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Bryan
06-07-2005, 16:21
Following the sucess of my previosu 10 parter "Banged To Rights (Sam's Exit)" I have decided to do a new story, this time based around Jonny and Tina, Jake and Danny. The events of this story begin in October 06, Chrissie has been sent down for Den's murder and Jake is now gotten over her.

Part One
Scene 1 - INT. Jonny's House - Day

Jonny is sat at the breakfast table, drinking some cofee and looking at a box of old photographs. He looks at one of him and Stephanie on their wedding day. Tina walks in dressed up to the nines.

Tina: Haven't you got dressed yet? The delivery is at eleven isnt it??

Jonny: (baffled) Oh yes...I'll get myself sorted in a bit.

Tina: What you looking at?

Tina walks towards him and looks at the photo.

Jonny: I was just....

Tina: It dosent matter Jonny, i'd never expect you to forget Steph, she was a big part of your life.

Jonny puts the photo back in the photo

Jonny: Yes well you are now, and you and Ruby are all that matters...

Tina: (Teases) Oh... careful jonny i may start to think your an emotional man...

Jonny: Anyway, why are you off to this early dressed like that?

Tina: Oh me and Pat are going off for some retail therapy, the perks of running her own buisness, she can have time off whenever she wants.

Jonny: (Joking) I'll need therapy if you keep spending my money...

Tina: That's what its there for, to spend on the woman that you love, anyways im off, cya later

Tina kisses Jonny on the cheak and walks off

Jonny: Bye

The door slams shut, jonny picks up his phone and dials a number

Jonny: (into phone) Ah yes Jake, i need you to do me a favour...

Scene 2 - INT.Mental Institution - Day

Jake walks down the coridoor talking on his phone to Jonny

Jake: (into phone)...yes I'll pick it up for you on my way back...ok, cya boss.

Jake puts away his phone and knocks on a door, he enters. In there sitting in a leather chair is Jake, he is rubbing his hands and staring into space...

Jake: Alright Dan, how you doing?

Danny: (Excited) Jake! Good your here! I didnt think you would be here today!

Jake: I thought i'd surprise you...

Danny: Have you got me any prezzies? Any magazines or grapes! God Jake where are my Grapes!

Jake: Calm down Dan, you dont even like grapes.

Danny: That is not the point, im Ill, so i need grapes!

Jake sits down on the bed beside Danny, he stares at Danny.

Jake: So what are the dotor's saying? When do you think you will be out?

Danny: They dont, stupid iditos sya ill be in here forever if i dont mend my ways! But what do they know hey! They know nothing! They think I'm barking...woof woof like a dog! I'm no dog! Tell them Jake i am not mad am I?

Jake: Look, I'd better get going...I've got to pick something up for Jonny

Danny: Sucking up to satan! How can you Jake? After what he did to us! What he did to me! It's becuase of him that im in this state!

Jake: Yeah well its about time you snap out of it!

Jake gets up and starts to leave.

Danny: Dont go Jake, you cnat leave me...

Danny grabs hold of him, Jake pushes him back into the seat

Jake: Let go of me Danny!

Danny: Jake!

Jake leaves the room, and starts to cry, he ends up sliding down the wall until he is on the floor in tears...

Bryan
06-07-2005, 17:05
god i was pracitrcally in tears after writing the jake and danny scene!!!

bondboffin

Treacle
06-07-2005, 17:22
It wasn't that emotional lol.

Bryan
06-07-2005, 17:35
It wasn't that emotional lol.

ah weell i thought it was

bondboffin

Tamzi
06-07-2005, 18:17
That was very good. Poor Jake and Danny. They both are seperated now. This is brill though. More please
xxx

Babe14
07-07-2005, 08:44
Very good, I like it.

Katy
07-07-2005, 10:57
very realistic WEll done. Your scripts are amazing

Bryan
07-07-2005, 13:55
Since Den's Body was discovered, Sharon and Dennis inherited the Queen Vic. Little Mo is still working at the Vic as a barmaid.

Part Two

Scene 1 - INT. Jonny's House - Day

Jonny finishes eating a sandwhich. He puts his jacket on and pulls out a small jewelry box from his pokcet, he opens it and looks at a large and sparkling ring, he smiles and then places it back in his pocket. The front door opens and in walks Ruby.

Ruby: Back dad!

Jonny: Hey where have you been? Tina wanted to take you out...

Ruby: Oh i just went out with Stacey, has she gone then

Jonny: Yeah, about an hour ago

Ruby: I'm just gonna get mysfle a bit of lunch then im going to go out again alright?

Jonny: Um wait a miniute Ruby, i want a word with you.

