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pie_man
14-03-2005, 15:56
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Long, long ago there lived a rabbit
Who had a really bad habit

Meh
14-03-2005, 17:23
of eating carrots galore
but which was such a tasteless bore

pie_man
14-03-2005, 20:32
I want to taste something new, he said
as he nicked a loaf of bread

lori.
14-03-2005, 20:55
on the loaf he spread some jam
and a tasty piece of smoked ham

pie_man
14-03-2005, 23:54
with a touch of lime
hmmmm! that was really fine
as mrs rabbit walked up the garden path
poor mr rabbit had to face her wrath

Meh
15-03-2005, 10:22
Mrs Rabbit was so cross
She sat on Mr Rabbit
Just to show who was boss

pie_man
15-03-2005, 16:22
fortunately mrs rabbit was the forgiving sought
after flowers and chocolates mr rabbit had bought

Meh
15-03-2005, 17:21
but katy the killer fox was on the prowl
and she made the rabbits howl

lori.
15-03-2005, 19:19
"oh no i'm afraid,' Mrs Rabbit said
as they scurried off to their cotton wool bed

pie_man
15-03-2005, 21:58
quietly they waited inside
until hunger got the better of them, they sighed
"this katy is indeed a pain"
"we need to put an end to her game"

chance
16-03-2005, 16:58
what can we do? they thought?'
'we need something in which she can be caught'

Rene Descartes
16-03-2005, 18:19
she you say? its a sheep in wolfs clothing
devious indeed, but what is behind this choosing
them scandalous rabits have gazumped her offer
she'll get them back good and proper

pie_man
16-03-2005, 18:34
starve them out of their pretty little burrow
i'll show them fools
who's boss, who rules

Meh
16-03-2005, 19:55
but then there was wily mr fox
who had his eyes
on a feast not too far
alas, poor mr and mrs rabbit

pie_man
16-03-2005, 22:07
but katy thought it was not on
so out came the knife and poor old mr fox was gone
dead as den
but who knows, he might be back again

Meh
17-03-2005, 13:52
buried 6ft under
or so we thought
something to ponder
dear katy

pie_man
17-03-2005, 22:37
back to the poor rabbits
but what can they do
to stop themselves becoming part of the stew

Meh
17-03-2005, 23:21
there's a storm
brewin ahead
lets hope
mr and mrs rabbit are in bed

pie_man
18-03-2005, 18:44
how to build a trap
to catch a smart fox
it'll have to be more than just a stick and cardboard box

pie_man
24-03-2005, 19:23
www.howtocatchafox.com they typed on their PC
and to their surprise there was the perfect contraption
to catch katy in action

bernard
25-03-2005, 15:21
hunting foxes is banned, mr rabbit thought.
what if we get caught

pie_man
25-03-2005, 16:29
"who cares!" said mrs rabbit
out with your credit card
and buy in now
otherwise I'll start another row

bernard
29-03-2005, 13:56
dont u dare start a row,
or ill give u a swollen brow

pie_man
06-04-2005, 16:38
Poor rabbits no where to run
but wait what's that I hear
It sounds like a hunting horn my dear

bernard
06-04-2005, 22:08
thank god, we have been saved
now its mr fox, who has to be brave

pie_man
07-04-2005, 11:46
They watch i amazement as "Katy the Killer fox" slips out of her skin
Out came Dolly the Sheep and jumped strainght in to a bin

bernard
07-04-2005, 19:55
feel the floor tremble, as the hounds come charging,
will they find katy, who is hiding

pie_man
19-04-2005, 23:25
sniff sniff here
and a sniff sniff there
basil brush was no where

dragoneye454
21-04-2005, 13:43
but old mr dave came rushing on by
and basil couldn't escape though he did try

pie_man
21-04-2005, 16:16
Along happened to pass a binman
and tipped dolly in to the big van

charliedark
24-04-2005, 23:26
"help, help, get me out!"
but the binman never heard her shout!

pie_man
29-04-2005, 13:00
RIP katy my dear
the rabiits have nothing to fear
except for the hounds
that are now flooding the grounds

Meh
29-04-2005, 13:17
no, wait!
surely that was some bait
don't forget cain and abel
lonely is the only way

RealityGap
04-05-2005, 15:53
to Amerillo
everynight I've been hugging my pillow....

bernard
09-05-2005, 22:28
go away you hunters and hounds
theres nothing else here, to be found