of beer. i think its about time me and you got to know each other a little better
(puts phone down)
Kacey has an evil smirk on her face
This is great, post more soon!
sarahwelford
11-09-2005, 23:51
Downstairs in the pub
Mo : Chrissie if you want to go and lie down I can cope down here
Chrissie : I need to keep busy thanks mo
Mo : Kacey and you ok she did not mean what she said
Chrissie : Yes we talked I mean the police let me go
Mo : Yes I don’t think you did it
Kacey comes into the bar
Kacey : That’s what is so good about you Mo so trusting of people even when they don’t deserve it
Mo : Every body deserves a second chance
Kacey : Depends on what they done (Stares at Chrissie )
Chrissie : You are ok darling me and Mo can manage
Kacey : Oh I am waiting for Stacey
Chrissie : Stacey what Stacey coming for
Kacey : Well I thought with me living here for good now well I need friends and Stacey is well close to my age and we have been out a few times
Chrissie : Oh right
Stacey comes in looking little worried
Chrissie : Can I get you two a drink
Kacey : 2 glasses of white wine
Chrissie : Stacey is only 16
Kacey : I will not tell if you don’t, Stacey over here
Stacey : Hiya
Kacey : Hi I got you a glass of wine that ok
Stacey : Erm if that’s ok
Kacey : Yes mum is cool about it anything for you
Chrissie : Here you go
Stacey gets purse out
Kacey : On the house least we can do
Chrissie : Stacey its ok thank you
Kacey : How about me and you go upstairs and well get to know each other better can we have the bottle please
Chrissie : I am a little tiered maybe I could join you
Jake comes in
Kacey : Oh no that’s ok here comes lover boy anyway you stay here and chat to him The bottle of wine
Chrissie gives Kacey the bottle of wine
Stacey and Kacey go upstairs
Jake smiles at Chrissie
Chrissie : You get everything sorted
Jake : Could not find Alfie so went to see jonny he was cool about me staying said his problem was never with me
Chrissie : Great so your staying
Jake : For as long as you need me
Chrissie : How about you stay here then with me and kacey
Jake : Oh Chrissie I want to be here for you but do you not think that’s rushing things and Kacey will not be pleased about it
Chrissie : Me and Kacey talked and she understands now and its not about me and you, I feel safe when ever you are near me and I really missed you
Jake : Only if its ok with Kacey
Upstairs
Stacey : Bet your glad Chrissie came back heard about the show before you put on
Kacey : yes I was really worried but then she came back and well the reason I got you here is I wanted to thank you so so much
Kacey has drank all the bottle of wine
Stacey : What for I have not done anything
Kacey : You stopped my mum from going to jail you gave her an alibi and I am so grateful for that lets raise our glasses to Stacey oh we ran out lets get some vodka
Stacey : She told you
Kacey : me and my mum do not keep secrets
Stacey : I was so worried when she never came back thought she had been kept in or some thing
Kacey : suppose she needed get away
Kacey starts to down vodka neat
Stacey: I did it for Zoë you got to protect your own
Kacey : So the night my mum never went to your place at all
Stacey : No
Kacey : What you think happened
Stacey : not sure
Kacey : Bit weird you lying for my mum well you wanted to protect your cousin but why give my mum an alibi
Stacey : Kat told me to
Kacey : Kat what she tell you to for
Stacey : Maybe we should get Chrissie
Kacey : Maybe I should get more vodka
Downstairs in the hall Jake Chrissie talking
Chrissie : Jake she will like you just like I do
Jake : I hope so cause I am here till you need me
Chrissie : Great (kisses Jake passionately kacey is coming down the stairs)
Kacey : Oh put her down you don’t know where she been
Chrissie : Kacey
Kacey : Oh yes you do you picked her up from the cop shop
Chrissie : Are you drunk
Kacey : I am in a pub
Jake : Maybe you should go for a lie down
Kacey : You cannot tell me what to do you aint my dad
Jake : I know I just want to help
Kacey : Can you bring him back No Just cause your screwing her doesn’t mean your taking my dads place
Chrissie : Kacey stop it please
Stacey comes down to see what’s going on
Kacey : I am going out stay away from me
Chrissie : What she been drinking
Kacey : I am here
Stacey : She had that wine I had 2 glasses and she drank half bottle of vodka
Can I go home please?
