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crumpet
12-06-2005, 10:11
hi! i totaly love doctor who and last nights episode was SCARY!
pretend that this is the first episode and . wel,, i will just see how it goes shant i!(i didn't watch the first episode of doctor who)

rose is at school and there is 5 mins left till the end of school

rose: I'M bored

teacher:ROSE!

rose: what?

teacher: no talking

rose: ok!

rose mutters

rose: stupid teacher telling me off, i wish i could go traveling or i wish i could go back in time and see how harold got killed at the battle of hastings and not get stuck here listening to how she thinks harold got killed

teacher: ROSE! NO MUTTERING EITHER!

the bell rings

everyone goes out of school

rose goes to a park and sits on a benchc smiling happily,
and said sarcasticly
rose: great! nothing to do! throughout 9 weeks! yipee! i am so excited that i have nothing exciting to lok forward to!

then a man comes and sits next to her

rose: who the hell are you?

man: that's nice isn't it! "who the hell are you"

rose: sorry, but who are you?

man: ah, that's fore me to know and you not to find out

rose: come on, please tell me!

man: i'll tell ya if you come with me!

rose: were? 'ere you're one of them dodgy people aren't you! you attack girls!

man: oi! i aint one of them!

rose: were are we going then?

man: a police box

rose: you arn't a policeman are you?

man: follow me and you'll see!

rose: fine what eva!

man:good now when you're inside, you can't tell anyone ABOUT ME!

rose: why? are you a celebrity?

man: o, you just cant

rose: ok ok, keep ya 'air on!

she follows the man and they go down a dark ally

rose: I AM STOPPING RIGHT HERE!

man: what's the matter with you?

rose: you are one of them dodgy people!

man: look, just stand over by that police box down there ok?

rose: ok but if you are a dodgy man then i can scream pretty loud

man: look, if you stop syaing i'm one of those horrible men then i'll tell you who i am!

rose: ok then!

man: i'm the doctor

(i know that's rubbish but there's a great part coming up afyter this 1 )

di marco
12-06-2005, 10:19
great! :D i love dr who too! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 10:38
rose: that' aint a reAL name!

doctor: well i don't give out my name so doctor it'll be

rose: fine! what am i supposed to be looking in?

doctor: go in!

rose: what, in a tiny thing like that? and you're coming in too? you'll get squished!

doctor: trust me just go in!

she goes in and it is a massive machine, inside and it seems impossible to fit inside a tiny police box

rose: wow!

doctor: like i said, don't tell ANYONE about me

rose: i wont!

doctor: good

rose: what does it do?

doctor: you're getting into the secrets now!

rose: tell me!

doctor: nope

rose: i'll be off then!

doctor: wait!, come with me!

rose:were?

doctor: anywere!

rose:is that a trick question?

doctor: no just come with me to places you've only dreamt of and you can see who really killed harold at the battle of hastings!

rose: that aint possible!

doctor: aint it?

rose: fine i'll come with you!

doctor: great! you have something to do in the holidays now!

rose:what about my mum?

doctor: she'll be ok, when you get back it'll be like 10 seconds have passed since we travelled time! oops! shouldnt 've told you that!

rose: ok, were we going first?

doctor: how about dinosaur time!

rose: ok!

doctor: when they became extinct!

rose: so what you're saying is that i can see things my mates can never see like in the past?

doctor:yeah!

rose: when can we go then?

doctor: now

rose: now? really?

doctor: yes now and yes really!

they went to the last 2 weeks of dinosuars living before they became extinct

rose: wow! this is amazing!

doctor: i've done this before you go out first

rose: what and be eaten first? no thanks!

doctor:ok, i'll go

he walks out and rose follows him

rose looks up and a huge t-rex is above her

doctor: rose! come here!

rose starts to run but gets taken away by 1 of those flying bird - dinosaurs

rose: HELP!

and the t-rex chases the doctor

crumpet
12-06-2005, 10:39
(to be continued)

di marco
12-06-2005, 11:15
great! :D wow dinosaurs! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 11:24
the doctor ran all the way to were the flying bird-dino was

doctor: rose? were are you?

rose: you don't wanna know!

