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crumpet
18-06-2005, 08:52
yep! if you are reading this, as you probably guessed, it's A DOCTOR WHO SCRIPT AGAIN!(christopher eccleston is the doctor in this script, and the other 2 scripts i did)

this starts when the doctor has found rose and they are talking

rose:what?

doctor: i said how old are you?

rose: who wants to know?

doctor: i do now come on, tell me!

rose: 19

doctor:really?

rose: you tell me yours now!

doctor: i prefer not to

rose: tell me or i'm walking away right now!

doctor:. ok,ok,ok!! i'll tell you

rose: wow, i didnt think that would work

doctor: promise you wont laugh?

rose:i promise

doctor: i, i , i'm 900

rosE: are you joking?

doctor: NO! now listen, what's your name?, um, rose is it? now listen, you cant tell ANYONE about me!

rose: . ok! i wont . tell me, are you an alien?

doctor yes and i want you to come with me!

rose: were?

doctor: wereevre!

rose: if you're an alien, hey! i've watched programmes like this before, an alien, time traveler comes, drags them back to his aspace ship and kills them when she isn't need any longer, well sorry mate but i dont taste very nice so i aint going with ya!

doctor: what?

rose: you are a time traveller arent you?

doctor: yeah,

rose: then i am not coming with you just so you can eat me later on!

doctor: what programmes was this?

rose: um, on themake believe channels, dont worry, i wont tell noone but i am not coming with you!

doctor: please come with me, i promise i wont do what ever you said i would do, cos i like earth people

rose: promise?

doctor: yeah!

rose: ok, i'll come with you!

doctor: great! now go inside that police box

rose: why?

doctor: it's my special time travell thing

rose goes in and and looks around and something comes in and takes makes rose into a living curse
the doctor walks in
doctor: .......... O MY GOD!

crumpet
18-06-2005, 17:01
rose had red wings and red eyes and a really nice red leather suit , (that doesn't squeak when you move) and red everything including lipstick but black eyeliner and mascara and really nice skin tone so she pretty much looks like them girls you dream of wanting to be

doctor: what happened?

rose was still collapsed

doctor does that thing that makes people breath, rose wakes up

doctor: what happened to you?

rose: get away from me!

doctor: why?

rose: i'm a curse!

doctor: what makes you think that?

rose: a man came, he-he said magic words and i collapsed and all i remember him saying is that i'm a curse!

doctor: come here!

rose: no

doctor: ROSE TYLER, COME HERE

rose: why?

doctor i need to check somthing

rose:ok

she walks up to the doctor and he looks staraight into her eyes and he strokes her red highlighted hair and rose collapses AGAIN

doctor: finaly! it worked! now i can see what's going on with her!

after4 hours, the doctor strokes rose's hair again for 30 seconds and she wakes up

rose: what happened? why havn't i got red stuff anymore? YESSSSSSSSSS! i aint cursed no more!

doctor: yeah, but we need to find that man

rose does a backflip and lands on her feet

doctor: were'd you learn that?

rose: school

doctor: o, ok, lets go

rose: and were'd you learn that knocking me out thing?

doctor: school

rose: yeah right, anyway, you are not taking me anywere till i get changed!

doctor: o all right then, dont take forever!

5 minutes later rose came out in designer trasiners/ clothes

the doctor was just staring at rose's trainers

rose: HELLO?

the doctor didn't reply

Angeldelight
18-06-2005, 17:01
what... what... what... Oh My God what? more more more...

crumpet
18-06-2005, 17:16
doctor: those trainers, were did you get them?

rose: o, i went to a funeral and the person whio said thos prayers gave them to me,

doctr: did he swear and shout alot?

rose: o yeah, straight after, he yelledat us, i was 16 and he invited me to stay

doctor: did you?

rose slapped the doctor softly on the arm

rose: no! he was 59!

doctor: lets go

rose: were?

doctor: wear these for a start

rose put the trainers that the doctor gave her

rose: were?

doctor: just push that button here and pull here,

rose:TELL ME!

then there was a MASSIVE bang

(to be continued)

di marco
19-06-2005, 16:20
great! :D just read it all, whats the bang! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
19-06-2005, 17:02
please read all 3 of my dr who scripts, they are the links to them on my signature!

rose got thrown up in the air and she hung upside down on the cieling bar

doctor: rose! were are you?