Chrissie : Yes of course darling what ever you want
Kacey : Maybe you should lie for her more often Stace get some beer out of it
Stacey runs out
Jake : What you talking about
Chrissie : Ignore her she is drunk
Kacey : Oh you not know about Stacey giving mum a fake alibi for the night of dens murder. If she lying to you about that what else she lying to you about
xXxJessxXx
12-09-2005, 15:43
Ooooo will he find out... this is good more soon
This is really good, post more soon. Wonder if Jake finds out?
Emma-Lou
12-09-2005, 21:27
This is excellent im hooked
Carrie Bradshaw
12-09-2005, 23:37
Just caught up - ooh, Kacey's so sneaky!! Whats Jake gonna say?
sarahwelford
13-09-2005, 23:42
Jake : Chrissie
Kacey : Oh I am going out for some fresh air ( walks out )
Jake : What did she mean
Chrissie : Maybe you should come upstairs
Jake : Chrissie
Chrissie : Please
Pauline’s
Sharon : Maybe I should go and see Chrissie do not want her thinking I don’t care
Pauline : You think she thought of you when she never came back
Dot : Oh Pauline Her husband has just died
Pauline : He never died he was murdered and she was arrested for it
Sharon : She has been released
Pauline : Yes and who is the arms she goes running into Jake Moon not a care in the world for you or her daughter
In the shop Dennis is inside buying some flowers
Dennis : Just these
Kacey : And a bottle of vodka
Dennis : Kacey you ok
Kacey : Me I am fine
Patrick : You want the vodka?
Dennis : yes please
Kacey : right thank you
dennis : No wait Kacey
Patrick : She ok
Dennis : Mind your own business
Outside
Kacey : She lied to me they all lied to me
Dennis : What’s happened
Kacey : She said she never
Dennis : Who did Chrissie
Kacey : Leave me alone
Dennis : Let me help
Kacey : You cannot help nobody can I know what I need to do
Kacey walks of carrying the vodka bottle
I love this script. Wonder if she tells Dennis?!
sarahwelford
14-09-2005, 10:59
Pub
Jake : What did she mean a fake alibi
Chrissie : Jake please I told you everything
Jake : yes and I know there is more to it
Chrissie : Trust me there is no more
Jake : what about all them times before I left you would start to tell me some thing and then stop
Chrissie : I was just upset den had left me
Jake : You do not have to be scared I have said I am here for you and I will be it does not matter what you have done
Chrissie : What you mean it does not matter what I have done
Jake : I am here to support you every step of the way but I need to know what happened
Chrissie : If I told you you would leave me
Jake : I would not Chrissie I promise you I would not leave you
Chrissie : Kacey she did not know what she was talking about
Jake : Well how about I go across and ask Stacey maybe she will tell me
Chrissie : You cannot do that
Jake : Why not
Chrissie : Please Jake the fewer people who know the better
Jake : well why don’t I give you some time to think about what you want to tell me
Chrissie: No please don’t go
Jake : What’s the point in me staying
Chrissie : You said you would never leave me
Jake : And I cannot be in a relationship when the woman I am with cannot trust me
Chrissie : This is not like someone nicked my dinner money Jake its serious
Jake : And you can tell me
Chrissie : It started when Dennis found Zoë and den in our bed he told me about it and then Zoë got pregnant and everything it just kind of escaladed. Den was walking around all smiles like the doting grandfather only he was the father of Zoë’s baby, throwing cash at the slaters opening bank accounts for the child. Zoë did not want the baby she came to me for help so I booked her in for an abortion its what she wanted to do.
