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hi! i am doing another dr who script, a better 1
rose was standing at the balcony and it was very windy
a man came up behind her and
man: hi, i'm the doctor!
rose jumped and fell over the edge of the balcony
rose:AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
doctor: i gotcha!
he pulls rose up and looks at her
rosE: how did you get here?
doctor: can't say
rose: do you know my mum?
doctor: can say! now are you hurt?
rose: no
doctor: great
rose: so you said your name was doctor?
doctor: that's right, and yours is?
rose: rose, tyler
doctor: nice name well, cant chat here all day, gotta go and travel
rose: what was the point of you cming here then?
doctor: my organiser told me to come here cos it said i'd find a 19 year old girl looks a bit like you and that she'd be my companion
rose: i'm 19!
doctor: really?
rose: yeah! so were do you go? spain? o, i know, you look like you've been to france!
doctor:um, no, i'll um, tell you later
rose:ok, well i'll see you around
doctor: here, take this mobile, it never runs out of battery or credit, ring me in 1 hour exactly, an alarm will go off when you have to ring me,
rose: ok, see you in, um, 1 hour!
(to be continued, best bit coming up)
the alarm went off on rose's phone and she rang the doctor
doctor: hello?
rosE: hi! you wanted me to call?
doctor: yeah, we are in SO much trouble!
rose: why?
doctor: you are in trouble i mean
rose: what? why am i in trouble? i aint gotta hand in homework, i aint at school no more!
just then it got windy and rose turned and froze at what was in front of her
doctor: rose? rose? answer me! rose?
rose:um, yeah but i kinda like gonna die now!
doctor: NO ROSE! dont jump off the flat roof!
rose: i have to! cos i either die cos that THING shoots me into tiny pieces or i can die a painful but quick way!
doctor: trust me! dont!
rose: SHUT UP! I CAN DO WHAT I LIKE!
doctor:fine be like that
he hangs up
rose: fine i dont need him,i'll trick that thing and the doctor
she backs away to the edge of the balcony and she back flips off the edge and goes straight down.
rose: 1,2,3,4,5,6, here's my window!
she grabs the window and quickly leaps back in and gets a lot of ashes and throws them out of the window
rose looks out of the window to see the doctor is running to the flats and he drops down to the ashes and stayed there for 5 hours
rose felt guilty but he shouldn't have hung up on her but she did tell him to shut up
she walked out to get some milk and saw that there was crouds of people around the doctor
rose:OUT OF MY WAY! PEOPLE!
the doctor was lying down and he had a very deep knife mark in his side
rose put him on a trolly and got him uopstairs and the neighbours followed but rose shut them out
rose cleaned the cut and made it kind of better
the doctor woke up
doctor: I AM IN HEAVEN! i can see you and you aren't dead and my plan worked!
rose: no, i wasnt dead in the first place, i backflipped and grabbed onto the window of my room and pulled myself in and threw ashes out the window cos you were really mean
doctor: i am sooooo sorry!
then the thing came through the window
doctor: give me a water pistol! i have got to kill it!
rose: no!
doctor: that thing's people killed all of my people and i have to kill it!
rose: NO! there's a electric gun thingy in my mums room but dont use that, it's very very powerful!
but the doctor went to get it
thing: the daleks must live
rose: daleks?
dalek:i must speak to the doctor
rose: why?
dalek:he killed my family
rose you poor thing, i wont let him hurt you
dalek thank you
the doctor came in
rose stood in front of the dalek
doctor: move out of the way rose!
rose: NO, YOU BE QUITE, HE ONLY WANTS TO TALK!
doctor: yeah, and exterminate me!
rose: why cant you learn to love?
doctor i already have!
rose: fine but dont hurt it !
doctor: ok,
he puts the gun down and rose moves, the doctor grabs the gun and fires, rose pushes the dalek out the way and the gun ray hits her she falls and she grows wings
doctor: what happened?
dalek: now look what you have done!
doctor: i-i-i didnt mean to!
dalek: no, you wanted ME dead!
rose wakes up and her wings dissapear
dalek: you are lucky that she lives doctor!
