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eastenderfan_91
12-08-2005, 20:52
Hope you like it its my first script so it probably wont be good hope you like it :D

Rosie: Sweetheart you have to have something to eat

Demi: Not hungry

Rosie: I'll leave it here darling

Rosie closes Demis door behind her

Rosie: Shes not eating Keith

Keith: I'll try talking to her

Rosie goes down stairs and Keith enters Demi's room

Keith: Hi Darling, I think you should eat

Demi: I'm not hungry Dad, thanks though

Keith: Ok Dems, see you downstairs

As Keith is about to leave Demi gets up from her bed and begins to cry

Keith: Come here babe

Demi: I miss Leo Dad, I really want him to be here I want him back!, its all my fault

Keith: Hold on there Demi, how is it your fault

Demi: If I didn't take it in the first place then he wouldn't be dead would he!

Keith: My Baby Girl, its not your fault (Aleesha begins to cry in the next room) now go and look after your baby she needs you right now she has lost her dad

Demi: Ok Dad, I love you!

Keith: I love you too honey now once Aleesha is settled have something to eat you need to keep up your stregnth for yours and Leo child

Demi: Your right Dad, I need to do it for Leo aswell

Keith: That's right Princess, now go on

Demi hugs her dad very tight and goes to get Aleesha, Keith goes downstairs to Rosie

Tell me what you think and if you like it i will carry on :)

Charmed
12-08-2005, 21:11
Yeah,I like it.Its brilliant!Its a bit sad though,but please do more!

xxsexc_kellyxx
12-08-2005, 21:13
very good

lucky girl 99
12-08-2005, 22:07
very good and i think you should finish it i miss leo lots xxx:(

CrazyLea
12-08-2005, 22:11
its good

samantha nixon
14-08-2005, 19:32
this is really good

Eastenders_4ev@
15-08-2005, 17:37
its good carry on please

kirstienod
17-08-2005, 13:07
its great! please carry on!

eastenderfan_91
20-08-2005, 14:32
Sorry I have taken so long, heres the next part:

Aleesha settles down and Demi comes down with an empty plate in her hand

Demi: I was starving

Keith: I know you was darling

Demi: Dad you really helped me earlier to see that I have to take care of Aleesha not only for myself but for leo aswell

Keith: He will be so proud of you demi and your right

The door bell rings

Demi: I'll get it

Demi runs to the door, its Ray

Demi: What do you want? Go away

Ray: I want to come and see my grandaughter if that is ok

Demi: Do you know what Ray, its not and shall I tell you why?

Ray: Why am I listening to all of this, you can't talk to me like that she is my grandaughter

Demi: Yeah your right Ray she is, but I am her mum and I don't want you to come anywhere near mine and Leos baby and I don't think he would want you to come near her either, so get lost

Ray: Look I am sorry, its just I miss my boy so much I know I may have been harsh on him sometimes but I loved him so much he was my little boy

Ray began to cry, and Demi had tears in ther eyes she began to feel sorry for Ray

Ray: I just want to see her, she is the only thing i have left of my son

Demi agreed and went to get Aleesha where she was sitting with Keith

Keith: Your doing the right thing darling, go on now

Keith passed Aleesha on to Demi and Demi had tears running down her face

Demi: I won't be long just going over the park

Keith: Ok sweetheart see you in a little while

So what do you think if you could give me some more comments it would be great and I will carry on

samantha nixon
20-08-2005, 17:05
this is really good

Chloe-Elise
20-08-2005, 19:00
Its really good :) please post more soon

eastenderfan_91
21-08-2005, 18:06
thank you for all the comments here is the next part hope you like it

Demi was pushing Aleesha in her buggy with Ray at her side they hadn't said a word since they left they went to sit down at the nearest bench

Ray: Would you like something to drink?

Demi: Yes please that would be great

Ray: Ok I won't be long, you'll stay here won't you

Demi: Yes of course

Ray smiled at Demi then at Aleesha

Ray: See you in a little while gorgeous

Aleesha let out a little laugh as Ray began to tickle her, he headed of to the snack bar at the other side of the park a few minutes after Ray left Demi felt a tap on her arm

Demi: That was quick Ray

But it wasn't Ray, Demi looked round and gasped she couldn't believe what she could see and who was standing in front of her, her eyes began to collect tears she was so happy but who was it?

sorry it is short but as soon as you say what you think i will carry on and reveal the mystery person

eastenderfan_91
23-08-2005, 12:29
well nobody seems to be reading it but i will post some more as i like making it

Demi: LEO!

Leo: Hi babes, i really miss you, you know

Demi: Can anyone else see you?

