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hdmf16
28-06-2005, 22:19
This was my first ever fic I wrote, and I just came across it on my computer, so I thought i'd post it here;

Smile Like You Mean It


(Dennis and Sharon were lying side by side, both staring up at the ceiling
in silence; the only light was that of the full moon outside the open window.
They were both reflecting on what they had just done, not knowing how to feel about it)

Dennis: Sharon?
Sharon: Yes?
Dennis: What are you thinking?
Sharon: I don’t know. I enjoyed what we did. It’s just…
Dennis: What? What is it?
Sharon: …Well it’s wrong isn’t it? I mean brother and sister…
Dennis: Did it feel right when we were dong it?
Sharon: Well… Yes.
Dennis: So what is the problem then?

(There was a pause)

Sharon: Well, its wrong isn’t it?
Dennis: What, two people who love each other very much, committing and act of love with each other?
Sharon: No, but… I don’t know… It’s the fact that we have to keep it secret, like two naughty little school kids, going off for some fun behind the bike sheds, because no one in the square will except our relation ship for what it is, will they?
Dennis: Why should we care what everyone else thinks? Screw them. We love each other, so that’s all that matters. Right?

(Dennis and Sharon both turn on their sides to face each other, Dennis
reaches out and strokes Sharon’s face before reaching to hold her hand)

Sharon: I suppose…
Dennis: You don’t look sure.
Sharon: I’m not.
Dennis: Why? There’s nothing wrong with anything we do, we love each other so nobody, including you should have a problem. I don’t.
Sharon: Your right, why should we care?
Dennis: You still don’t sound sure…
Sharon: No. (pause) I am sure. Its up to us what we do, we’re both adults, we can make our own decisions.
Dennis: Well smile like you mean it then.

(Dennis and Sharon both lay staring at each other, smiling and feeling
happy, before falling asleep cuddled up together)

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Now, do you guys actualy want the next bit or not? If you don't thats fine, i'd just rather know. :D

Jade
28-06-2005, 22:21
very good, more please!!!

true.moon
28-06-2005, 22:21
lol is all i can say

true.moon
28-06-2005, 22:22
more
more
more

hdmf16
28-06-2005, 22:43
Thanks.

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(Dennis was the first to awake at 9 ‘o’ clock; he lay staring and taken in
Sharon’s beauty, before she finally awoke at 9:15)

Dennis: Morning. How are you this morning?
Sharon: I’m all right thanks. You?
Dennis: Yes. I’m good. What are you thinking?
Sharon: Nothing.
Dennis: You ready to go downstairs?
Sharon: Yes, in a minuet, I’m just going to the loo first. I’ll see you downstairs.
Dennis: Ok. See you downstairs in a minuet then.

(Dennis and Sharon both get out of bed, they both walk to the bedroom door together, before embracing each other in their arms. Sharon looks at Dennis before they give each other a quick kiss on the lips. Before they opened the door, Dennis heads downstairs and Sharon heads of to the toilet. When Dennis gets to the kitchen, Vicky is standing cooking toast)

Vicky: Morning Dennis. Where Sharon?
Dennis: Just going to the toilet, she’ll be down in a minuet.
Vicky: Oh, ok, do you want any toast?
Dennis: Yes please. Just butter.

(Sharon walks into the kitchen)

Sharon: Morning Vicky.
Vicky: Morning. Do you want toast? I’m doing Dennis some.
Sharon: No thanks Vicky.
Vicky: Sure?
Sharon: Yes thanks.

(Vicky butters two slices of toast and hands them to Dennis)

Dennis: Thanks Vicky.
Vicky: That’s ok, sure I can’t get you any Sharon?
Sharon: Yes thanks.

(Through the door falls the mail)

Vicky: I’ll go get that.

(Vicky leaves the kitchen)

Dennis: About last night, nothing has changed has it?
Sharon: What do you mean?
Dennis: Well do you still, you know…
Sharon: What feel happy about what we did?
Dennis: Yes.
Sharon: Do you?
Dennis: Yes.
Sharon: Then, nothings changed, we love each other, so why should people have a problem if we want to go and make love with each other.

(Vicky walks back into the kitchen, with a horrified look on her face)

Vicky: I herd that! You two… I mean… Your brother and sister!

squillyfer
28-06-2005, 23:27
more asap

true.moon
29-06-2005, 08:52
more more more

hdmf16
01-07-2005, 00:01
Thanks, more.

(All 3 stand staring at each other, Dennis puts down his toast on the kitchen side)

Dennis: Vicky.
Vicky: Its wrong!
Sharon: Vicky.
Vicky: I can’t…
Dennis: VICKY!

(Vicky stops and looks at Dennis)

Dennis: Stop shouting! Look were sorry but it how we feel about each other and I’m afraid not you, not anyone else can change that.
Vicky: Yes. But…
Sharon: But nothing Vicky, we’re both grown adults, we’re perfectly capable of making our own decisions.
Vicky: Yes, but it doesn’t mean they’re the right ones.
Sharon: But Vicky, it is the right one for us, me and Dennis.
Dennis: Its what we want.
Sharon: We’re both happy with it, why shouldn’t you be?

