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baileya
22-08-2005, 23:52
Hi this is my first script please tell me what you think. I have a whole storyline and many more to come planned out. I am looking forward to your comments and will happily take advice.

Everyone is rushing around in the millers preparing for the welcome home party for demi.
Rosie:(shouting) Keith! Keith! Are you ready? Its time to go and get Demi.
Keith:Ye. One minute Rose I'm just putting up these banners.
Darren Enters
Darren: Mum why dont you take Aleesha with you. I think Demi would love to see her.
Rosie:(happily) Ye. Great idea Darren. Come here
Rosie hugs darren just as Keith enters.
Keith:(putting his coat on) Ready. I think we better get going.
Keith Rosie and Aleesha leave to pick up Demi. About half an hour later Darren and Mickey are finishing off the decorations when there is a knock at the door.
Mickey: Daz answer that
Darren answers the door
Darren: Oh come in they aint back yet.
The guests including Pauline,The Beales,Gus and The Brannings enter
Pauline:(surprised) Oh wow. What an effort youve put in here.
Darren:(gloating) Oh well we do try.
About 5 minutes had passed until Rosies voice was heard
Rosie: Were back!
Keith,Rosie,Demi and Aleesha enter the room.
Everyone: Surprise! Welcome home Demi.
Demi didnt smile she just set of at a pace upstairs and you could here her sobbing.
Rosie and Keith exchanged looks
Keith: Right everyone enjoy themselves. Ill go upstairs and speak to Demi.

NEXT EPISODE: KEITH HAS A HEART TO HEART WITH DEMI.

eastenderfan_91
23-08-2005, 13:45
its great please post more very very soon

kirstienod
25-08-2005, 14:21
its great post more very soon