Ruby: What about?

Jonny: Well i want to ask you something, sit down.

Ruby sits down on the sofa, Jonny walks over to her and sits down.

Jonny: You know how much I loved your mother, well i want you to remember that, no matter what i will never forget her, and no-one will take her place...

Ruby: What is this about dad?

Jonny: Do you like Tina, Ruby?

Ruby: Yeah, she's lovley, why do you ask?

Jonny: Well i like her too, more than like...i love her. I mean she's been a part of my life for over ten years, we care a lot about each other. And well as long as you say it is ok, i am going to ask her to marry me.

Ruby: You're going to marry her?

Jonny: If it is okay with you, if you dont feel comfortbale with it, then i wont... so... what do you think?

Ruby: I think it's super! If it's what you want and it makes you happy, then its what i want.

Jonny smiles with relief and hugs his daughter.

Scene 2- INT.Mental Institution - Day

Jake is sitting in an empty office, the door opens and a doctor walks in.

Doctor: Sorry to keep you waiting Mr Moon, got a bit delayed

Jake: It's alright, could do with a few minutes thinking...

Doctor: I can imagine it is a lot to take in having your brother in here, but you have to understand it is for the best

Jake: Yes, just doesnt seem like that sometimes

Doctor: We're trying our best to get him better, but we have a long way to go yet

Jake: Typical of danny, always delaying things and casuing problems

Doctor: Oh we dont see him as a problem Mr Moon, mental illness is a terrible thing, and we will do our best to cure him.

Jake: Thank you, its much appreciated

Doctor: I have seen many cases like this in the past, a truamtic childhood can often lead to mental issues later on in life, i could imagine it was difficult for him...

Jake: Oh it was, difficult for the pair of us... anyway do you think he will be out for christmas?

Doctor: To be honest with you Mr Moon it will be highly unlikely, we have a long way to go until Danny is cured...

Jake has a dissapointed look on his face...

Scene 3 - INT. Queen Vic - Night

Jonny and Tina walk into the Vic, it is a crowded night, and Sharon and Little Mo are busy behind the bar.

Tina: God its busy tonight isnt it?

Jonny: The more the merrier, sit down I'll get the drinks in

Tina finds a seat next to Pat, the pair start nattering. John approches Sharon.

Sharon: Evening Jonny, what can i get you?

Jonny passes Sharon a wod of notes.

Jonny: (secretly) Put this in the till, the drinks are on me.

Sharon: Okay big spender...

Jonny knocks his fist on the bar.

Jonny: Um Ladies and gentleman could i have your attention please?

The vic falls silent as they listen to Jonny.

Jonny: As you all know, me and Tina have been seeing each other for a very long time, and i've never really showed her how much she means to me...

Jonny approahces Tina and goes down on one knee, Tina covers her mouth in delight.

Jonny: Tina Stewart, would you do me the honour of becoming my wife?

Tina: (delighted) yes!

Vic: Awwww

Jonny: The drinks are on me!

Tina gets up and kisses Jonny, the pub cheer...

TO BE CONTINUED

Katy
07-07-2005, 14:28
awww thats so sweet. Tina and Jonny are such a good couple. Keep up the good work.

.:SpIcYsPy:.
07-07-2005, 18:36
lol Danny in a Mental thing.... suits him right!!

Bryan
07-07-2005, 19:17
lol Danny in a Mental thing.... suits him right!!

all part of a chilling and gripping storyline to come...so keep reading guys!!!

bondboffin

Jessie Wallace
07-07-2005, 21:21
Now that was more emotional than the first part!

Babe14
08-07-2005, 08:45
Coming along nicely:)

Katy
08-07-2005, 09:54
its really good.

Bryan
08-07-2005, 11:36
A fews months have past and it is now Christmas Eve, in traditonal Eastenders style Jonny and Tina are going to have a christmas day wedding. Jonny has made amends with Jake and Alfie

Part Three

Scene 1 - EXT. Albert Square - Night

The choir are siginging christmas carols in the albert sqaure garden infront of a big christmas tree. Tina and Pat leave her house on their way to the Vic.

Pat: Common then Tin', let's get ready to party...

Tina: Party? There's only two of us!

Pat: Nonscence, I've asked all the girls to come out for the night, your gonna have the bets hen night in history!

Tina: As long as i dont get too drunk, i want to remember tomorrow.

Pat: Why? At least if your drunk you have an excuse for marrying!

Tina laughs at this, the pair head into the vic.

Scene 2 - INT. Jonny's House - Night

Jonny looks out of his window and sees Tina walking across the sqaure, he smiles.