rose dropped down onto her hands and flipped onto her feet

doctor: there you are!

rose: uh oh!

doctor: what? (he realises what rose is uh ohing about) NO NO NO!

rose is hypnotized by a light coming from the floor and collapses onto the floor.

doctor: ROSE! SNAP OUT OF IT!

he picks rose up and clicks his fingers she doesn't wake up

doctor: ROSE? WAKE UP!

he puts rose on the tardis floor and gets his sonic screwdriver and fixes the floor and bends down beside rose

doctor: rose? wake up!

rose started to have a fit and the doctor made her ok again and he opened her eyes and made the screwdriverthingy into a torch and dropped the screwdriver and dropped down and started crying

di marco
19-06-2005, 21:12
great! :D oh no whats wrong with rose! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
20-06-2005, 17:32
please read all of my scripts thankyou!

doctor: she's dead and it's all my fault!

then rose's eyes open and they are very very dark green and she floats up and her hair is like the effect of a fan in your face and your hair goes back

the doctor is just amazed and gets up and walks backwards and falls back down again and rose has really bright light coming out of her face and hands and feet and then her whole outline is bright light and she walks over to the doctor

the doctor tries to go back away from rose but he is against a wall

doctor: what are you going to do? you're meant to be dead!

(rose speaks in her normal voice but is slightly changed like alien like)

rose: i have come back to life to help

doctor:h-h-h-h-help with what?

rose doesnt answer and just stares at the doctor and very very slowy drops down and slowly walks over to the doctor with her eyes still dark green and green light is coming out of her eyes

doctor: what are you doing?

rose still doesn't answer and continues walking towards the doctor

the doctor tries to stand up but his legs are weak and looks terifie at rose

rose gets to the doctor and the doctor tries to get away but rose stops him

doctor: please, let me go,

rose looks into the doctors eyes and stares for a few seconds

doctor: o my god! she's insane!

rose: I AM NOT INSANE

doctor: then what are you?

rose: i am the gardian sent from time and space

doctor: what are you talking about?

rose: i am t-t-t-t-the gadian sent to ...........

she drifts off into a daze

doctor: rose! rose! talk to me!

she comes out of the daze and the light is fading and her eye colour is fading into grey and rose's skin is trurning yellow

doctor: she's been hypnotised! i have to do something quick!

rose has dropped to the floor and she is nearly all yellow except her face

the doctor crouches down beside rose and kisses her and her face and everything turns back to original colour

rose wakes up

rose: what happened?

doctor: you cant remember what happened?

rose: corse i do! aint thick!

doctor: yeah well you aint a gardian from time and space!

rose: yeah i know!

doctor: come here,

rose walks up to the doctor and he gives her a kiss on the forehead and hugs her

mickey is banging on the tardis door

(to be continued)

crumpet
21-06-2005, 16:31
mickey: ROSE? COME OUT HERE NOW!

rose: goes to asnwer the tardis door

mickey grabs rose and pulls her out

he takes rose to the ally nearby and starts trying to hitt her but she defends her self with a bin lid

rose starts to scream but mickey puts his hand over her mouth

the doctor hears though and he goes outside to see what's going on

mickey: you wont be travelling anymore with lover man doctor

rose: what do you mean?

mickey: you either stay with me or not live at all

rose: look, i dont love you anymore, is that a problem?

mickey: you and me are finished? and you say is that a problem? you wont live to see the doctor again, he cant save you now!

the doctor is looking round the corner, watching rose being tortured whilst he thinks of something

by now rose has been hit and cut and mickey is yelling

mickey: it's either me or death! which one do you choose?

rose: the doctor

mickey: THAT WASN'T AN OPTION!

rose: i dont care! so what if i......

mickey: SO WHAT IF I WHAT?

rose wispered

rose: so what if i love the doctor?

mickey: WHAT? YOU CANT! WHAT'S HE GOT I HAVEN'T? i must be hearing things, tell me again! and if you give the wrong answer you're dead!

he gets a knife out and puts t near rose's neck

rose yells

rose:SO WHAT IF I LOVE THE DOCTOR!

mickey is very angry and shocked and the doctor is totaly shocked and he can hardly stand!

di marco
22-06-2005, 08:17
great! :D mickey dont seem like that! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
22-06-2005, 17:17
please can you read ALL of my scripts when you have the time?