doctor:tell me!

rose: hiding in dinosaurs poo

doctor: thanks for the details

rose:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHH!!

doctor: ROSE? WHAT HAPPENED?
(to be continued)

di marco
12-06-2005, 11:28
great! :D yuck dino poo! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 11:48
doctor: ROSE? ANSWER ME!

rose came out all clean and smelt like aple pie, the doctor ran to rose
doctor: you said....

rose: i know! i used something called perfume!

doctor: fine but why did you scream?

rose:i broke a nail!

doctor: lets go

rose: were are we going?

doctor:dunno

he looked at rose

doctor: rose, do you want to go home?

rose: why?

doctor: cos if you want to, i'll take you back home

rose: no why?

doctor: just checking cos i aint making you do anything you don't wanna do

rose: you aint now come on, i wanna go and see some dinosaurs! and just out of interest, are you an alien?

doctor looked at rose carefully and

doctor: yes now don't laugh!

rose: i aint, then how come you sound up northern?

doctor: do you think that i'llfit in with other people if i talked in the accent i come from?

rose: o. ok were are ya from then?

doctor: not telling

rose: please?

doctor: no!

rose: why?

doctor: I SAID NO!

rose looks terified and ran away and starts crying

doctor dont no that though

rose screams but doctor doesn't turn around, he just says

doctor: she's broken a nail again

a big lizard is dragging rose back to were the doctor is by cooincidence and it has made a deep cut and starts to try and eat rose and doctor gets irritated by the sound of suttling cos the lizard is scuttling around rose

the doctor turns round and sees rose and collapses down to her

doctor: i'm so sorry

rose isn't breathing and then suddenly, she grows wings and becomes like a farie and her wings are purple and she transforms into dinosaur but in the form of a beautiful schoolgirl with wings and designer clothes on

doctor: o no, that lzad has poweres to make human beings into dinosaurs but human dinosaurs and stay like that unill......

(to be continued)

di marco
12-06-2005, 15:08
great! :D oh no! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 16:32
doctor:....... untill the person she's with has feelings for her or if she wants to change to her normal self

rose is so pretty now that the lizard walked away and all the other dinos can't hurt her
the wound that the lizard made had gone

doctor: um, rose?

rose: uh, what happened?

doctor: i'm so sorry, i didn't mean to make you into a farie dinosaur

rose: i'm a farie?

doctor: yes

rose: hey, i look quite nice in designer stuff

doctor: yeah sure but come on, we've gotta get outa here now!

rose: why?

doctor: cso i said so!

rose: fine, be like that then, i can manage on my own!

she flies off

doctor: ROSE! DON'T GO!

she flies back

rosE: and i shouldn't leave you because?????

doctor: um,

rose: ok, resaons why i should! here we go,
: you yelled at me,

doctor: look i'm sorry please, dont leave me here

rose: havn't you got your TARDIS?

doctor: yeah but i cant find it!

rose flies down to the doctor

rose: ok, i'll help you but dont shout at me anymore!

doctor: i wont i promise!

rose clipped something onto the doctor and clicked it round the back so he was literally attached to rose through a string

rose: ok, if you fall, it aint my fault!

doctor: ok

rose flew up and the doctor got dragged up too

rose: how ya feeling?

doctor: fine thanks

he wriggled so he could see the land and the rope snapped he was heading into the volcano

(to be continued)

di marco
12-06-2005, 16:36
great! :D oh dear a volcano! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 16:48
rose: DOCTOR!

doctor: rose! please, help me!

rose flew all the way down and caught the doctor in mid air and found that he was unconscios from the shock

she flew to the ground, with the doctor in her arms and she did a breathing thing like that kiss thingy but it aint a kiss

he regained consciosness and held onto rose so tightly she couldn't breath

doctor: thankyou SO much rose

rose: ok,ok dont strangle me

doctor: ok, can we go and find my tardis now?

rose: yeah ok

so rose didn't attatch doctor to anything, she just made sure he was holding on to her neck (not strangle type) so he couldn't fall

doctor: THERE IT IS!

rose flew straight down and came to an emergency stop which sent the doctor going into the tardis in a fast speed

rose went in

rose: were are we going now?

doctor:home

rose: I CAN'T!

doctor: and why not?

rose: what am i supposed to do about being a farie?

doctor: ok, we'll keep travelling untill we get rid of your farie habits

the doctor thought to hmself

: i'm glad i met her,

rose thought to herself

: he is SO cute and sweet and i bet he'd never want to hurt me!