Leo: No just you

Demi: Leo i am so sorry

Leo: For what?

Demi: For killling you

Leo: It wasn't your fault and don't keep blaming yourself for it, i should of checked on you before i injected it

Demi: But its still my fault

Leo: Come here and give us a hug then

Demi: ok but won't people think that i am strange hugging the air

They started laughing

Leo: Yer but who cares what they think babe

Leo and Demi began to hug and soon started to kiss you could tell they really missed each other, the whole situation was strange as Leo was a person and could do anything but only Demi and Aleesha could see him. Ray came back

Ray: Sorry I took so long i got you coca and aleesha spme orange juice

Demi: That is brilliant Ray thanks a lot

Ray looked at Aleesha in her push chair

Ray: can i take her out?

Demi looked at Leo and he looked unsure and nodded

Demi: Yes course

Ray looked so happy it was like he was a different man, he took Aleesha out and placed her on his lap, he started to play with her and tickle her everything a grandparent would have done he was a natural. It was know 5 o clock they had been at the park since 2 so Ray decided to go home

Ray: I better go now Dems, im sorry about all the stuff in the past i wish i could go back and change it and would have seen this little princess more, shes gorgeous

Demi smiled at Ray and gave him a hug, and i am sorry to Ray, demi had tears rolling down her face.

Demi: I love leo so much and i know you did to

Ray: I loved my boy more then anything and i just wish i told him that before

Demi let go of Ray and looked at Leo he had tears in his eyes

Demi: Ray Leo knows you love him and he loves you too

Ray: But I treated him so badly i was such a nasty man, with him dying its made me realise how much i need him and how much i need you demi and aleesha so could i see her again?

Leo: I love you dad and i know your sorry and i am sorry too

But of course leo was only visible to demi and aleesha and so ray could not hear him he started to cry but a bit

Demi: Of course you can see her and i no leo is sorry and that he loves you and forgives you

Ray: I hope your right sweetheart

Demi: Im going to stay back here for a little while Ray but you go ahead

Ray: Are you sure?

Demi: Yes I am thank you for a lovely day

Ray handed aleesha over to demi and kissed both demi and aleesha on the head

Ray: Bye

Demi: Bye Ray

Leo had walked over to the bench and sat down, demi walked over to join him

Demi: Are you alright babes

Leo: Yes now that i have seen you, i really love you demi and you musn't treat your mum or family badly they really love you and they don't want to see you sad, this is the last time you will see me ok and i don't want you to be sad because as long as you know i will always love you and how much i care for you and our baby aleesha then you shouldn't be sad, i don't want you to be lonely and without a boyfriend thats why if you see the right boy that comes along you have to grab and have a good life you musn't always orry what i think! I will show you signs that i am still here may be moving some of your things around or maybe holding aleesha when your out of the room but i will never forget you

Demi began to cry hard, she loved leo and couldn't bear to lose him again she thought how hard her life would be with out him but he showed her that he loved here and told her how much he cared for her and wouldn't forget about her

Leo: Come here babe

Demi layed her head against leos chest he kissed her on the head

Leo: I love you

Demi: Don't go yet

Leo: I have to i will be waiting for you although i will have to wait a long time i want to see yours and aleeshas life and how happy you will be

Demi: I can't live without you though

Leo: You can although you might not think it now you will be able to do it i promise, just remember the good times and visit southend for me please

Demi sat up leo got up and said good bye to Aleesha he gave her a hug and kissed her

Aleesha: Dada

Leo: She said my name

Demi: I am so glad you were here when you said that otherwise i would have been devestated

Leo: come here gorgeous and give your man a kiss

they laughed and leo gave her the best kiss he had ever given her, he pointed at Aleesha

Leo: and you darling i will be waiting for too, don't forget me princess

he gave her another kiss, this time aleesha waved

Aleesha: Dada

Leo smiled at her

Leo: I am your dada, don't let aleesha ever forget about me babe please

Demi: I will never ever let her foget about you and i won't either

Leo: Thank you, I love you both bye

Demi was holding Aleesha

Demi: bye i love you!

Demi was crying as hard anymore she began to walk home with Aleesha

Demi: See Daddy won't forget us darling and we won't forget him

The end - i hope you liked it i even cried writing this lol :crying:

kirstienod
24-08-2005, 13:50
hi, its great... you should carry it on

eastenderfan_91
24-08-2005, 14:19
what like what happened after he died?

Charmed
25-08-2005, 20:55
That was so sad.I was crying too :crying:

Stacy
25-08-2005, 21:57
That was good, you should do more

Jessie Wallace
26-08-2005, 00:57
This is good, well done.