rose: yeah, you are lucky or i would've haunted you for a vey long time!
doctor: i said sorry!
rose: now, you 2 have a chat and i'm changing these totaly horrible clothes
she goes and the doctor sits down in a huff
the dalek holds out it's shooting thing and says
dalek:can't we be friends? we are the last of our kind!
the doctor hides behind the chair
doctor: you are holding out you're shooting hand, how do i no that you wont shoot me?
dalek: i wont
the doctor goes and makes friends with the little dalek, (it's only a tiny baby 1)
rose comes in with the prettiest ever clothes on
rose: don't laugh!
doctor: you look nice!
rose: and i know what you're thinking, cos when you shot me, i gained a new power!
doctor said to himself
doctor: that means i can't have daydreams of rose no more
rose:no, you cant
doctor: HEY!
they all laugh, including the cute baby dalek
the all go in the tardis and the doctor agreed that he would take the dalek home
when they got to it's home planet, the dalek rushed out and millions of daleks everywere popped out
Angeldelight
18-06-2005, 16:13
this is good... i'm not real Dr Who fan... but this is good... are you writing anymore???
yeah, i have 3 dr who scripts going at once that's why there is 3 links
daleks: EXTERMINATE!
baby dalek: no! these are my friends!
daleks: ok,
and they go again
rose walks on to the planet surface and automaticly turns into a flying mermaid
rose:AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!
sorry, that isn't all of that little bit, here's the rest, i pressed the wrong button
doctor: what's happened?
baby dalek: she has turned into the princess mermaid!
the doctor stepped out and turned into a gorrilla
b dalek: and you are prince mermaid!, o, sorry doctor,
the doctor changes into a mermaid too (a man 1 too obviosluy)
rose laughed because she looked like a princess and the doctor just looked like the doctor, with his leather jacket and he looked exactly like the like his alienish self and the only difference was he had a tail
doctor: what you laughing at?
he changed himself back and asked the dalek......
doctor: do you think that i could be a swan or something?
rose: can't i be a farie!
the dalek changed them into what they wanted because they weren't allowed to stay like themselves cos otherwise they'd be exterminated
rose was flying along when a dalek came up infront of her
the doctor and b dalek didnt notice
dalek: name please
rose: rose, rose tyler
dalek: friend of the doctors?
rose: yes,
dalek: EXERMINATE!
rose: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HELP1 ANYONE!
she yelled as the dalek aimed and rose couldn't fly away because it was holding her back
Angeldelight
18-06-2005, 16:36
uh-oh.. please let the doctor save her... don't let her die...
and THANKYOU FOR READING!
can you have a look at the other 2 links? as well? please??? thankyou!
dalek:EXTERMINATE!
ROSE:GET OFF ME! HELP! ANYONE!
the doctor looks back and suddenly looks white as a ghost
dalek: EXTERMINATION OF ROSE TYLER IN 10, 9 , 8, 7,6 , UM, ROSE, what's after 6?
rose: 5
dalek: THANKYOU 5, 4......
doctor: ROSE! I'M COMING!
b. dalek: no, there is no time for you to live, you too will be exterminated! EXTERMINATION OF THE DOCTOR IN 4 SECONDS!
the other dalek with rose starts from 4 as well
(to be continued)
Angeldelight
18-06-2005, 17:00
no... no... no... they can'r exterimate the Doctor.... noooooooo... more more more...
daleks: 3.2.1., um, lets start from 60 make ir more enjoyable
the doctor looked helplessly at rose, (they were their human form now)
rose had her eyes closed and the doctor reached out for her hand
rose opened her eyes and the doctor was trying to reach for her hand
rose stretched out her hand and the doctor grabbed it as if it were the only thing that kept him alive but soflty as if her hand would break (if you know what i mean)
the doctor could tell that rose was very weak and he found something he didn't have before, he loved her, he actually loved her! and it was that that gave him the energy to save her
doctor: rose? listen to me, i'm going to let go of your hand and.....
rose: dont!
the daleks: lets starve them out and then when they're hungry we shall blast them!