(to be continued)

di marco
12-06-2005, 16:58
great! :D where they going now! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 17:18
i'm getting to that
this 1 is a tiny bit like the end of the world episode but different
ok


doctor: were do you want to go?

rose: i want to go to, the day the earth ended

doctor: you sure?

rose: yep!

doctor: ok, push those buttons there and pull this ok?

rose: um, ok! she does that and they step out of the tardis and they are in a space type ship

doctor: come here, i heard there was a party here of the earth ending!

rose: the earth ends and they have a party to celebrate it?

doctor: yeah, got a problemo with it?

rose:um, no not really, so how does the earth end?

doctor: wait and see! and it's lucky you aren't a human form now cos they don't let humans in

rose: i-i-ii-i aint human? what am i?

doctor: you're a farie!

rose: i know that but.... o, never mind

doctor: come on, i gotta show the ticket to the guard

rose: you dont ..........

doctor: shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

he show s a special card to the guard and it lets rose ansd the doctor in

rose: there isn't anything on there!

doctor:SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

rose: SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YASELF!

rose flies over to another figure who is a girl and looks human and looks the same age as the doctor

the guards are putting the tardis in a safety cupboard

rose: yeah,. i came with him, he travels in a police box called the tardis and we went to the dinosaur and he shouted at me cos he wouldn't tell me were he was from, i get bitten and now i'm a farie!

girl: him? you traveled here with him?

rose: yeah, is there a prolem?

the doctor realsiese who rose is talking to and says

doctor: ROSE! come here!

rose: NO! i'm talking!

doctor: look melissa, i don't know what you're playing at but........
rose: HANG ON a minUTE! who's melissa?

doctor: my twin sister

rose: were is she?

doctor: her

rose turns and sees that the girl she was talking to was his twin sister

di marco
12-06-2005, 17:21
great! :D his twin sis! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 17:29
melissa: yeah, last of the timelords? i don't think so!

rose: timelords?

melissa: so, you havn't told your new girlfriend EVERYTHING then!

rose: i aint his girlfriend !

melissa: sorry, ill say that again you aint told your FRIEND everything then

doctor: she aint my friend!

rose looks very upset and flew off to the other fairy folk and chtted with them

doctor: rose, i didn't mean,........

melissa: well done clever gadget brother

doctor that's the 2nd time i've upset her!

di marco
12-06-2005, 17:41
great! :D oh dear! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
12-06-2005, 17:54
melissa: come over here, i'll get ya a drink,

doctor:well, i dunno cos i'm worried about rose

melissa: well don't cos she is 19 and may i remind you that you are 21 so don't even go there!

dr: oi!

melissa: kidding!

dr: good!

rose had made friends with a boy fairy and the dr though that the fairy would bring trouble but he remembered what mel hADsaid about her being 19 and she can look after herself

boy fairy: i'm callum

rose: i'm rose

callum: nice name!

rose: thanks you have a nice name too!

callum: you get bitten by a lizard too?

rose: yeah

callum: who's your time lords then? there are only 2 about apartently

rose: mine's the doctor youres is probablyu his twin sister melissa

callum: yeah,

they hovered in mid air for a moment

callum: have you ever thought about being a fairy forever? cos if you're a fairy then you never feel pain or die!

rose: really? how do youdo that? i'd likethat but i go to school, i'd get spotted as a fairy in no time!

callum, yes but you can hide your wings by just wanting tem to appear, or dissapear!

rose: wow! tat sounds well good! how do you become a real life fairy forever?

callum: you do that if you kiss another temporary fairy like me and you and that's it, you also get the power to change through time!

rose: wow! um, are you trying to say that you want to kiss me?