Billy: Hey you! You shouldnt be looking at her until tomorrow!

Jonny: Shes my future wife, i can look if i want

Alfie: Its unlucky tough

Jonny: You know me Alfie, since when have i relied on luck?

Jake: So then jonny are you looking forward to your last night of freedom?

Jonny: Spending the night with Barry White and your 3 goons, sure im gonna have the time of my life...

The group laugh.

Alfie: Belive me Jonny marraige isnt all its made out to be...causes you nothing but uncessacary heartache.

Jonny: The difference between you and me Alfie is that Tina has always been faithful to me. Tomorrow will be brilliant and nothing will go wrong...

Scene 3 - INT. Mental Institution - Night

Danny is reading a book, a nurse walks in to check how he is doing.

Nurse:Hello Danny, you ok?

Danny: Now thats the million dollar question isnt it?

Nurse: Cheer up Danny, its christmas tomorrow.

Danny: Great microwavable turkey and some crappy presents.

Nurse: You've got your brother coming in tough havn't you?

Danny: For an hour... he's going to a wedding, a wedding over this brother!

Nurse: Oh anyone you know?

Danny: Jonny Allen, the man i hate, the man who put me in this place!

Nurse: There's no good getting yourself upset Danny, ill be back in a bit, just going to get your tablets

the nurse leaves

Danny: A wedding! Why wasnt I invited? Oh no poor Danny might mess it up!

Danny gets up and leaves the room

Danny: Well I've just invited myself, im checking out of this place... i'ts time to show him what i really think of him!

Katy
08-07-2005, 11:50
wow. It will be intereting see what will happen when he gets to the wedding.

Bryan
08-07-2005, 11:53
if the wedding happens... ill say no more

Katy
08-07-2005, 11:55
dont say that i want to know what happens. Your scripts are gripping

Babe14
08-07-2005, 11:59
Love the Danny bits..I think I can guess what he's going to do, shall wait and see if I'm right or wrong:)

Bryan
08-07-2005, 12:01
there are many options as to what he could do, only wq actually knows as i suggested it in a thread

Katy
08-07-2005, 12:55
i'm intriged

Bryan
08-07-2005, 12:58
well it kicks off in the next part and carries on being gripping until the end

Debs
08-07-2005, 17:38
good script bondboffin!

Bryan
10-07-2005, 10:30
Just relaised I've inlcuded Alfie, when he left xmas of 05, for the purpose of this presume he returned to be back with kat or mo, whoever you decide.

Part Four

Scene 1 - Pat's House - Day

Pat puts on the radio in the kitchen "Rocking Around The Chrsistams Tree" plays. Tina runs down the stairs excited.

Tina: I can't believe it! It finally happening! I'm getting married! Today!

Pat: You wont be so happy a couple of months down the line, trust me ive done it four times, and i have the scars to prove it.

Tina: Oh dont put a downer on it Pat, I want today to be the best christmas ever, i gonna get ready...

Pat: I know you wont, we've got presents to open first, the best bit about christmas...

The pair walk into the Lounge and sit down on the sofa, Pat picks up a box shaped present and shakes it

Pat: Oh i wonder what this one could be?...

Tina's phone rings, she answers it.

Tina: Jonny...you shouldnt be phoning me....well its bad luck isnt it?... yes i know but i dont want things to go wrong today... on my wedding day

she smiles with delight at Pat, who is pleased for her.

Scene 2 - Jonny's House - Day

Jonny is on the phone to Tina, he sneaks a peek out of the living room window but dosent see her.

Jonny: ....I cant wait...I'll see you in..(looks at watch) three hours! love you... bye.

Jonny puts his phone in his pocket, Alfie walks in carrying a plate of croissants

Alfie: Righty o folks, breakfast is served!

Jonny: I dont think i could stomach any

Alfie: (stuffing crossiant in his mouth) what last minutes nerves getting the better of you?

Jonny: a woman will never get me nervous

Alfie: strange they have the completly opposite effect on me...

Ruby walks in a rush, carrying a make up bag

Ruby: Right then dad im off to Pat's to get ready

Jonny: Okay then, ill see you later darling

Ruby rushes out of the house, as she opens the door to leave Jake walks in

Jonny: Oh about time...i was beginning to think my best man had let me down

Jake: Oh no, i value my life...

Jonny laughs and sits down, he starts to eat a crossaint regardless of nerves

Alfie: Crossiant?

Jake: No... (moves alfie to one side and whispers) Alfie we have a problem...

Alfie: What kind of problem?

Jake: It's Danny, he's left the hospital...

Alfie: What do you mean he's left the hopsital?