mickey raises his knife and hesitates

the doctor is thinking about how he can save rose

he finally decides what he's going to do

mickey: alright, you want the doctor, meet him in hell!

the doctor runs out just as mickey's knife goes down

rose looks up and mickey stops his knife rose smiles at the doctor and faints

mickey points his kniofe at the doctor and throws it at the doctor's head

the knife goes in but it comes out the other side of his head with no blood on

mickey: aw, this is nice isn't it? the next thing you'll say is " i love rose" go on, say it!

the doctor just pushes a button on his sonic screwdriver and mickey forgets everything and about the tardis and about the doctor!

mickey:were am i? who are you? what have you dome to my girlfriend?

doctor: i havent, look you go and see your family and i'll take rose to the hospital

mickey : um, ok i'll see you around!

he goes and the doctor takes rose back to the tardis

he looks at her sadly

rose wakes up and she is very very weak

the doctor is concentrating on something else

rose looks up at the doctor and she looks terified

the doctor turns after he hears a scuffling noise which is rose trying to get against the wall cos she is suddenly terified of the doctor

doctor: rose, what's wrong?

rose doesnt answer she is still white as a ghost

the doctor runs down and kneels next to rose and puts his arms around her and rose cries into his leather jacket

doctor: tell me what's wrong!

rose is talking through tears

rose: y-y-you m-must h-h-hate me now

doctor: now why would i think that?

rose: cos of w-w-what i said in the allyway

the doctor gave rose a tissue

rose:thanks, she stopped crying

the doctor pushed rose's hair out of her face and looked into her clear beutiful eyes

rose stared back but found it impossible to look him in the eyes

the doctor looked away but rose looked back at the doctor and leaned on his shoulder and was looking at him smiling

the doctor turned his head to look at her and his mouth met hers and they kissed.

rose fell asleep in the doctor's arms and he smiled at her and suddenly something extremely wierd happened that shouldnt have

(and it has something to do with old enimies)

di marco
22-06-2005, 17:21
great! :D wonder whats going to happen! :) more soon, cant wait
(ps. ill read the others, just dont really have the time at the mo, will read them soon though)

crumpet
22-06-2005, 17:22
i understand. i am watching the episode dalek on dr who now!!!!

i will reply in a later when i ahve had tea!

crumpet
22-06-2005, 18:51
a noise was coming from the tardis. it was moving!

the doctor gently placed rose on the floor and went to see were they were going

the doctor went green, not white, green.

rose woke up and yawned

rose: were are we going?

doctor: um, nowere

rose comes up to the doctor and looks up at him

rose:tell me!

doctor: .ok i'll tell you!

rose: so? why are you green?

doctor: we are going to the place were i fought the time war

rose: we cant be!

doctor: the tardis only takes me to places when something isn't right!

di marco
26-06-2005, 11:51
great! :D oh the time war! :) more soon, cant wait

xcutiekatiex
26-06-2005, 18:10
your script is fab well done!

crumpet
26-06-2005, 18:29
thanks! at least some people are read!

rose: then what can be bad here?

the doctor takes out an organiser and scans

rose: what was that for?

the doctor froze and started looking about

rose: what are you doing?

doctor: rose, we've gone back in time! to the time war!

rose: what?

doctor: i thought something was wierd cos my planet burnt when it all ended

then rose opened her mouth to say something but she just stuttered

rose: d-d-d-d-d-doctor? l-l-lo-o-ok b-b-behind you!

the doctor turns and finds millions of daleks charging down the hill and surrounding rose and they took no notice of the doctor, they just surrounded rose!

there was a blood-curdling scream from the middle of the dalek circle

the daleks turned around and went back up the hill again

the doctor was super confused but he looked at rose

rose was in blood tattered clothes and there were cuts and everything on her

doctor: ROSE! please donct die!

rose slowly opened her eyes and took the doctors hand and pushed something into it

the thing glowed in the doctor's hand it was the tardis key!

the tardis was going and the doctor wasnt in there!

rose suddenly blew up and the doctor was just staring at the metal bits of rose falling down

the tardis was gone, the doctor was stranded and even more daleks were coming down the hill with super super death rays

di marco
27-06-2005, 08:50
great! :D oh no! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
01-07-2005, 20:02
the doctor closed his eyes ready for death

but a familiar sound came

the doctor opened his eyes and he was in the tardis but there were still crys of the daleks and the doctor was even more confused when he saw rose scrambling round the tardis pushing levers and stuff the doctor normally does, just as rose was running round by the doctor, he tripped rose up and she fell into him

rose: whatcha do that for?

doctor:what happened?

rose: um, you dont wanna know!

doctor: well? yes i do!

rose looks really guilty and cant look at the doctor directly
(what happened?)