Jake : You knew Zoë was carrying Den’s baby so when it all come out in the pub you knew
Chrissie : Yes
Jake : Oh well done that was a brilliant performance you put on acting all upset
You deserve an Oscar.
Chrissie : I knew Den had took the pub from Sam so she would want revenge and he had taken every last bit of respect Zoë had for herself and he took everything away from me. So I got Sam and Zoë on side
Jake : On side you say it like it’s a football game
Chrissie : We planned it we would go to scarlet opening night and we would all go back to the pub and show den what he had done to us all. I went back to the pub first acted drunk flirted with him and then there was a knock Den thought it was Pauline
Jake : But it was you Sam and Zoë
Chrissie : Yes but all three of us alone well we would not achieve anything the only thing den cared about was his darling little princess Sharon so I phoned her told her den was ill she came over and she heard what he had done to all three of us. Tricked Sam out of the pub ,Told Zoë to lie to Dennis say she was pregnant than told her she had to sleep with him he knew that Dennis would stay and Sharon would not stop him cause she could not have kids of her own. And then me he had hurt me so bad I wanted him to feel how bad it was to loose everything you had
Jake : But Den had Dennis and kacey
Chrissie : Den did not care about Dennis and he only wanted Kacey as a replacement for Sharon when we was in Spain. Sharon heard it all and she walked out he followed her he was gone a good 20 mins then when he came back he had this look of hatred on his face.
I had never seen him that angry he ran at me I was so scared he was strangling me around the neck he pushed me into the fruit machine. I was scared and then all I remember was Den lying on the floor Zoë had hit him with Pauline’s dog doorstop.
Jake : So Zoë killed him
Chrissie : I then I had to think fast told them to turn the lights out and go upstairs I was walking across and I said I may not be the first woman in your life but I am the last
He then risen from the dead again and said he would never let me be free so I picked the doorstop up and hit him with it.
Jake : You killed him
Chrissie : I hit him a second time but the first blow would have been the one that
Jake : You murdered Den
Mo : Chrissie can you come down please
Chrissie : Be right there, Jake please Jake please don’t be angry you asked me for the truth
Jake : We should go down I need a drink
Chrissie and Jake walk down stairs
Sharon and Dennis just come in the bar with Pauline dot Stacey and Kat are in alfie and Billy
Chrissie : You ok Mo what’s wrong
Mo : Somebody to see you
Police man: Chrissie watts
Chrissie : Can I help you
Police man : We need to ask you a few questions
Oh this is looking bad for Chrissie!! Brilliant script
squillyfer
14-09-2005, 17:05
yay she told him more asap
xXxJessxXx
14-09-2005, 17:17
oh Chrissie! hopefully she'll go down
this is great :)
Carrie Bradshaw
14-09-2005, 22:47
This is exciting, can't believe she told Jake everything! Wonder what the policeman wants?