Jake: Just walked out, and no-one has a clue where he is. I've been rushing around half of London last night looking for him.

Alfie: Well dya think he's gonna cause a scene today?

Jake: I dont know but if he does i ent gotta clue how Jonny will react...

Jonny: A problem boys?

Jake: Oh no no it's nothing...

Jonny: Good becuase nothing and noone is spoiling today for me and Tina.

Alfie and Jake look at each other in worry.

Scene 3 - Pat's House - Day

Tina is dressed in her wedding dress, her hair is all done, and she puts on her tiara. Pat looks at Tina.

Pat: Awww dont you look a picture?

Tina: Do you really think so?

Pat: You look really prity Tina.

Tina: Thanks

Pat: If you dont mind I'm just going to go around to Dennis', drop his and Sharon's present around if that ok?

Tina: Yeah sure, just remember the car's will be here in a bit... Stacey and Ruby need to hurry up

Pat: Oh when Mo Harris does a fry-up theres no hope for an hour or so! Anyways I'll be back in a bit.

Pat leaves, a few seconds late rthe door slams shut. Tina stares at herself in the mirror, she smiles. All of a sudden a window smashes down stars.

A worried Tina creeps down the stairs, as she turns the corner, Danny grabs her and gags her.

Danny: A wedding? Wheres my invite hey! hey! ah well it dont matter, becuase there isnt going to be a wedding anymore!

Danny drags Tina out towards the back

Tina: (Muffled) Help!

squarelady
10-07-2005, 10:34
I've just read this! (obviously or I wouldn't be replying!) It's really good, I love the idea of Danny being in a Mental Home!

Katy
10-07-2005, 16:29
[B]

A worried Tina creeps down the stairs, as she turns the corner, Jake grabs her and gags her.



shoudnt it be danny that gags her. i might be wrong just wondering though

Bryan
10-07-2005, 16:36
shoudnt it be danny that gags her. i might be wrong just wondering though

no it was meant to be danny, i am always getting them two nmixed up, sorry

Katy
10-07-2005, 16:38
just wondered. Its really really good.

Jessie Wallace
10-07-2005, 18:30
more more more, i love it

Angeldelight
10-07-2005, 19:06
wow... have just read it all and it's brill... i like the fact that Danny's come back for some MORE revenge... hehe... let's just hope that Johnny really doesn't kill him this time... more more more... please post more... SOON... more more more...

crumpet
10-07-2005, 20:06
Get Back Now And Get The Next Part Up!

Jessie Wallace
14-07-2005, 01:18
Come on Bond, we have been waiting ages for the next part.

Bryan
14-07-2005, 15:35
Come on Bond, we have been waiting ages for the next part.

i want to make sure it is good... and im just plotting how i will do the next few parts, as i know how it ends but still got a bit to go yet

Bryan
14-07-2005, 16:12
Part Five

Scene 1 - Jonny's House - Day

Jonny is sitting nervously on the sofa, a car horn beeps outside, Jake and Alfie walk into the room dressed in smart suits. Jake is Jonny's best man, Alfie an usher.

Jake: You carraige awaits then sir...

Jonny: It's a BMW Jake, not a pumpkin carraige

Alfie: Yeah well unforntualey the Fairy Godmother's away for christmas Jonny

Jonny: (Saracastic) Very funny, now come on then guys lets get cracking

Jake: You're totally sure about this?

Jonny: Put it this way, I may be Jonny Allen, but even I wont dare cross Tina in the wrong way...

Alfie: Ah i can see who wears the trousers in this household Jonny

Jonny: Yes, me Alfie, but if i annoy Tina, then i dont get them ironed, do I?

The three of them laugh as they leave the house, preparing for the happiest day of Jonny's life.

Scene 2 - Car - Day

An empty motorway, Danny is driving his car at a fast spped, Tina is sprawled across the back seats, tied up and gagged, she is mumbling...

Danny: You're not getting married this morning...ding dong them bells arent gonna chime, what's that Tina? "I'm Mad?" well that isnt a nice thing to say to someone who's got could easily kill you is it?

Tina muffles in fear.

Danny: Oh dont worry...i wouldnt do that.. thats more Jonny's kind of thing than mine. I just want to make him suffer... like he's made me do for the past year and half!

Tina muffles once more.

Scene 3 - Church - Day

The residents of Walford are sat in the church awaiting Tina to walk down the isle. Jonny and Jake are sitting standing at the front: Tina is late.

Jonny: Where is? What is taking her so long...?

Jake: Have you tried calling her?

Jonny: Switched off, has been all night, acoring to her if i phone her its bad luck.