callum: might be,

he moves a bit coser to rose , holding her hand and the doctor sees that and runs to stop rose
(to be continued)

bakedbean
12-06-2005, 17:56
Hmmm ok, well i am a big Doctor Who fan and i might be doing my own series while Exeter was takin a break. I like your show and i dislike it, you have got the chemestiy between Doctor and rose spot on, but Rose as a fairy and then a twin fairy??? But then again it is your own creation and it is original, i will be reading.

crumpet
12-06-2005, 18:07
(hey you don't know what's going to happen! and why would i put a twin fairyi never said i'd put rose as a real fairy ? trust me,)


doctor: NOOOOOOOOOO! ROSE! STOP!

rose looks at the doctor

rose: what?

doctor: come here NOW!

rose: you aint the boss of me!

doctor: trust me! don't do it! he just wants you to kiss him so he can live forever!

rose: is that true callum?

callum: so what if it is? you like me don't you rose?

rose: NO! go away you freak! you are awfully nice but using me as an excuse to live forever, no way!

callum: fine

he flies away

doctor runs over to rose and says

doctor: well done rose you did it!

just then rose dropped to the ground her wings had gone and her designer clothes had dissapeared

doctor: there, you aren't a fairy anymore!

rose: awww, i'm in my school clothes again, i liked them designer clothes
(there, told ya she wouldn't be a fairy!)

crumpet
12-06-2005, 18:23
doactor: watch this,

they go to callum and he drops down and his clothes turn into scruffy torn clothes

doctor: you see? if someone he likes isn't a fairy anymore, nor is he!

rose: wow! what's that robot?

the robot came in

the doctor went white as the robot said the immortal words:

EXTERMINATE!

di marco
12-06-2005, 21:02
great! :D daleks! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
14-06-2005, 17:10
rose: it looks so lonely!

doctor: dont go near it! it'll kill you!

rose looks at the doctor doubtfully
rose: everything you see can kill me!

doctor: i aint joking! get away from it!

rose: you just want me to stay out of the fun stuff

she walks over to the darlek and reaches out to it and touches it and disapears!

(to be continued)

crumpet
15-06-2005, 20:54
doctor: ROSE! were are you?

dalek: GIVE ME YOUR LIFE AND THE GIRL WILL BE SPARED

doctor: no!

the dalek makes rose apear again and she has collapsed , the dalek somehow gets a chainsaw and turns it on and is just about to cut rose in half when callum ran out and kicked the dalek out of the way

callum: take that you um, piece of, um , JUNK!

dalek: who are you? you will be exterminated !!!

the doctor picks up rose and yanks callum out of the way and ran into the teleportation room, the doctor and callum push rose on and sit on themselves but the dalek comes and sucks rose off, (he is taking advantage of rose cos she likes daleks, sort of she feels sorry for them) e does that and callum and doctor dont notice.

doctor: we're safe now!

callum: yeah, we are but rose isn't

doctor: what do you mean? she's there! (he points to an empty spot were rose was and she got sucked off the thing but her silk hairband ) o, we have a problem

calum: no we dont!

doctor: YES WE DO! ROSE IS PROBABLY DEAD NOW AND IT'S ALL MY FAULT!

callum: no but....

doctor: AND I PROMISED TO LOOK AFTER HER!

callum:SHUT UP! she cant die, because, when i kicked it, i kicked it in a specific position! it's death ray turned into a teleportation thing! so rose will be directed to werever we are!

then a bloodcurdling scream comes and a blood stained rose appeared in callum's arms

doctor: we have another problem, the dalek's trying to kill rose but cant so it must've hit her loads of times and inserted a germ, a deforming germ! in 1 hour she'll turn into a unhuman being!