so they locked rose up in the cellar with the doctor and left
they could move about
rose sat down and started crying
the doctor sat down next to her and stroked her hair
rose: you're going to die and it's my fault
the doctor gave rose a cuddle and rose lay down and went to sleep
the doctor did the same
late that night, rose crwled up to the doctor because she was cold and she slept like that til morning
the doctor woke up and found rose lying next to him and smiled
then, a darlek came up, not the same darleks that were going to exterminate him, a different 1
(more coming up)
rose was extremely weak and she kept to a corner and wouldn't go near the doctor
and the little dalek that had come up to them that was a different 1 secretly threw food to rose and the doctor and 1 night he set them free but wouldn't go with them
rose was carried to the tardis and the doctor pressed the button and the tardis appeared
as soon as they got inside the tardis, rose woke up but was still really weak because she did'nt eat for 3 days at all
doctor: rose! you're ok! come here!
rose walks to the doctor and he pulls her to him and hugs her and he lays her down and set the coordinates for home into the tardis and he made the tardis invisable so that rose could sleep when they arived home
he walks back over to rose and he cradels her in his arms.
rose wakes up and the doctor kisses her on the forhead and she is fully not hungry and all repaired again
rose: what happened?
doctor: well, you wouldn't go near me, a nice dalek saved us!
rose: o, sorry
doctor s'ok do you want to go home?
rose: no, i'm ok!
doctor: i'll take you to my second favourite planet! if you want?
rosE: yeah ok! were's that?
doctor: dolphin
rose: are you kidding?
doctor: no!
rose: let's go then!
so they go to the planet dolphin
rose goes into the magic wardrobe, you step in and it dresses yo and you walk out again!
the doctor goes in when rose comes out
rose is in the glitteriest blue dress in then world and blue glittery shoes and everything blue
the doctor is in a blue leather jacket and blue clothes
doctor: you look fantastic!
rose: thanks! you do too!
doctor: let's go then!
they walk out and they are walking on water
rose: this is wierd!
doctor: come on,
rose is walking around the tardis wich isn't there beause the doctor made it invisable
the doctor was waiting for rose to come back round a tree because rose wanted to see what trees looked like but rose didn't come back
doctor: rose?
he can hear rose screaming
the doctor runs after rose and sees that there are sharks , man eating sharks and he can see rose and the alien that has rose is talking to her
he creeps up behind and listens
alien: now look here, you come and be my slave for life or you get eaten by these sharks
the doctor creeps up to the alien and is just about to attack him when another alien attacks the doctor and it ties the doctor up
rose: DOCTOR!
doctor: don't worry about me!
rose: no i wont be your slave!
alien1:ok then! he grabs the doctor and leaves them for 5 minutes to say goodbye, (the alien 2 just tied the docor to a post and he could move his hands and stuff and was tied by his waist)
doctor: rose, i am really sorry,
rose: no, don't worry!
doctor: we'll die together if we die
rose: .ok,
she moves closer to the doctor and gives him a kiss
and says
rose: i'll see you later!
doctor: what?
rose:the aliens are coming!
doctor: o right! he holds rose's hand and the aliens come and push rose off the edge
she falls but the doctor has hold of her hand and she is hanging off the edge
rose: i love you doctor,
and she lets go of the doctors hand
(more coming up, it aint the end!)
doctor: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ROSE!
he watches rose splash and the sharks are making the water froth and the doctor cant see rose
then fighting is going on behind him but the doctor cant look because he cant believe that rose is gone then a familiar voice speaks which makes the doctor smile without looking to see who it was
(who was it? more when at least 1 person answers!)
fine, cos noone is reading, ill carry on!
the doctor turned round and stared at the person in front of him
doctor: is that you rose?
person:might be
doctor: is it you?
person:i am the clone, semt from all daleks to send the message on
doctor: clone of rose?
rose: yes and now she is dead you are in trouble
doctor: yeah that's right, i said i'd protect her and her mum's gonna slaughter me!
a very wet figure climbed up onto the grass
the clone froze
doctor: what are you doing? all you probably are is a robot, sent from daleks!
the figure behind him takes a knife out of her trouser pocket which is already covered in blood
the clone takes a step back
figure: i'm gonna kill you!
