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eastenderfan_91
12-08-2005, 20:52
Hope you like it its my first script so it probably wont be good hope you like it :D
Rosie: Sweetheart you have to have something to eat
Demi: Not hungry
Rosie: I'll leave it here darling
Rosie closes Demis door behind her
Rosie: Shes not eating Keith
Keith: I'll try talking to her
Rosie goes down stairs and Keith enters Demi's room
Keith: Hi Darling, I think you should eat
Demi: I'm not hungry Dad, thanks though
Keith: Ok Dems, see you downstairs
As Keith is about to leave Demi gets up from her bed and begins to cry
Keith: Come here babe
Demi: I miss Leo Dad, I really want him to be here I want him back!, its all my fault
Keith: Hold on there Demi, how is it your fault
Demi: If I didn't take it in the first place then he wouldn't be dead would he!
Keith: My Baby Girl, its not your fault (Aleesha begins to cry in the next room) now go and look after your baby she needs you right now she has lost her dad
Demi: Ok Dad, I love you!
Keith: I love you too honey now once Aleesha is settled have something to eat you need to keep up your stregnth for yours and Leo child
Demi: Your right Dad, I need to do it for Leo aswell
Keith: That's right Princess, now go on
Demi hugs her dad very tight and goes to get Aleesha, Keith goes downstairs to Rosie
Tell me what you think and if you like it i will carry on :)
Yeah,I like it.Its brilliant!Its a bit sad though,but please do more!
xxsexc_kellyxx
12-08-2005, 21:13
very good
lucky girl 99
12-08-2005, 22:07
very good and i think you should finish it i miss leo lots xxx:(
CrazyLea
12-08-2005, 22:11
its good
samantha nixon
14-08-2005, 19:32
this is really good
Eastenders_4ev@
15-08-2005, 17:37
its good carry on please
kirstienod
17-08-2005, 13:07
its great! please carry on!
eastenderfan_91
20-08-2005, 14:32
Sorry I have taken so long, heres the next part:
Aleesha settles down and Demi comes down with an empty plate in her hand
Demi: I was starving
Keith: I know you was darling
Demi: Dad you really helped me earlier to see that I have to take care of Aleesha not only for myself but for leo aswell
Keith: He will be so proud of you demi and your right
The door bell rings
Demi: I'll get it
Demi runs to the door, its Ray
Demi: What do you want? Go away
Ray: I want to come and see my grandaughter if that is ok
Demi: Do you know what Ray, its not and shall I tell you why?
Ray: Why am I listening to all of this, you can't talk to me like that she is my grandaughter
Demi: Yeah your right Ray she is, but I am her mum and I don't want you to come anywhere near mine and Leos baby and I don't think he would want you to come near her either, so get lost
Ray: Look I am sorry, its just I miss my boy so much I know I may have been harsh on him sometimes but I loved him so much he was my little boy
Ray began to cry, and Demi had tears in ther eyes she began to feel sorry for Ray
Ray: I just want to see her, she is the only thing i have left of my son
Demi agreed and went to get Aleesha where she was sitting with Keith
Keith: Your doing the right thing darling, go on now
Keith passed Aleesha on to Demi and Demi had tears running down her face
Demi: I won't be long just going over the park
Keith: Ok sweetheart see you in a little while
So what do you think if you could give me some more comments it would be great and I will carry on
samantha nixon
20-08-2005, 17:05
this is really good
Chloe-Elise
20-08-2005, 19:00
Its really good :) please post more soon
eastenderfan_91
21-08-2005, 18:06
thank you for all the comments here is the next part hope you like it
Demi was pushing Aleesha in her buggy with Ray at her side they hadn't said a word since they left they went to sit down at the nearest bench
Ray: Would you like something to drink?
Demi: Yes please that would be great
Ray: Ok I won't be long, you'll stay here won't you
Demi: Yes of course
Ray smiled at Demi then at Aleesha
Ray: See you in a little while gorgeous
Aleesha let out a little laugh as Ray began to tickle her, he headed of to the snack bar at the other side of the park a few minutes after Ray left Demi felt a tap on her arm
Demi: That was quick Ray
But it wasn't Ray, Demi looked round and gasped she couldn't believe what she could see and who was standing in front of her, her eyes began to collect tears she was so happy but who was it?
sorry it is short but as soon as you say what you think i will carry on and reveal the mystery person
eastenderfan_91
23-08-2005, 12:29
well nobody seems to be reading it but i will post some more as i like making it
Demi: LEO!
Leo: Hi babes, i really miss you, you know
Demi: Can anyone else see you?