sarahwelford
14-09-2005, 23:45
Chrissie stares at Jake
Policeman : Is there someone we could go
Chrissie : Sure upstairs follow me
Chrissie grabs Jake and he follows her upstairs
Pub
Sharon : Wonder what that’s about
Dennis : Not sure babe she will tell is if anything’s wrong
Pauline : Maybe they found something else about the murder
Upstairs
Chrissie : What’s happened has Sam said something
Police man: Is this your daughters bag
Chrissie looks inside
Chrissie : Yes why have you got it
Policeman : a woman found your daughter She has been attacked
Chrissie : Oh my god where is she how is she
Policeman : She is at walford general
Chrissie : I need to get to her
Jake : I will come with you
Policeman : Well I could take you both
Chrissie : Will she be staying in overnight
Jake : We should go see how she is then if she needs anything I can come
Chrissie : Ok I should tell Dennis and Sharon
Jake Chrissie follows the policeman downstairs
Chrissie : Sharon Dennis
Dennis : They caught up with you
Chrissie : No its about Kacey she has been attacked she is in walford general
Sharon : Oh we should come with you
Chrissie : Well I need someone to stay here and look after the pub
Dennis : Cant Jake do that we are family
Chrissie : Please
Sharon : Of course we will but phone as soon as you get news
Chrissie : Of course
Jake and Chrissie leave
Sharon : You ok babe
Dennis : Who she think she is telling us we cannot go and see our own sister
Sharon : Dennis why you giving Chrissie such a hard time
Dennis :Its just weird how Sam could kill and bury den all on her I mean Chrissie must have had her suspicions
Sharon : Chrissie has been a great friend to me and I will not have you bad mouthing her so either help me behind here or go away
Dennis : I am going to the hospital to see my sister
Sharon : Dennis
Mo : You ok seems like things are getting worse and worse for you
Sharon : Thanks for pointing that out to me mo
Mo : I am sorry I did not mean it
Sharon : No mo I am sorry we should get to work
Mo : If you wanted I could ask Kat to give me a hand behind here and you could go with Dennis
Sharon : I think Dennis needs time alone with Kacey but asking Kat to help is a great idea
Mo : Ok I will go ask her
Sharon : What can I get you Dot
Dot : Oh what was the police here for I mean I am not one to poke my noise in other peoples lives
Sharon : No of course not its Kacey she has been attacked
Dot : Oh I say cannot even work your own street without being attacked or murdered
Pauline : Dot
Outside
Dennis is sat outside having a smoke
Billy : Dennis
Dennis : Hiya how it go?
Billy : Sorry mate she said no
Dennis : Its really important I see her
Billy : Well there is nothing more I can do she said no and that’s it
Dennis : How she holding up
Billy : Great how you think
Dennis : I tried to help but if she will not see me there is nothing I can do
Billy : I am going to see her tomorrow maybe I could try again
Dennis : That’s all I ask
Billy : Heard the merry widow is back with a man on her arm she did not waste anytime
Dennis : She is not my concern at this moment in time
Billy : You want to talk
Dennis : No need to go some where ( walks of )
Hospital
Chrissie runs in followed by Jake and the police man
Chrissie : I am here to see Kacey watts
Receptionist : You a relative
Chrissie : I am her mum
Receptionist : Ok follow me I will take you to her
Chrissie : Jake come on
Jake : I think I will wait here
Chrissie : Please
Chrissie walks of and follows Jake
They get to kaceys room and Kacey is chatting to a policewoman
As they get closer they can hear Kacey
Kacey : You have to listen to me she did it She lied to me you everyone
This is really good, post more soon!
Carrie Bradshaw
15-09-2005, 13:44
Oh no, has Kacey told the police about Chrissie!! And :rotfl: at Dot not wanting to poke her nose in!!
angelblue
15-09-2005, 13:49
dot not want to poke her nose in thats an first no shes great
Yeah really good script babe well done :D
Fab! Just caught up :D More soon.
Emma-Lou
15-09-2005, 19:01
These are just so fab.can't wait to find out what happens
sarahwelford
20-09-2005, 23:18
sorry my computer has been broken i will get back to the story a.s.a.p
sarahwelford
24-09-2005, 15:35
Chrissie : Its ok baby I am here
Police: What is she saying
Chrissie : She has been attacked she is a little confused, Its ok mums here to look after you now
Police : I will be just outside
Chrissie : Thank you
Police man walks out
Chrissie : How are you feeling?
Kacey : Where is Dennis I need to see Dennis
Chrissie : he is on his way
Kacey : I am going to tell him
Chrissie : Tell him what
Kacey : That you killed den
Chrissie : Baby I loved den
Jake : I am going to get a drink anyone want one?
Chrissie : No thanks
Jake walks out
Kacey : I knew some thing was wrong you and Sam always fighting
Chrissie : That was because she was drinking to much
Kacey : No that was because you killed den
Chrissie :Why the police let me go then?