(to be continued)

crumpet
16-06-2005, 18:15
callum held rose to him closely


callum: but, she can't

doctor grabbed rose and held her in his arms and looked at her face

callum: oi! step away from the girl, it's my turn to lok at her

doctor: i aint! i am just studying her to see if it was a deadly germ

suddenly rose turned blue

doctor: quick kiss her!

callum: NO! you!

doctor: you were gonna before she found that you wanted to kiss her

callum: OK !

he kisses her and she turns all right agin and wakes up

rose:were am i?

doctor: dont go near me

rose: fine so just cos i do something you dont want me to do, you get in a strop well you can let me die then so see ya!

she walks obver to the next room and shuts the door

there is a massive scream afterwards

Angeldelight
18-06-2005, 17:59
scream.. why is she screaming... you can't leave it like that... i need to know... WHY IS SHE SCREAMING... more more more

crumpet
18-06-2005, 18:09
dont worry, i will tell you wen i am doing a last part

the doctor and callum rush in and find a 10 foot slitheen strangling rose!


callum/doctor : rose!

rose: go away,

the slitheen is now slghtly gripping rose at her waist so se can talk

rose: you happy now doctor? you glad i'm dying well i hope you will have a nice time with your new companion called callum,

she gets a knife and stabbs the slitheen and it dies and the doctor and callum run to rose and she runs to a cliff with super sharp killer rocks at the bottom with man-eating sharks

callum and doctor follow

rose: ok boys, you wanted me to die? good, cos if you come any closer i'll jump and stab my self , that sound good to you?

the doctor is trying not to cry and he manages to stop himself from crying

crumpet
18-06-2005, 19:01
rose: i will, i'll jump!

the doctor bursts out crying

callum runs back into the room behind to do extar damage to the monster

rose feels really guilty

rose: look, i'm sorry, i didn't mean to yell and everything!

doctor: but i cant lose you, i cant!

he holds rose close to him

rose: . ok ok! dont cut my air supply off!

doctor: let's go home now!
so they say goodbye to callum and go home and rose's mum offers for the doctor to stay with them which he asks rose first and she thinks is a great idea and they are all happy!

(that aint the end, there are more adventures coming up)

rose wakes up and a puppy is sitting on her bed, a german shephard

rose: WOW! WHO GOT ME THIS?

the doctor came in

rose: did you get me this?

doctor: o, no, i got you something else fluffy for ypour birthday!

rose: wow, did mum buy it?

rose's mum came in

R mum: do you like the present i bought you?

rose: yeah it's great!

Rmum: wel the doctor has something for you, he said it might come in handy

the doctor threw a package at rose

rose unwrapped it and screamed

crumpet
19-06-2005, 19:10
rose: WOW! I HAVE A DOOR OPENING PENKNIFE! A FLUFFY 1!

rose's mum goes shopping

doctor: want to go and see what we can find?

rose: ok!
so they get into the tardis and find a plastic barbie doll inside the tardis

barbie doll: ROSE TYLER WILL BE EXTERMINATED!

di marco
26-06-2005, 15:10
great! :D just caught up. oh dear an exterminating barbie doll! :) more soon, cant wait

xcutiekatiex
26-06-2005, 19:13
oh no shes gonna be exterminated :eek:

crumpet
26-06-2005, 19:37
the doctor looks terified but rose goes up to the doll and snaps her neck

doctor: do you know what you just did?

rose: yeah, snapped 1 of my old barbie dolls which was controlled by a dalek which is now going to arrive if we dont get out of here to kill ME!

doctor: you're good!

rose: i know! are we going?

then someone is banging on the door

rose: i'll get it!

she goes down to the door and the doctor stops her and he opens the door

it is the police

police: we need to collect rose tyler please, she needs to um, um, be taken down for murder!

rose pushes her way out and grabs a watergun

rose: look you daleks, go away or ill let you have it up you! and you will not like it!


the police bow down to rose and turn into daleks

daleks: we must speak to queen rose tyler

doctor: queen?

daleks: yes, she is the sacred daughter of the god of all daleks!

1 dalek points it's death ray at rose and shoots

rose: AHHHHHHHHH

doctor: ROSE!

he grabs her hand and they both disapear!

di marco
27-06-2005, 09:52
great! :D oh dear! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
01-07-2005, 20:27
(SORRY FOR ADVERYISING EVERYWERE, I WONT DO IT AGAIN)
rose wakes up and sees the doctor lying on the floor

rose: DOCTOR!!!

the doctor wakes up and jumps up.

doctor: were are we?

rose: i dont know!

rose holds the doctors hand and they walk towards a door

rose opens it and all of a sudden millions of dalek voices came from inside the door

millions of daleks: QUEEN ROSE TYLER, HAIL QUEEN ROSE!

doctor: O MY GOD!

the daleks see the doctor and they fly over to rose, and drag her off yelling we are protecting you from the doctor, the great exterminator!

rose: LET ME GO! DOCTOR! HELP!

a dalek points something at the doctor and shoots.

the doctor falls down and he looks as if he is in great pain and he is clutching his head as if it is going to explode he manages to get all right again, looks at rose and walks off to the tardis and goes

EastendersRox
02-07-2005, 08:24
OMG!