Jake: Look dont panic, she'll be here, I'll just go outside and see what's happening. You stay here...

Jake rushes outside, Alfie stops him on his way

Alfie: He...Hey...Jake everything alright?

Jake: Yeah

Jake goes outside and phones up Pat

Jake: Yeah Pat...it's Jake, where are you all?

The scene keeps cutting rom Pat to Jake. Pat is sitting in the kitchen at her house, Ruby is distraught and Stacey is sweeping up the broken glass.

Pat: We're still at the house...Tina's disseapeared...

Jake: What do you mean dissapeared?

Pat: Well she's not here! And no-one has a clue where she is!... Look Jake i dont like the look of it, the kitchen door has been smashed in, and...

Jake: You what? God dya think something's happened?

Pat: I dont know but...

Jake cuts her off, he brushes his hair back with his hands in disbelif.

Jake: (To Self) God Danny, what have you done?

crumpet
14-07-2005, 18:18
O MY GOD!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD! DONT MAKE DANNY ANOTHER JONNY ALLEN AND DONT YOU DARE KNOCK DANNY OFF!!! thankyou!

Bryan
14-07-2005, 18:21
O MY GOD!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD! DONT MAKE DANNY ANOTHER JONNY ALLEN AND DONT YOU DARE KNOCK DANNY OFF!!! thankyou!

you'll have to wait and see what happens...we have a lot in store yet

crumpet
14-07-2005, 21:07
Awwww! You're Mean! I Cant Wait That Long!

CrazyLea
14-07-2005, 22:17
this is really good! cant wait to see what happens!

Jessie Wallace
14-07-2005, 23:18
I can't cope with the tension.

Bryan
15-07-2005, 10:43
Part Six

Scene 1 - Abandoned Factory - Day

Danny parks his car in a deserted car park. He gets out and opens the door, he drags Tina out, she muffles.

Danny: Dont worry, we're here now...you're new home for a bit...

He unties the gag from her mouth, and she breaths hard for breath

Tina: For how long?

Danny: For as long as it takes...it depends on Jonny dosent it?

Scene 2 - Church - Day

Jake is outside panicking, Pat phones him up he answers.

Jake: Yeh sorry Pat got cut off...i havent got a clue what to do?... i dont think shes gone by choice....welll someone must have taken her....i dont know who! Jonny has a lot of enemies... well how can be tell him... he'd go mental. ... I'll ring ya back in a bit...bye.

Jake turns to go into the curch, and bumps into someone...he looks around...It's Jonny. Jake is shocked.

Scene 3 - Abandoned Factory - Day

Tina is sat on a chair, he hands tied behind the chair. Danny walks in with a box.

Danny: Thought I'd brighten the place up abit..it's christmas day after all.

Danny ties Tinas hand sup with tinsel and rabs some around his own neck.

Danny: So how's your day going?

Tina: I've had better...why are you doing this Danny?

Danny: I've already told you to get back at Jonny...i want some justice...i need revenge.

Tina: Wasn't setting fire to his house bad enough?

Danny: If it was then we wouldnt be here now would we?

Tina: Look Danny you're being a fool, when Jonny finds you he's going to kill you.

Danny: Not if i kill him...or you... or Ruby first.

He smiles menacingly at Tina.

Danny: Happy Christmas Tina...

CrazyLea
15-07-2005, 12:10
oo what happens next...... post the next part >.< lol

Bryan
15-07-2005, 12:47
oo what happens next...... post the next part >.< lol

you'll have to wait till tomorrow for the next part :p

CrazyLea
15-07-2005, 12:54
nooooo :p im going to have to wait a whole week. i go on holiday tomorow til the following friday >.< lol

Bryan
15-07-2005, 12:56
nooooo :p im going to have to wait a whole week. i go on holiday tomorow til the following friday >.< lol

at least you can read the while finished script tough by then! and loads and loads of eastend capers as i do about 3 of them per day!

CrazyLea
15-07-2005, 12:57
oo i supose thats beeter. cause then i wont have to keep on wandering.. i can just read straight through :D

Bryan
16-07-2005, 17:16
Part Seven

Scene 1 - Church - Day

Jonny has just overheard Jake's conversation with Pat.

Jake: Jonny...

Jonny: I'd go mental about what...?

Jake: Oh they're stuck in traffic...

Jonny: Traffic?

Jake: Yeah

Jonny: It's christmas day Jake...

Jake is unsure where to go from this.

Jonny: Tell me the truth Jake...

Jake: Okay then...it's Tina...she dissapeared...Pat hasn't got a clue where she's gone...it looks like someone's kidnapped her...