the doctor turns and sees rose with the knife and looks terified
rose goes towards the doctor wit the knife
doctor: rose? what are you doing?
rose: getting rid of something i should have gotten rid of a long time ago
the doctor falls down and closes his eyes expecting a knife to go through him
but rose carries on and goes past the doctor
the clone starts to run but rose throws the knife and it goes straight through the clone
the clone yells in pain so does rose
the clone falls down onto it's knees, so does rose
rose goes over to the doctor and begs him to help her
so does the clone
the doctor is freaked out by this yet he doesnt want to let rose die so he has a look at her back of the jacket she's wearing and finds a knife mark but no bleeding
the clone leaps onto rose and starts trying to strangle her,
doctor: whatever the clone does, rose has got to do as well!
so the doctor gets rose and puts her in a nearby tree so she can sleep
he gets the clone and finds a door in her head and he opens it to find a super mini dalek controlling her brain except there is no brain,
the dalek looks up and in his loudest voice ever, (not that loud, like whispering really quitly to us )
dalek: EXTERMINATE
a blue light comes and hits the doctor but cos it's so small, it hardly hurts
the doctor took out the clones brains, (lump of metal with controls and wires)
and rearanged it so rose would not be affected anymore by the clone. he took the dalek and in the plaent of dolphin, sharks LOVE the taste of daleks, only super mini ones though
he threw the dalek into the shark infested waters and he could her lots of splashing
he dumped the clone body in the water too and the sharks ate that too (in that world, dolphins and sharks are best mates except the sharks eat everything)
he climbed up the tree to were he put rose
rose woke up immediately
doctor: now, rose, how did you survive?
rose: survive what?
doctor:the shark water
rose:o, dont you know? you told me that all dolphins can follow you around from a different planet because you dont know that they're watching you! adn they can save you when you come to dolphin world and only when you come to dolphin world! but they only save you if you love dolphins! and i do!
doctor: so?
rose: well, sharks and dolphimns are friends! and i talked to the sharks and they helped me get up the cliff!
doctor: why was the clone sending a message?
rose: she was a creation i did in year 6
rose: my friend, nina told me that i should NEVER tell anyone this but she went traveling! across time and space with a doctor
the doctor went white
doctor:when was this?
rose: 3 years ago when she went missing, she was only 15
doctor: yeah, i knew nina,
rose looked up suspiciosly at the doctor
rose: you wernt that doctor were you?
doctor: i am the only time lord left! so yes i was that timelord!
rose: what happened to her? why did she dissapear?
doctor:i'll tell you when we get into the tardis
they went into the tardis
rose closed the door behind her and she looked at the doctor
rose: alright, speak!
doctor: ok! it's a long story so you sit over there and ill be right back
he goes into the corridor and he comes back with 2 cups of coffee
doctor: here you go!
rose takes a cup
rose: thanks!
doctor: ok, it started when i came to earth to look for a candy floss man,
rose: candyfloss man?
doctor: yes, you see, i was travelling and noone would let me stay unless i gave them candyfloss! and i needed to find a companion to travel with
rose: and?
doctor: and i bumped into nina, she had come out of the cinema with her friends and she looked me and i smiled at her and walked on by!
rose: yeah right! she was the most popular girl in school!
doctor: am i going to finish?
rose: yeah
doctor: ok, i heard her say to her mates that she was going to be late home and she followed me. she thought i didnt know but i did. i got to the tardis and turned around
she was just looking at me in that way like, um, whatcha call it? um, day dreaming!!!
rose: she fancied you?
doctor: i dunno! anyway, i said what do you want and she said nothing. i said to her to go in the tardis and she did and she wouldnt go out so i found out i didnt need to look anymore i had a companion!
rose: lucky you!
doctor: she wouldnt shut up she got really anoying so i got my sonic screwdriver and i was going to make her forget me but i couldn't! i couldnt do it
rose: aww, the doctor's in love
doctor: what do you mean is? i dont love her now and i never did! i just couldnt do it
anyway, i told her that she must NEVER say anything about me and what did she do? she told you!