Just read this, MORE!

di marco
03-07-2005, 15:58
great! :D oh no whats wrong with the dr! :) more soon, cant wait


(SORRY FOR ADVERYISING EVERYWERE, I WONT DO IT AGAIN)

you can still have the links in your sig

crumpet
03-07-2005, 18:39
the doctor is at an alien chemists and the chemist person looks at the doctor adn rushes him to the theater and tells the doctor what is wrong with him

he opens the doctor's 2 hearts, (doctor cant feel anything) and takes out a black hatred bug

the doctor goes white and as soon as the operation was over he goes back to were the daleks had rose and he went even whiter when he saw public transformation posters everywere and rose was the personthat was going to be turned into a dalek beacuase she was the pretiest creature and aparently deserved to go through deadly- to humans torture to be turned into a dalek
what was he going to do to save rose???

di marco
03-07-2005, 21:53
great! :D rose is going to be a dalek! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
04-07-2005, 17:26
then rose was going by and she went past the doctor

doctor: ROSE! come with me! you'll turn into a dalek!

he reaches his arm out to take rose away but rose pushes him away

rose: GO AWAY! you left me! you went to abandon me, and did you have a good time without me? did you find yourself a girlfriend? so if i die, if i go through torture and pain, ill make sure you're there when i get changed and i'll MAKE YOU REMEmBER why i died!

the doctor is speechless and rose rushes by

crumpet
06-07-2005, 21:00
the doctor catches up to rose and says

doctor: if i didn't care about you, would i do this?

he kisses rose

rose: but,........

doctor: i only left you because that dalek shot a hatred thing into me!

rose looks stunned and doesnt say anything

doctor: come with me!

rose: i cant!

doctor: you can! now come on!

rose: i told you, i cant!

doctor: well, why not?

rose doesnt answer but just turns white then green then black then silver and two lights grow out of the side of her head

rose: get away from me! i am a dalek! go before i am fully transformed! go! i will kill you if i see you!

the doctor holds rose to him and tears come pouring out of his eyes

rose: i am dead, i have been dead for the past 5 minutes

she was talking in a strange voice now

doctor: isnt there anything i can do?

rose: yes but it will never happen

doctor: what is it?

he looks terified as rose's skin turns yellow and rusty and metal

rose: you must show your true feelings to the person you love, like that shop girl you are nice to or.......

rose stops speaking and turns fully into a dalek

doctor: or you

rose/dalek: i am the princess of all daleks, the doctor will be exterminated!

doctor: i'm your friend!

the doctor has an idea and leads the rose/dalek into the tardis and before she yells

EXTERMINATE
he yells back

I LOVE YOU!

the rose/dalek stops and rises and blows up and a girl comes from the roof of the tardis and falls all the way to the floor and a super bright light is in her hands and eyes which fades

the doctor hugs rose and whispers so she cant hear her

doctor: i love youso much i wont leave you EVER again

Katy
07-07-2005, 18:02
thats great crumpet keep it up.