Jonny: Oh my god! I've got to get back there...

Jake: Dont be so hasty Jonny...we dont know for sure...

Jonny: If Tina's in trouble I need to find her!

Jake: But...

Jonny: Jake, you'd better not be trying to cover up for Danny...if he's behind this, I'll kill him...for real this time!

Part 2 - Abandoned Factory - Day

Tina is still tied to the chair, Danny is walking around her.

Danny: Little Donkey, Little Donkey, On the Dusty Road, Little Donkey Carry Mary Safley On Her...

Danny's mobile phone rings, its Jake ringing, he answers it.

Danny: Hello bruv...happy christmas...Tina?...No i haven't seen her...

Tina makes a loud muffled sound

Danny: No that wasnt her...it's just some freak having a spasm attack next to me... what? .... of course i havent left there... (worried) okay Jakey I have....and I've got Tina... i wanted to teach him a lesson! Look tell Jonny I'll meet him...at the park...

Part 3 - Walford Park - Day

Jonny and Jake are nervously hanging around the park.

Jake: Please Jonny dont be hasty...

Jonny: Haven't we been here before Jake?

Jake: He's not in a stable mind...and i cant imagine you are either at the moment...

Jonny: He cnat just set fire to peoples homes and kidnap people Jake, he needs teaching a lesson...

Jake: Well let me teach it him then, he dosent desevre to die, he's just messeed up in the head...

Jonny: Tell me something i dont know...what's taking him so long...

Danny hides behind a hedge, he sees Jake and Jonny in the distance and heads off towards Albert Square.

Scene 4 - Jonny's House - Day

Ruby has got changed back into her own clothes, she is talking to Stacey in the living room, when the door bell rings. She goes to answer it. She opens the door...

Ruby: Danny...

Danny: Merry Christmas Ruby... Common you're coming with me

Ruby: No way!

Danny points a gun at her,

Danny: I said you're coming with me...

Ruby: Stacey!

Stacey heads towards Ruby, but sees Danny with a gun.

Stacey: Ruby...

Danny: Stay there or I'll shoot (to ruby) Common move it!

Danny drags her down the steps

Ruby: Help!

crumpet
16-07-2005, 17:25
you ARE SO MEAN! I AM NOT GONNA REAQD ANYNMORE OF YOUR SCRIPT IF YOU DO SOMETHING TO RUBY

crumpet
16-07-2005, 17:26
joking about that by the way

Bryan
16-07-2005, 17:31
you ARE SO MEAN! I AM NOT GONNA REAQD ANYNMORE OF YOUR SCRIPT IF YOU DO SOMETHING TO RUBY

maybe its Ruby that does something... :p

Tamzi
16-07-2005, 17:37
Thisis Fab. I missed it being away. Danny is going crazy, now he has Tina and Ruby! More please
xxx

Angeldelight
16-07-2005, 21:13
oh Danny Danny Danny... what are you doing? johnny's guna kill you for sure... noooooooo you can't leave it there... i have to know more... post more soon... more more more...

Bryan
17-07-2005, 15:59
Part Eight

Scene 1 - Abandonded Factory - Day

Danny opens the door and pushes Ruby inside.

Ruby: Tina!

Tina muffles from under the tinsel.

Danny: Thought I'd bring your a christmas present Tina. Now i've got two to play with, Jonny will be going out of his head.

Ruby: Why are you doing this danny?

Danny: To get back at that *******, that you call a dad!

Danny walks up to Tina, he takes off her gag and she gasps for breath

Tina: Ruby...

Ruby runs over to Tina and hugs her

Tina: Don't worry, he isnt going to hurt us...are you Danny?

Danny: Maybe...maybe not, but its about time that Jonyn came for a chat...

Scene 2 - Walford Park - Day

Jake and Jonny are still in the park, Jonny is getting extremly inpatient

Jonny: How did i know that he wouldnt show? I bet he's getting some perverse kick out of this, if he lays a finger on Tina...

Stacey runs down Bridge street and towards the park

Stacey: Jonny!!! Jonny!!

Jonny rushes towards the sound of Stacey's voice.

Jonny: What? What is it?

Stacey: It's Danny, he's just come...and he's taken Ruby!

Jake: You what!?

Stacey: He had a gun and everything!!!

Jonny: Oh no! What is he playing at Jake! I'm going to kill him!

Jonny wips Jake's phoen from his pocket.

Jake: Hey...

Jonny dials Danny's number

Jonny: Danny its me! What the hell do you think you are doing!... If you do anything to them your a dead man, dya hear me!... where are you?....

Jonny turns the phone off.

Stacey: Are they okay?