rose: if you knew, why did you ask them questions? when you met me?
doctor: cos i couldnt could i? anyway, she came to me the day after and sad that she had told her best mate! i was furios! and i took her to planet dolphin and the same thing happened to her that happened to you except for the clone!
rose: EEEEW! you kissed her?
doctor: no i didnt do that i didnt want her to die i just wanted to take her somewere nice because she tol me she liked dolphins and after that visit i would wipe her memory so she wouldnt remember anything about me or my tardis or the journeys!
rose: she got pushed down?
doctor: yes and she had lied because if you talk to the sharks in planet dolphin, they recognise you love dolphins and they help you but nina didnt like dolphins and she yelled for help and she wasnt recognised and she was eaten so i had to return and wipe everyones memory that knew her but it didnt work on you because you were her best friend and best friends tell each other everything and noone knew that nina ad existed and i went to find you
rose: i'm kind of glad she did tell me about you!
she gave the doctor a hug and fell asleep - again
xcutiekatiex
26-06-2005, 18:11
:D these are really good you must have spent ages on them welldone!
this is tyhe funniest 1 yet cos this is dr who ,meets eastenders haha!
no, i have a wild imagination and i think of the storylines as i go, my english teach says i shouldnt let my imagination run too far
the doctor gently puts rose down, kisses her on the forehead and she is still asleep
the doctor bends down and strokes rose's hair and he gets up to press the invisability button so the tardis is invisable to anyone that is passing by so noone can just walk in
the doctor gets a blanket and places it over rose
she wakes up straight away
rose: how long was i asleep for?
doctor: couple of hours!
rose: what's the time?
doctor: 6 o clock am
rose: i went to sleep aat 3 0 clock!
then a bang went from outside the tardis
doctor: aye aye, who's that, i made this invisable!
then a loud voice startecd yelling
(stacy slater): oi zoe! come 'ere!
rose: o my god! we're in albert square!
doctor: and, if we go out there, we are invisable!
rose:wow!
stacy: 'ere zoe we're's ya lover man?
zoe: why ya wanna know?
stacy: cos my mate told me to give 'im some flowers fore some reason!
zoe: shut it stace
ruby: no you zoe!
rose says to the doctor: make me visable to them
the doctor does that and rose walks out and noone notices
ruby and stacy and zoe are arguing and the slater girls, the millers and jonny allen and chrissie joins in
rose:SHUT UP EVERYONE!
everyone looks at rose and dennis is walking along
dennis: hi!
rose: hi, NOW YOU LOT JUST SHUT UP AND EVERYONE WILL BE FINE NOW YOU BARLADY GO AND DO WHAT YOU DO, UM, ZOE I THINK IT IS GO BACK TO THE STALL AND STACEY AND RUBY COME WITH ME!! AND EVERYONE DO WHAT YOU WERE DOING!
everyone is astounded
the doctor is locking the tardis cos noone except rose and the doctor can see it
zoe: why dont you shut it big mouth
doctor: you talking to her?
(he points to rose)
zoe: yeah i am , got a problem?
doctor: yeah, cos she has the guts to do anything!
zoe: what her? yeah right, later!
dennis walks up to zoe
zoe: i showed her didnt i? she needed shouting at!
dennis: i dont believe you zoe!
he walks up to rose
dennis: hi, you were brilliant!
the doctor is looking round at rose and sees dennis's arm round rose and he decides to go in the vic
chrissie: look, your kid....
doctor: she aint my kid
chrissie: wife?
doctor: NO!
chrissie: family?
doctor: no, she is just my companion
chrissie: o, partner or girlfriend?
doctor: none she is just my friend!
chrissie: o, ok well,
doctor: can you tell me what........
then the doors crash open and the doors come off the hinges and crash against the bar and a chair from outside comes crashinmg in too!
the doctor runs out side to find zoe and rose are fighting and dennis and stacy and ruby are helping rose and charlie slater, big mo are helping zoe
zoe: I HATE YOU! YOU HAVE YOUR OWN BOYFRIEND, THAT OLD FELLER!