EastendersRox
08-07-2005, 17:43
Great, keep up the grt work.

crumpet
08-07-2005, 17:58
rose looks startled and looks around.

doctor: what?

rose: i-i never thought i'd be like me again!

doctor: well, you are!

then rose doubled back in pain

the doctor rushes forward

rose: STAY BACK!

doctor: why? what's happeneing?

rose: i dont know but when i am...........

she goes into a daze and slowly sinks down to the floor

rose manages to finish her sentence and she said

rose: when i am with you, i get all sorts of things happen to me and 1 of them is future reading

the doctor looks very worried and rose gets up and the doctor rushes to rose and asks her what's wrong and to tell him

rose: no, if i tell you i will get you killed!

doctor: so you DO know what is wrong! tell me what is wrong!

rose: NO! i wont risk your life saving me again!

the doctor's face expression changes and he looks really touched

di marco
10-07-2005, 19:00
great! :D wow rose can see into the future! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
10-07-2005, 19:06
doctor: what did you say?

rose: i want you safe, go, leave me outside, you will decide if i die or not

doctor: of couse i dont want you to die!

rose: but does your heart say that? i will go outside, if your heart wants me to live, i will return recovered and i will tell you what is wrong with me and you wont be in danger
but if your heart says die then i will die

rose walks out of the tardis leaving the doctor crying

5 minutes later rose still hasnt come back

(did the doctor's heart(s) say yes or no? find out in the next part!)

di marco
10-07-2005, 19:08
great! :D whats going to happen! :) more soon, cant wait

crumpet
10-07-2005, 19:11
i am just about to have tea, i will be 10 mins, until then, i'm keeping you in suspense!!!

crumpet
20-07-2005, 17:06
the doctor is just about to see were rose had gone and he couldn't see her

then rose came up behind the doctor

rose: hi!

the doctor span round and hugged rose

doctor: i thought you were dead!

rose: nope, both your hearts said yes i should live so i am alive!

doctor: right, i'm taking you home,

rose: WHY!

doctor: cos it's time for me to get a new companion that wont be so much trouble!

rose is outraged adn just says.......

rose: fine ok,

she doesn't talk to the doctor at all through the journey home and when they got back to london, the doctor looked really bad and he said softly,

doctor: bye then rose

rose looks at the doctor in tears and slaps him and runs up the stairs,

while rose was running up the stairs, the doctor thought he heard a very loud sob

Jessie Wallace
27-07-2005, 23:16
This is great, i love it.

crumpet
29-07-2005, 21:38
the doctor walks away and goes back to the tardis and can't OPEN the door!

doctor: AH! WHY CAN'T I OPEN THIS?

rose looks out the window

rose: looking for the keys???

doctor: yes, give them 'ere!

rose: make me! you broke my heart, no i'm go break your'es!

doctor:yeah? like how?

rose: like this!

she whistles and a steam roller comes round and goes staright over the tardis squishing it completely!

crumpet
28-12-2005, 14:41
(ok, sorry for not posting in like AGES but my computer broke down)
the tardis was now squished and the doctor was staring at it.

rose was laughing and she walked over to him.

rose: you should have seen your face

doctor: now i'm stuck here with you!

rose: that's nice!

doctor: yeah cos you're not worth being nice to!

rose glared at the doctor and signald for the steam roller to move out of the way and there stood the tardis! the squished one was a cardboard one. rose ran into the real one and locked her self in it.

shannisrules
28-12-2005, 19:42
very good carry on loving your script

crumpet
28-12-2005, 19:45
cool, thx, look at my other dr who script!

shannisrules
28-12-2005, 22:41
your other one is great when does dr who start agin

Abi
28-12-2005, 22:43
Easter :D

crumpet
29-12-2005, 10:49
*goes to check when easter is and sulks in the corner*

crumpet
29-12-2005, 11:02
doctor: rose, come out of there now!

rose: make me!

the doctor waited and rose came out. she looked around to make sure the doctor wasn't anywere. but the doctor was hiding and he jumped out and tickled her.

the doctor eventuallly stopped tickling her.

rose: sorry for being really mean.

doctor: it's ok sorry for shouting at you

rose: friends?

doctor: yeah

Abi
29-12-2005, 16:05
*goes to check when easter is and sulks in the corner*

Tell me about it! I've now joined outpost gallifery as well, its the biggest doctor who forum on the web, so i'm in Doctor Who heaven all the time! You should try it, i think you can show off scripts somewhere on there as well, although i'm not sure if they're taking new members at the minute, because a lot of people join when specials are on the tele, and dont go on ever again, so they odnt let you when its on.... if you get my drift....

crumpet
01-01-2006, 15:59
(i've joined too!)