EastendersRox
02-07-2005, 07:16
What's happening?
MORE!

crumpet
02-07-2005, 09:25
the doctor looks at rose and says

doctor: what happened rose?

rose: well,

doctor: tell me! i thought you were dead!

rose: well, i was trapped in the daleks yeah?

doctor: yeah

rose: and then i crept out and i put dummy version of me in the middle and i crept to the tardis yeah?

doctor: yeah but how did you get the tardis going? you cant read my language!

rose: shut up and let me carry on!

doctor: sorry

rose:anyway, i made the tardis move so it came to you and now we are at home!

doctor: how did you read the symbol things though?

rose: didnt need to! i watch you fly this thing all the time!

doctor: i'm so glad i met you

rose: me too

di marco
03-07-2005, 15:04
great! :D wonder where theyre going to go next! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
03-07-2005, 16:59
doctor: were are ew going to go next?

rose: um....

doctor: i'll rephrase that, backwards or forwards in time?

rose:backwards

doctor:ok! here we go!

5 second later.....

rose: were are we?

doctor: year of the cavemen!

rose: o my god!

doctor: i know! i told you that i could take you anywere!

rose: i am NOT dressing like them cave people!

doctor: oh, you dont have to! they have discovered clothes at this time so you just walk out there and you'll be like one of them!

rose: that's ok then!

doctor: you go out first

rose goes out and all the cave people passed her saying hi and carried on with work

the doctor comes out and takes rose's hand and they go exploring.

the cave people follow them, carrying the tardis with them.

but there was 1 danger that was deadly and horrid and super life threatening and it was just about to happen

(what was it?)

di marco
03-07-2005, 17:05
great! :D oh no whats the danger! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
03-07-2005, 17:07
i am doing the other 2 scripts as well, please read them and i am going to give you a clue of the danger,
: it is hot
: lava
and that is the danger when it erupts

crumpet
03-07-2005, 17:58
this is the shortest 1 ever and the best bit is coming up next!
a tremble was made and lava came flowing out of the volcano and rose stepped back which unfortunatly was quicksand and the lava was just about to hit her and the doctor and the cave people left the tardis and it was nest to rose and it was sinking to and the lava was coming 100 mph

what was rose going to do?

di marco
03-07-2005, 20:55
great! :D oh no! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
04-07-2005, 16:49
rose remebered that the tarids had a forcec field so she waited till the last second
and the doctor turned and saw rose stuck and ran towards her but a cave person stopped him and dragged him down to saftey and he heard a scream like rose's and the doctor covered his ears and he could still hear rose' voice whisper in his head

voice in head:i am here in he tardis, sinking, help me!

doctor: let me out i need to see rose

they let him out and he rushes to were rose and the tarids were but all he could see was an out line of rose as if she was lying down and the tardis blue light at the top sticking out of the mud

doctor: ROSE!

THE VOICE came again

voice: look in your heart, you will find a way of finding her, if you really love her you will find her

EastendersRox
08-07-2005, 16:48
What's guna happen??????????

crumpet
08-07-2005, 17:26
THANKYOU FOR READING!!

the doctor dives right into the quick sand and he is special cos he can see under water without goggles and can look under sand and stuff and he sees the tardis and one of rose's hair ribbonsstuck in the doorway. of the tardis the doctor goes inside the tardis and finds rose covered in red goo and the doctor says it's too late!

crumpet
08-07-2005, 17:39
the doctor holds rose's hand and stays with her and something happens!

di marco
11-07-2005, 08:01
great! :D what! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
11-07-2005, 15:41
rose was moving,

the doctor bent down and listened to her heart and he smiled

rose awoke and she got up straight away and looked for the doctor

she saw him and laid down again in relief and went to sleep

the doctor wondered how she had survived and he suddenly went still in shock cos he had remembered something that might happen to rose that he doesnt want rose to happen to.........

(what was it???)

di marco
11-07-2005, 20:24
great! :D what did he know! :) more soon, cant wait