rose: HE AINT MY BOYFRIEND AND I DONT EVEN FANCY DENNIS, I HAVE MY OWN BOYFRIEND AT HOME!
dennis and stacy fight with mo
the other people fight with charlie. demi and darren and rose fght with zoe
the doctor runs out and pulls rose away from the fight
she has blood running down her face yet her hair still looks so beautifully straightened
zoe: SEE? THAT'S YOUR BOYFRIEND!
rose ignores zoe+buries her head inthe doctor's jumper
the doctor strokes her hair and pushes rose away and looks at her and says
doctor: take the tardis key, go and change and then you can come back and kick zoe's lights out
rose does her best to try and run to the tardis and she goes in without anyone noticing and locks the door.
she comes out agion all clean and with designer clothes on
she walks out and walks up to zoe and points a gun at her
everyone stops and the police run over yelling you are under arreast for carrying a shot gun to kill zoe
but rose fires at zoe and paint goes ALL OVER the slaters who were against rose
zoe is covered in goey green stuff
danny and jake look at rose who is looking dropdead gorgous to spoilt zoe who is covered in green goey stuff
chrissie sees jake loking temptingly at rose and runs to jake
chrissie: um jake? why dont yo come with me?
jake: who is she?
chrissie: she came with him now come on, i love you!
jake: well i totaly fancy that girl there so you are dumped!
danny says the same to sam but sam doesnt mind, she likes rose anyway
the moon brothers go up to rose and flirtwith her
the doctor jumps in because he notices 1 of them is leading her to an ally and he grabs rose's hand and leads her back to the tardis and he doesnt stop and when he gets in and rose is in too he looks at rose testingly
rose: what?
doctor:are you ok?
rose starts crying
rose: no, no i aint!
she buries her face in the doctors jumper again and the doctorsits down andhe places rose's head in his arms
di marco
27-06-2005, 09:19
great! :D just read it all! :) more soon, cant wait
:crying: :crying: :crying:
great! :D just read it all! :) more soon, cant wait
noone likes me :(
the doctor gets rose a cup of tea and asks her what is wrong
doctor: whats the matter?
rose: i'm gonna die!
the doctor looks unconcerned
doctor: yeah right, like how?
rose: i am! i am gonna die!
the doctor suddenly looks scared
doctor: why? if this is 1 of your jokes, tell me now!
rose:you haven't seen what 1 of them moon people did to me
doctor: what? tell me!
rose said nothing but justreached up to her jacket adn undid the zip and pointed to her side
doctor: what am i looking at?
rose: i didnt want to tell you, i-i-i-i....
she faints
the doctor looks were she pointed and found an extremely deep knife mark and in 1 of rose's pockets there was a morphine bottle which was empty and said deadly on the label
the doctor finds that the reason that rose didnt scream in pain when 1 of the moons cut her was because of the antibiotix that was put on her
the doctor gets his sonic screwdriver and looks at the fingerprints and finds nothing
he listens to rose's pulse but doesnt find anything,
thinking rose is dead he puts her in a bed of flowers and makes the ardis invisable and storms out in searc of the moon brothers and he bumps into chrissie
chrissie: OI! YOU LOST ME MY BOYFRIEND!
sharon watts and dennis rickman join chriassie and tell the doctor to go away
doctor: o, you aint told sharon about her dad then chrissie watts?
sharon: what?
chissie: he's lying!
doctor: o, den and i were mates! actually, guess who i am?
sharon looks at the doctor and hugs him
doctor: i aint just his mate, i'm sharon's god father!
doctor: and i know were den is!
sharon: o tell me!
dennis: stay away from him!
doctor: ill show you were he is!
chrissie: no!, i am um, busy!
but the doctor walks past chrissie and calls for a digger
sharon: you arent my god father! you are a wreke! you ignore chrissie, cant you see she is heartbroken?
doctor: look, chrissie, tell them now before i show them were den is!
sharon: what? you know chrissie? and you never said?
doctor: so?
chrissie: OK OK! zoe killed den! and she buried him under the cellar there!
doctor: corection, YOU did
chrissie: um sharon, can i talk to the lyer alone?
sharon: ok, that man is a sick man anyways, zoe killed him?
the doctor recorded what crissie said and chrissie told the doctpr what happened and he played it to sharon and dennis :clap:
(how will sharon and dennis react?)