Kacey : I know you mum better than you think you can turn on them waterworks anytime you want to
Chrissie :Your upset I understand that your dad has died
Kacey : oh thank you so much for understanding
Chrissie : But I am your mum and if you go on like this you will loose me soon
Kacey : I have Dennis
Chrissie : You need me
Kacey : No I do not need you and I do not need dad.
Chrissie : You don’t mean that
Kacey : I am going to tell the police that Stacey gave you a fake alibi
Chrissie : If you do that I will go to jail
Kacey : Why would you go to jail if you did nt do it
Dennis comes in
Dennis : Not interrupting am i
Kacey : Mum was just leaving
Chrissie : I will go get your overnight bag and come back later
Kacey : Do not bother
Chrissie walks out and looks back at kacey hugging Dennis
Dennis : What happened?
Kacey : I was drunk and well bumped into the wrong people
Dennis : What was that all about
Kacey : With mum
Dennis : yeah
Kacey : Did you know that well Stacey Slater gave mum a fake alibi for the night den was killed
Dennis : Really
Kacey : You don’t seem shocked
Dennis : Nothing with that woman shocks me anymore
Kacey : What we going to do?
Dennis : Do not worry I have a plan
this is wicked post more soon
sarahwelford
25-09-2005, 10:03
Will be more up later this afternoon thank you
i_luv_dennis
25-09-2005, 11:04
thats so good
This is good. Wonder what the plan is....
sarahwelford
25-09-2005, 19:02
Chrissie walks outside and sees Jake sat on a bench and goes over to him
Jake : Kacey Ok?
Chrissie : I think she and Dennis are planning some thing
Jake : Your daughter has been attacked and all your bothered about is your self
Chrissie : No I am worried about Kacey
Jake : I need to go
Chrissie : No please Jake do not go
Jake : Its to much Chrissie
Chrissie : You said it did not matter what I did
Jake : That’s before I knew
Chrissie : So you lied to me said it would all be ok and now here you are running at the first little thing
Jake : You killed your husband Chrissie I would say that’s a big thing
Chrissie : Jake please I can explain everything
Jake : You don’t deserve me or Kacey
Jake gets up to leave
Chrissie : Jake please
Jake : Your on your own from now on
Jake walks of leaving Chrissie crying
Hospital room
Kacey : What’s the plan?
Dennis : The less you know about it the better
Kacey : please
Dennis : No I do not want you getting involved
Kacey : I am already involved if its right what we are thinking then she needs to be put in jail and i dont care that she is my mum i will help you put her away
this is great!
Jake dont you dare, turn around and tell chrissie your sorry!!
more asap!
Carrie Bradshaw
25-09-2005, 20:44
Chrissie : Jake please
Jake : Your on your own from now on
Jake walks of leaving Chrissie crying
:eek: Jake come back here now!!
sarahwelford
25-09-2005, 23:55
Dennis : Right I better get going
Kacey : Just tell him what you think and then maybe she will see you
Dennis : I will try
Kacey : You coming tomorrow
Dennis : Yes I will be here
Kacey : Bring Sharon
Dennis : Ok bye sis
Dennis walks out and Chrissie is outside of Kacey’s room looking upset
Dennis : Everything ok?
Chrissie : Yes just everything has hit me all at once you know
Dennis : Yes well I am going to go back to the pub and help Sharon close up
Chrissie : Thank you Dennis
Dennis : What for?
Chrissie : Coming to the hospital
Dennis : Kacey is my sister I would do anything for her
Chrissie : Yes well I will go talk to her
Dennis : Ok see you later then
Chrissie : Bye
Chrissie walks into Kacey’s room
Kacey : You still here
Chrissie : Please do not be like this
Kacey : Oh I am sorry I never read a book on how to act after your mum killed your dad
Chrissie : I never did it
Kacey : Mum you may be able to fool Jake and Sharon but I see threw these crocodile tears
Chrissie : These tears are for real I loved your dad
Kacey : That why your toyboy lover is taking over our house
Chrissie : Well that is about to change
Kacey : Why?