Jonny: He's got them in some factory over the river....common we've gotta go and save them.

The three of them rush out of the park.

Part Three - Abandoned Factory - Day

Danny puts his phone away.

Danny: Mr Big's on his way...the final showdown...

Danny loads his gun.

Ruby: Why are you doing this to us Danny? Why are you doing it to dad?

Danny: Revenge?

Tina: What for? I mean you ste fire to his house becuase he told you off...your a stupid little boy Danny.

Danny: Oh you think that is stupid do you Tina... well i wonder why the people set fire to his old house?

Ruby: Please Danny dont talk about that...

Danny: Maybe i wont to... after all what did Jonny do the person who set fire to his house

Ruby: He killed them... he told me...

Danny: Oh no he didnt do... becuase they are still alive to this day... becuase it wasn't some vengeful buisness rival at all Ruby.... it was Tina

Angeldelight
17-07-2005, 16:38
wow... wow... what's guna happen to Danny... what about what Danny said about Tina... is it the truth? hmmm... will Johnny really kill Danny? what about JJAke and Ruby... more more more... you HAVE to poat MORE... please don't keep me in suspense...

Katy
17-07-2005, 16:50
its getting well exciting.

melonb
17-07-2005, 19:11
:eek: :eek: was it really tina!!
fabby more soon please!!! :cheer:

Jessie Wallace
17-07-2005, 19:36
This is like a book you can't put down!

Bryan
17-07-2005, 19:41
This is like a book you can't put down!

except by me doing it only once a day its just like you having to put it down :p

Tamzi
17-07-2005, 20:35
Was it really Tina? This is brillaint. More please
xxx

Jessie Wallace
18-07-2005, 00:24
except by me doing it only once a day its just like you having to put it down :p

That's coz your mean to me. How many part's are there to this one?

Bryan
18-07-2005, 11:07
2 more parts...and 2 people die!!!

Katy
18-07-2005, 11:36
no. dont kill any one

Jessie Wallace
18-07-2005, 13:09
It had better not be Ruby.

Bryan
18-07-2005, 13:29
It had better not be Ruby.

possibilities danny, jake, ruby, tina, jonny

Jessie Wallace
18-07-2005, 13:35
I'll be after you Bryan if it's my Ruby! I'm not gonna say who i'd like it to be, incase i get linched!

Bryan
18-07-2005, 13:53
Part Nine

Scene 1 - Motorway - Night

Jonny is speeding down the motor way in his car, Jake is sitting next to him, and Stacey is sat in the back.

Stacey: He had a gun and everything! What if he blows their brains out...

Jonny: Shut up Stacey!

Stacey: Theres no point in living in happy ever after land, stuff happens, people die...

Jake: Shut up Stacey!

Stacey: God I was just saying...

Jonny: Well dont! Besides if anyone gets killed Today it's going to be Danny!

Jake: Jonny...

Stacey: Great! This is turning out to be a great day...

Scene 2 - Abandoned Factory - Night

Ruby: You what? Are you lying Danny?

Danny: Why would I? What have I to gain by saying that..?

Ruby: Is it true Tina... did you start the fire?

Tina: Dont listen to him, he's just....

Ruby: Is he telling the truth!

Tina dosent answer, she looks down ashamed

Ruby: Tina!

Danny: Go on, tell princess Ruby the truth, tell her how you set fire to the house and smiled afterwards...

Ruby: You cow!

Ruby slaps Tina, Tina is still tied to the chair and so cant defend herself.

Danny: Let the fun begin..

Tina: I'm so sorry Ruby, I didnt mean to...

Ruby: You didnt mean to! How can you do it unintentallyt, if you set fire to a house its becuase you want to!

Tina: Look...I had no choice!

Ruby: Why did you do it? Why did you kill mom and Scarlet!

Tina: Jonny...he promised he'd leave Stephanie for me, but she kept on threatning that shed take you away, and he wouldnt, so i wnated her out of the way!

Ruby: You evil little Cow, she kicks the chair and it falls to the floor, and she starts kicking Tina.

Jonny's car pulls up outside the factory.

Jonny: This has got to be the place...

Jake: Jonny think before you go and do anything...

Jonny: Just leave me to it Jake...

Jonny and Jake get out of the car, Stacey is about to but Jonny piuts the child lock on. She bangs on the glass

Stacey: Hey let me out!

Jonny: Stay in there

Jake and Jonny run towards the warehouse, a loud gunshot is fired...