EastendersRox
02-07-2005, 07:10
This is so cool, plz post more!
sharon: what? chrissie actually said that?
doctor: yes
dennis: were's that kid that came with you?
doctor: rose?o, um she is, ......
sharon: dennis, dont change the subject! i'm gonna go down the police right now!
dennis: ill come in a minute when i find out were rose is
sharon goes to the police with the record thing
dennis: well?
doctor: i'm not answering that
dennis: why?
doctor: well, you really wanna know? she's dead
dennis: what do you mean dead?
doctor: stupid moon people
dennis: take me to her!
doctor: no and why should i?
dennis: cos, i dunno!
the doctor walks away and goes back to the tardis and dennis gives up on gettinbg answers and doesnt believe the doctor that rose is dead and looks for her himself
the doctor goes back to were rose lives and makes the tardis invisable and starts to cry
a voice behind him was heard
(who was it?)
di marco
03-07-2005, 15:02
great! :D wonder who the voice is! :) more soon, cant wait
di marco
03-07-2005, 15:02
:crying: :crying: :crying:
noone likes me :(
what makes you say that?
what makes you say that?
dont matter, people like me now :cheer: :rotfl:
voice: why are you crying my doctor?
the doctor turned
doctor: it cant be!
voice: anything's possible in here
doctor: rose, you were d-dead when i left!
rose: i am dead, i have come back from the dead to say goodbye
doctor: i said i'd protect you! what's your mum going to say?
rose: trust me and everything will forget you, my mum will forget you and ill go down as a murdered 19 year old girl
doctor: you were murdered though!
rose: asi said! you will be forgotten and i will go down s 1 of the many people that have gone missing,
doctor: what am i meant to do with you?
rose: keep me here,
doctor: here?
rose: yes,
doctor: you will rot!
rose: no, for if you do not take anyone as a companion, i will travel with you, i will come here as i am now, day after day night after night, travelling, watching over you so you will never be alone but......
doctor: what? i'll do anything for you to stay!
rose: i will return to my human body in the flowers, each day, as a ghost at night, until you get a new companion, for your new companion will take over your life, you would forget me, and make me be uried and be eaten by worms,
doctor: i promise i will never do that or get a new companion!
rose: for if you do and you still keep my human body in the tardis, i will rot to dust and you will never see me again
doctor: i wont! just promise you'll never leave me?
rose: i promise and for now, i must go, i must go and leave you to do what you want and if you should ever need me between now and midnight, just look in your heart and you will find me there for between then i am a ghost, midnight to 6 o clock pm i am in my human body,
the doctor doesnt say anything but just looks at the floor
rose: and before i go, i will give you 1 thing,
she bends down and gives him a kiss on the cheek and she grows wings and they are beautiful and pink and she gives the doctor a hug and he says
doctor: i cant live without you
rose flies up with lights all around her and a yellow light comes though the tardis and she shoots up the yellow light and the doctor is left staring at the spot were rose had just been
di marco
03-07-2005, 20:52
great! :D rose is a ghost! :) more soon, cant wait
doctor: rose! dont go!
but rose had gone
then a white figure came back
doctor: rose?
figure: dont worry, i'm back, i asked my mate to ask the ghost lender if i can be a human again and he said yes so you stay there, ill be back in a minute!
10 mins went by and rose came out as a human
the doctor ran to her and threw his arms around her as if she would dissapear
EastendersRox
08-07-2005, 16:47
Great, she's back!
doctor: tHANK GOD YOU'RE BACK!
rose: cant get rid of me that easily!
doctor: i'll never let you out of my sight again!
rose: so, you are literally like my body gaurd?
doctor: yeah!
rose: ok, can we go now? i dont want to see dennis cos he was rtying to get my money and that's the only reason he was nice to me, money!
doctor: ok, were do you want to go?
rose: home, i want to see my mum
doctor: what you gonna tell her?
rose: i dunno! i wont tell her about you though,
the get back home and rose kisses the doctor on the cheek and runs up the stairs
the doctor goes to do something to the machine and finds something that makes him stop and stare
di marco
11-07-2005, 07:58
great! :D oh no what is it! :) more soon, cant wait
EastendersRox
11-07-2005, 16:11
What is it???? A dalek, perhaps?