Leo: No just you
Demi: Leo i am so sorry
Leo: For what?
Demi: For killling you
Leo: It wasn't your fault and don't keep blaming yourself for it, i should of checked on you before i injected it
Demi: But its still my fault
Leo: Come here and give us a hug then
Demi: ok but won't people think that i am strange hugging the air
They started laughing
Leo: Yer but who cares what they think babe
Leo and Demi began to hug and soon started to kiss you could tell they really missed each other, the whole situation was strange as Leo was a person and could do anything but only Demi and Aleesha could see him. Ray came back
Ray: Sorry I took so long i got you coca and aleesha spme orange juice
Demi: That is brilliant Ray thanks a lot
Ray looked at Aleesha in her push chair
Ray: can i take her out?
Demi looked at Leo and he looked unsure and nodded
Demi: Yes course
Ray looked so happy it was like he was a different man, he took Aleesha out and placed her on his lap, he started to play with her and tickle her everything a grandparent would have done he was a natural. It was know 5 o clock they had been at the park since 2 so Ray decided to go home
Ray: I better go now Dems, im sorry about all the stuff in the past i wish i could go back and change it and would have seen this little princess more, shes gorgeous
Demi smiled at Ray and gave him a hug, and i am sorry to Ray, demi had tears rolling down her face.
Demi: I love leo so much and i know you did to
Ray: I loved my boy more then anything and i just wish i told him that before
Demi let go of Ray and looked at Leo he had tears in his eyes
Demi: Ray Leo knows you love him and he loves you too
Ray: But I treated him so badly i was such a nasty man, with him dying its made me realise how much i need him and how much i need you demi and aleesha so could i see her again?
Leo: I love you dad and i know your sorry and i am sorry too
But of course leo was only visible to demi and aleesha and so ray could not hear him he started to cry but a bit
Demi: Of course you can see her and i no leo is sorry and that he loves you and forgives you
Ray: I hope your right sweetheart
Demi: Im going to stay back here for a little while Ray but you go ahead
Ray: Are you sure?
Demi: Yes I am thank you for a lovely day
Ray handed aleesha over to demi and kissed both demi and aleesha on the head
Ray: Bye
Demi: Bye Ray
Leo had walked over to the bench and sat down, demi walked over to join him
Demi: Are you alright babes
Leo: Yes now that i have seen you, i really love you demi and you musn't treat your mum or family badly they really love you and they don't want to see you sad, this is the last time you will see me ok and i don't want you to be sad because as long as you know i will always love you and how much i care for you and our baby aleesha then you shouldn't be sad, i don't want you to be lonely and without a boyfriend thats why if you see the right boy that comes along you have to grab and have a good life you musn't always orry what i think! I will show you signs that i am still here may be moving some of your things around or maybe holding aleesha when your out of the room but i will never forget you
Demi began to cry hard, she loved leo and couldn't bear to lose him again she thought how hard her life would be with out him but he showed her that he loved here and told her how much he cared for her and wouldn't forget about her
Leo: Come here babe
Demi layed her head against leos chest he kissed her on the head
Leo: I love you
Demi: Don't go yet
Leo: I have to i will be waiting for you although i will have to wait a long time i want to see yours and aleeshas life and how happy you will be
Demi: I can't live without you though
Leo: You can although you might not think it now you will be able to do it i promise, just remember the good times and visit southend for me please
Demi sat up leo got up and said good bye to Aleesha he gave her a hug and kissed her
Aleesha: Dada
Leo: She said my name
Demi: I am so glad you were here when you said that otherwise i would have been devestated
Leo: come here gorgeous and give your man a kiss
they laughed and leo gave her the best kiss he had ever given her, he pointed at Aleesha
Leo: and you darling i will be waiting for too, don't forget me princess
he gave her another kiss, this time aleesha waved
Aleesha: Dada
Leo smiled at her
Leo: I am your dada, don't let aleesha ever forget about me babe please
Demi: I will never ever let her foget about you and i won't either
Leo: Thank you, I love you both bye
Demi was holding Aleesha
Demi: bye i love you!
Demi was crying as hard anymore she began to walk home with Aleesha
Demi: See Daddy won't forget us darling and we won't forget him
The end - i hope you liked it i even cried writing this lol :crying:
kirstienod
24-08-2005, 13:50
hi, its great... you should carry it on
eastenderfan_91
24-08-2005, 14:19
what like what happened after he died?
That was so sad.I was crying too :crying:
That was good, you should do more
Jessie Wallace
26-08-2005, 00:57
This is good, well done.
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