Chrissie : I said it would be best if we cooled it
Kacey : Yeah right look at you your not crying over dad your crying cause Jake has left you
Chrissie : No
Kacey : Why he left you mum?
Chrissie : We both decided
Kacey : No you really liked him he really liked you there must be something behind it
Chrissie : No
Kacey : So make you feel good did it getting Sharon back to hear all what her dad did to Sam Zoë and you
Chrissie : She needed to know what he was like you need to know
Kacey : I know what dad was like he was not all good but he loved us
Chrissie : Loved us he got Zoë pregnant she is the same age as you she was Dennis’s girlfriend
Kacey : So what you wanted revenge make him pay for what he did
Chrissie : I asked him to have a baby with me and he said no and then the week later he has got Zoë pregnant and wants her to keep it so I told her to have an abortion
Kacey : You told her to what
Chrissie : Have an abortion
Kacey : That’s what it always comes down to with you taking the easy way out making Zoë have an abortion letting Sam take the blame for dads murder when all the time it was you who did it
Chrissie : Please lets talk
Kacey : Lets talk what about how you would of aborted me if you would have had the chance only you was to far gone
Chrissie : I never would of
Kacey : All the time growing up I thought I had done some thing wrong it was my fault that you did not love me
Chrissie : I do love you
Kacey : And I realized you hated me because I was the person that took dad away from you I was his special girl and you was just his wife
Chrissie : I loved you from the day you was born
Kacey : No you never you loved me because you had to
Chrissie : You really think that
Kacey : And now you sit here and say you love me that’s bull you don’t love me you are not capable of love that’s why you killed dad because you could not stand that he loved Sharon more than you. And yes dad may love Sharon more than me but at least I know that he loved me more than you
Chrissie : Stop it
Kacey : The truth hurts does nt it mum
Chrissie : Please just stop it
Kacey : Not until you tell me you did it tell me you killed him
Chrissie : Ok Ok I did it you satisfied I killed him I killed your dad
Chrissie realizes what she has said
Chrissie : No no I did not mean that
Kacey : Yes you did you just said you killed my dad
At this point a police man comes inside
Police : Is everything alright in here the nurses said she heard noises
Chrissie : Fine thanks
Kacey : I need to tell you some thing its about Den Watts
oooh! it all coming out now!!
sarahwelford
27-09-2005, 19:13
Kacey looks at Chrissie and looks at the police man
Kacey : On the night he was murdered
Police : Yes
Chrissie : I did
Kacey : What my mum is trying to say is she
Police : She
Kacey : She was not there for him and well both of us should have been
Police : Right would it be ok to take your statement now
Kacey : yes sure
Police : Well just talk us threw what happened
Kacey : I was drunk and I was walking back cause I wanted to see my mum and I heard a gang and I started to hang around with them they well must of seen the bottle of vodka I had. They said they was moving on and I got up but I must of well lost my balance and fell back down and I felt a little sick you know when the whole place looks like its spinning.
Police : And then what happened
Kacey : I thought he liked me he started to kiss me and I kissed him back and then I felt him on me and I felt really really sick I told him to get of me and he never I tried to get away but he kept pushing at me so I kneed him
Police : Where exactly
Kacey : Where you think
Police : Right
Kacey : I tried to run but he grabbed me by my hair I screamed but he just put his hand over my mouth. The next thing I know I am lying in here.