(Dennis pulls out a chair around the kitchen tables a motions Vicky to sit down, she does, Dennis and Sharon both pull out a chair to and sit down next to each other opposite Vicky)

Vicky: Well you two are my brother and sister, your each others brother and sister, you shouldn’t be making love with each other, its not right…
Sharon: But what’s wrong in two people who love each other very much making love?
Vicky: Nothing…
Dennis: So that means there shouldn’t be a problem with us doing it.

(Dennis put his arm around Sharon)

Vicky: But there is! It’s WRONG!

(Vicky storms out the house, slamming the door behind her, Sharon looks at Dennis and removes his arm from around her shoulder)

Sharon: You know Dennis, I’m not sure this is right...

Harmanizing
01-07-2005, 13:51
Yes carry on please! I love reading new Shannis stories.

phils little sister
01-07-2005, 13:53
very good!

melonb
01-07-2005, 18:56
o no she cant back out now!!!! :eek: :crying: stupid vickki!! :wall:
more soon please!!!! :cheer: :thumbsup: :wub:

Angeldelight
02-07-2005, 22:53
wow... wow... this is brilliant... fantastic... oh Vicki don't spoil it for them... they love each other... come on Sharon don't back out now... YOU LOVE HIM... more more more... more SOON...

Chris_2k11
02-07-2005, 23:00
Cool script! :)

di marco
03-07-2005, 16:25
fab! :D just read it all. stupid vikki causing a fuss like that! and sharon you know you love dennis and want to be with him! :) more very very soon please, cant wait

Harmanizing
10-07-2005, 12:39
Have you finished this? I was hoping it would keep going.

hdmf16
10-07-2005, 19:00
Sorry, guys, I sorta forgot about this, untill I found an email today... I'll post the ext bit now. And thanks.

hdmf16
10-07-2005, 19:01
[i](Dennis looks shocked)

Dennis: What? Why?
Sharon: Well, we’re not likely to ever excepted in the square as a couple are we?
Dennis: Why should we care what everyone thinks?
Sharon: Because…
Dennis: Because what?
Sharon: Well, Vicky thought it was wrong, so no one else is going to thinks its right are they? We’ll be outcast from the square.

[i](Dennis looks at Sharon)

Dennis: Why?
Sharon: Because they…
Dennis: No. Why stay in the square? What is here for us? Nothing.
Sharon: No we have friends, family here and roots, why leave?
Dennis: We can start from scratch, together, just us two. That’s all that matters is that we’re together.
Sharon: But is it?
Dennis: Yes, what do you think, should we leave the square forever?
Sharon: But what about our family and friends?
Dennis: What about them? As long as we have each other…
Sharon: Yes lets do it. As long as we have each other.

[i](Dennis and Sharon embrace each other in the arms and Dennis gives Sharon a quick kiss)

Dennis: So that’s it then, we’re going to leave the square forever.

Angeldelight
10-07-2005, 19:08
yey yey yey... i'm glad they're going to be together... can see everyone finding out and them leaving is going to go smoothly though... i cna't wait... more more more...

di marco
11-07-2005, 09:41
brill! :D yay that theyre getting together but i dont want them to leave! :) more very soon please, cant wait

Harmanizing
18-07-2005, 15:08
Please post some more of this story, I was really enjoying it.

hdmf16
19-07-2005, 11:32
Sorry guys. And thanks.

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Sharon: Yes,
Dennis: We better go pack then.

(Sharon and Dennis both leave the kitchen to pack their stuff)

Sharon: How much should we take?
Dennis: Only the essentials, clothes, toiletries, etc.
Sharon: Where are we actually going to go?
Dennis: I don’t know yet.

(Sharon and Dennis both return to the kitchen after packing)

Sharon: Shouldn’t we leave a note?
Dennis: Yes we’d better.

(Sharon writes out a note that reads:)
To all,

Dennis and I have decided that for us, it’s best to leave the square for good.

Please don’t try to find us.

Love Sharon and Dennis.
Xxx

Sharon: There. Well I guess this is it, lets go.

(Dennis calls for a cab to the train station)

Dennis: The beginning of the beginning of the rest of our live… together.
Sharon: Yes, together.

(From outside is the sound of a car horn)

Dennis: That must be the taxi, c’mon
Sharon: Yes.

(Sharon takes a deep breath before following Dennis out of the house and into the taxi)

Driver: Where to mate?
Dennis: The train station please.
Driver: Ok mate, going on holiday?
Dennis: Yes. Something like that.

(As the taxi pulled away, Sharon and Dennis both looked out the window, reflecting on what they were leaving behind, not knowing where they were going, only knowing they were leaving the square for good)

Angeldelight
19-07-2005, 18:48
awwwwww... she didn't back out... where are they going? why are they leaving? they can''t leave they have to stay... stupid Vicki... she was so mean... more more more... please post more soon... more more more... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

stapler
19-07-2005, 19:46
More soon please.

melonb
21-07-2005, 21:42
aww fabby!! :wub:
more soon please!! :cheer:

Jessie Wallace
27-07-2005, 23:10
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Charmed
06-08-2005, 00:45
I'm not usually a huge shannis fan,but I like this script!

~*~Leanne~*~
07-08-2005, 20:51
these are great