Jessie Wallace
18-07-2005, 14:16
Oh, very good, next part before 1pm tomorrow please as i'm going out! thanks. Lol

Bryan
18-07-2005, 14:20
Oh, very good, next part before 1pm tomorrow please as i'm going out! thanks. Lol

hum...i my be evil and do it at 1:01pm :p

Jessie Wallace
18-07-2005, 14:22
Your already being evil, your killing 2 of the Eastenders cast!

Bryan
18-07-2005, 14:25
Your already being evil, your killing 2 of the Eastenders cast!

:thumbsup:

Jessie Wallace
18-07-2005, 14:32
meanie. Lol

Jessie Wallace
19-07-2005, 11:41
Only two hours to go now Bond get writing!! Lol

Bryan
19-07-2005, 11:49
im going out for the day, will post tomoz :thumbsup:

can you do nana and jake today dawn?

Jessie Wallace
19-07-2005, 12:00
you can't leave us in suspence!

Katy
22-07-2005, 13:51
i just caught up. (internet been playing up) the suspense is killing me.

Jessie Wallace
22-07-2005, 14:07
Come on Bond we want the final part.

Bryan
25-07-2005, 13:41
right then, finally the last part, sorry for the big delay ive had a lot on what with packing for Iceland and making my site. Well here it is, hope you enjoy:

Part Ten

Scene 1 - Abandoned Factory - Day

A gunshot echoes across the factory. Jonny and Jake rush into the building. Tina is lying on the floor in a puddle of blood, a gun is lying on the floor. Ruby is sobbing in a ball on the floor.

Jonny: No!!!! Tina!!!!

Jonny runs towards her and holds her, she is dead.

Jonny: (To Jake) You did this? You idiot! You stupid idiot! I might have forgiven you time after time before, but this...i cant forgive you for!

Jake: Danny how could you

Danny: I wasn't me!

Jonny puts on some gloves, then picks up the gun off the floor

Jonny: No more excuses Danny, i dont want to here them, you're times up

Jake: Please, no Jonny dont!

Jonny points his gun at Danny and shoots him down to the floor, Danny clucthes hold of his chest in pain and falls to his knees.

Jake: No!

Jake rushes to Jake's aid, he cluthes him in his arms, it's clear Jonny had adminstarted a deathing shot, Jake whispers his last words

Danny: It wasn't me...

Danny closes his eyes. Jake starts to sob heavily.

Jake: Why did you do that!!!

Jonny: He needed to be taught a lesson...

Jake: Why did you alwayts have to "teach lessons"? He told you he didnt shoot her!

Jonny: Who did then? The invisble assasin!?

Ruby: It was me...

Jonny turns round, almost forgetting that Ruby was in the factory.

Jonny: (shocked) Ruby....

Ruby: It was me, i did it, i shot Tina

Jonny: You?...but why?

Ruby: Becuase she killed mom and Scarlet! She set fire to the house!

Jonny: No... she couldn't have... it was Rick Laslett, i made him paid...i killed him for it...

Jake: Seems you've got a liking for killing innocent people Jonny!!

Jonny: Jake, I'm so sorry.

Jake: Sorry dosent mean nothing Jonny! Sorry wont bring Danny back! When will you learn? Violence and death isnt the answer!

Jonny: He set fire to my house, kidnapped my fiance and daughter, what was i supposed to think???

Jake: Theres no point in arguing Jonny, he's dead now...and so is Tina, and i hope you pair pay for what you've done!

Jonny: Unforunate Danny, bit mad in the head, shoots Tina as revenge, then panicks and shoots himself, terrible buisness...

Jake: How can you brush it off so casually?...I'll make you pay for this Jonny!

Jonny: Havent we all paid enough already? We'll all going to have to be haunted by this day for the rest of our lives Jake, we may have lost people today, but they deserved it, and now at least I've learnt a lesson, not to overeact with vegance, it only ends in tears, so then Jake, what dya say? leave it in the past?

Jake is still cruying, he nods his head.

Jonny: Good, well come on then, it's Christmas Day after all, Eastenders will be on a bit, wonder what's going to happen?

The 3 of them walk out of the factory...

Katy
25-07-2005, 13:44
another great script by the bondboffin.

Have a good time in iceland

Bryan
25-07-2005, 13:48
another great script by the bondboffin.

Have a good time in iceland

thank you, ill try to :)

when i return ill be focusing on doing eastend capers with the return of two of eastenders most loved characters KB and CB, ill say no more

Jessie Wallace
25-07-2005, 20:18
Niceone mate

CrazyLea
28-07-2005, 19:41
wow thats a really good script :)

crumpet
29-07-2005, 21:18
is that the end???? this is SO cool!

~*~Leanne~*~
07-08-2005, 20:51
these are great