Police : What did this lad look like
Kacey : He was white he had a baseball cap on he was wearing a hooded top that’s all I can remember
Police : Anything else that you would say was noticeable
Kacey : I am kind of tired
Police : Ok well the nurse said you will be in overnight make sure there no dangerous head injuries, And we will have results of all your tests you will need some tests to see if you was
Kacey : Yes I know
Police : I will give you a few mins then the nurse can come and do the tests
Police man walks out
Kacey : That does not mean I don’t hate you
Chrissie : I know you do but thank you for Kacey : These test results will they tell me if I was
Chrissie : Yes probably
Kacey : What if it comes back and I have been raped
Chrissie : I am here for you hunny no matter what
Chrissie hugs Kacey
Back at the square in the moon residents
Jake is packing all his things
Alfie : Where you going
Jake : I am leaving I have to
Alfie : Why
Jake : Its complicated but I have to go
Alfie : Has some thing happened
Jake : Just tell Chrissie I am sorry
Jake walks out of the door
This is fantastic. More please !!!
sarahwelford
27-09-2005, 23:41
Alfie runs to the phone and dials a number
Chrissie’s phone is ringing
Kacey : You going to get that
Chrissie : Hello Alfie has something happened
Alfie : its jake he just packed his bags and he has gone
Chrissie : Gone Gone where
Alfie : He said to tell you he is sorry
Chrissie : Go after him please tell him I Love him
Alfie : I cant Chrissie he has left
Chrissie puts phone down
Chrissie breaks down crying
Kacey : Mum is everything ok
Chrissie : Its Jake he has left
Kacey : The hospital
Chrissie : No he is leaving walford leaving me
Kacey : You told him
Chrissie : I had to you told him about Stacey giving me a fake alibi
Kacey : You told Jake and when I asked you lied to me
Chrissie : I am sorry
Kacey : I am sorry mum maybe you should go home get some rest yeah
Chrissie : I want to be here for you
Kacey : Well go home have an hours sleep a shower and then come back with me an overnight bag
Chrissie : You sure
Kacey : Yes
Chrissie : Ok babe I love you
Kacey : Yes I love you
Chrissie hugs and kisses Kacey and walks of
Kacey : You killed my dad you bitch I am going to make you pay
alkalinetrio
27-09-2005, 23:59
wooooooooooooooooo go kacey
Very interesting! Post more soon
sarahwelford
30-09-2005, 18:26
Back in the square
Dennis : Billy you been able to speak to Sam
Billy : She phoned before I am going tomorrow
Dennis : Please try and make her see that I am only trying to help
Billy : Well you know Sam is not really in to trusting other people apart from her family and especially members of the watts family
Dennis : This stupid Watts Mitchell war that is going on
Billy : Its always the Watts who start it and the mitchells end up paying for it in some way
Dennis : Just tell Sam I can help her
Sharon : What’s going on here
Billy : Oh Dennis just saying how he can help Sam
Sharon : On what exactly
Billy : Help me get her out, I better get going will ask her tomorrow Dennis
Billy walks of leaving Dennis and Sharon stood there
Dennis : Thanks a lot Billy
Sharon : Why would you be helping Sam she killed our dad
Dennis : I do not think we know the whole story
Sharon : Not Chrissie again she explained why she lied and everything to us
Dennis : And you fell for it
Sharon : No I trust her she loved dad
Dennis : You actually believe Sam killed Den and then managed to move his dead body to the cellar and then she buried him without anyone noticing
Sharon : Its what happened
Dennis : You believe that if you want
Sharon : You know what I do not have time for this I have to go and help out in the pub
Sharon walks of leaving Dennis stood in the square
Inside the pub
Pauline : Sharon you ok
Sharon : Yes fine thanks
Pauline : Any news about Kacey
Sharon : None that I know of
Chrissie comes walking in
Sharon : Chrissie is Kacey ok
Chrissie : They have done test and stuff and keeping her in over night
Pauline : You look tired
Chrissie : Yeah yeah I am just going for a lie down
Sharon : Me and Mo got it covered down here
Chrissie : Thank you so much for everything
Chrissie walks of
Pauline : You know she really really loved your dad
Sharon : Yes sometimes I feel like me and Chrissie are the only ones who understood dad really
Pauline : Well some one had to understand him did not they
Chrissie gets a bottle of vodka and goes and sits in the living room
Chrissie looks out of the window and looks at the moons house she then looks at a picture of Jake she has and starts to cry.
Jake : Hello Chrissie
Chrissie : Jake
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