THANKYOU! THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING!
rose comes back down and she is smiling
she shuts the door and looks for the doctor
rose: doctor??? were are you?
the doctor doesn't realise that rose is there and she goes right into the dangerous thing that the doctor had walked away from to stop himself dying from and i massive yellow light burst out and the tardis started moving!
(what had rose done?)
di marco
11-07-2005, 20:26
great! :D yellow light! :) more soon, cant wait
the doctor was not in the machine area but he was in the garage place that the tardis had and when he heard the tardis moving, he rushed to were the danger was and saw rose looking into the yellow light!(this part is just like the last epi of dr who with christopher eccleston as the doctor)
doctor: ROSE! YOU'RE NOT MEANT TO DO THAT!
rose doesn't listen but carries on looking into the beautiful light
the doctor goes over to the light, not looking at it, he shuts the door of the place of the light
rose snaps out of being hypnotized and looks round at the doctor with yellow eyes and she was glowing all over
doctor: rose, why did you do that?
rose is talking in an alien type voice
rose: i didn't do anything! i came to look for you and i have power to do anything!
doctor: ROSE, YOU HAVE EVERYTHING RUNNING THROUGH YA HEAD! you're gonna die!
rose looks confused and says
rose: i can't die! i didn't mean to get this power!
the doctor gets angry and yells at rose
doctor: ROSE! JUST GET AWAY FROM ME, IF YOU'RE GONNA DENY THAT YOU DID THIS ON PURPOSE, JUST DONT COME NEAR ME EVER AGAIN! JUST GO, FORGET ME! COS YOU AREN'T STAYING ANYWERE NEAR ME WHILST YOU ARE AN ALIEN ROSE TYLER SO BYE! COS YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A FREAK WITH YOUR HORRIBLE YELLOW EYES, AND STRANGE VOICE,
rose looks even more confused and the doctor doesn't know that she turned back into herself (by self-destructing herself very quietly and she selfdistructed invisably so the doctor didnt know she did it and she turned into herself while the doctor was yelling!)
rose was very close to tears and whispered to the doctor
rose: i-i-i dont know what y-y-you're talking about! but..........
the doctor realises his mistake by hearing rose's normal voice and she didnt have yellow eyes
doctor: wait, i didn't mean that, i thought you were someone else! i...........
rose:(louder) NO, YOU SAID MY NAME, WHAT WAS IT? O YEAH, I'M A FREAK! YEAH, WELL BYE, I DONT THINK I CAN FORGET YOU AND I LOOK ALIEN?THANKYOU SOOOOO MUCH, NO WONDER MY MUM SLAPPED YOU, HAVE A NICE LIFE WITHOUT ME!
she walks out and the doctor collpses to the floor and curses himself
meanwhile, rose thinks she's been to hard on the doctor and is going to go back to the tardis
di marco
13-07-2005, 08:06
great! :D whats going to happen! :) more soon, cant wait
rose was just about to open the door of the tardis and all of a sudden a helicopter came and shined a light onto her
voice from helicopter: ROSE TYLER, STEP AWAY FROM THE BLUE BOX!
rose was confused
the doctor hears what is going on outside and rushes to the door but listens
he hears a fight going on and hears rose yelling in pain and he hears the police talking about an unfortunate death by a blonde person
the doctor goes white and comes out and asks why rose had killed a person but the police laughed
police: no no no, a blonde girl was killed, by one of our police men but he was a fake policeman, he is held in jail at the moment, would you like to confirm that you know this girl and the police man???
the doctor was even whiter
doctor: yes please
he mumbled
he went to see the dead body and couldn't believe it, rose was really dead
he saw mickey in the jail cell and left him a note,
mickey, ONE DAY I'LL GET YOU,
that's the end!
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