Wake up my darling

[ameliauk1]

hey everyone this is my first time at writing a script so please be gentle!! lol
its about when zoe faked the pregnancy and carries on but with plot twists and stuff.
please tell me what you think be deadly honest. :bow:

wake up my darling

part1

(Upstairs in the queen vic over dinner)

sharon- me and dennis have an announcement to make. (holds dennis hand lovingly)

zoe- whats she going on about dennis? Get offa her hand (she screams and grabs for his hand)

dennis- zoe im sorry i love sharon we are gonna be together

dirtyden- over my dead body you are, zoe sit back down!!!

zoe- how could you do this to me (she cries as she runs out of the vic, den follows her)

dirtyden- calm down if youre clever and careful you can sort this out.

zoe- wotcha mean den, sort this out? whats there to sort hes left me for her!!

dirtyden- stop crying and listen theres a way round this

zoe- im listening

dirtyden- you walk back in that pub and you tell him youre pregnant!

zoe- im not how can i say that to him den

dirtyden- do you wanna keep him or not

zoe- of course i do but im gonna be lying

dirtyden- he dont know that though does he?!

dirtyden- my princess cant have kids and heres poor zoe up the duff, come on zoe think for once!!

zoe- but your sure it will work

dirtyden- of course it will work now get in there

(zoe storms tearfully back into the vic and heads into the kitchen where she hears sharon and dennis)

[Angeldelight]

kewl... are you posting more???

[Nigellover]

wicked!more plz xx

[ameliauk1]

yeh im gonna post next part now

xxx
amelia

[ameliauk1]

Wake up my darling

part2

sharon-dennis im so happy, we are finally gonna be together(pullin dennis close)

zoe-GET YOUR STINKIN FILTHY HANDZ OFFA MY MAN YOU COW!!

sharon-he loves me now zoe, not you,we are gonna be together no matter what nothing can get in the way to spoil things can they dennis?

dennis- no babe we are meant together me and you

zoe- you sure bout that , not even the fact that im PREGNANT!?

*tears start to form in sharons eyes

dennis- sharon it dont change a thing between me and you darlin

sharon- it changes everythin dennis

dennis- zoe i love sharon i dont love you ok but i will stay here for the baby.

zoe- told you hed stay with me you filthy cow

dennis- zoe leave it out

sharon- i hate you dennis, i hate you all! (she runs off out of the vic in tears)

dennis- (shouts after her) SHARON!!!

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AS I HAVE MORE PARTS ALREADY WRITTEN.

XX AMELIA

[Angeldelight]

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.. . he can't stay with her... he can't... he loves SHARON... this is great please post more... more more more...

[ameliauk1]

thanks ill post some more in a sec

[ameliauk1]

PART 3

*BLEEP BLEEP

*sharons phone bleeped as a text message came through from dennis, in tears again she threw her phone onto the floor closed her eyes and started to wish she wasnt in this family.

*still no reply dennis thought to himself as he started to drift in and out of sleep on the sofa in the lounge in zoe and his new flat.

*zoe reached out for dennis as she rolled over in their new master bed, and realized dennis wasnt there she knew what she was doing was wrong but she couldnt help it she wanted dennis to be hers and no one elses.

*eventually curiosity got the better of sharon she got up to read the message on the phone screen. why must he keep doing this to me doesnt he realise what he is putting me through everytime i see him in our old flat with her. he says he loves me but we cant be together after this sharon thought as she read the text over and over again.

IT READ:

SHARON PLEASE UNDERSTAND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH DARLING BUT I HAVE TO DO WHAT IS RIGHT AND STAND BY ZOE JUST FOR THE BABYS SAKE. PLEASE PLEASE FORGIVE ME SHARON I COULDNT BEAR IT IF YOU EVER STOPPED LOVING ME. ALWAYS AND FOREVER LOVING YOU XXXXX DENNIS

please tell me what you thought xxxxx amelia

[Layne]

This is good, more soon
Layne
x x x

[Angeldelight]

awwwwwwwwwwwww... that's so sweet... please let them get together... please... this is really great... please post more... more more more

[melonb]

awwwwwwwww this amzing!! :cheer: :wub:
evil zoe!! grrrrrr :angry:
more soon please!!! :thumbsup:

[ameliauk1]

k lol im gonna post some more later, ill give you a clue as to what happens. 1. big disaster

2.turns out ok

3.shannis reunited lol

[Nigellover]

this is really good. cant w8 for the next part!shannis reunited- yayay!!!

[ameliauk1]

thanks ill do it bout 9.15 k??

[di marco]

great! :D just read it all. sharon and dennis have to get back together! :) more soon please, cant wait

[ameliauk1]

part4

*zoe walked into the living room to see dennis making coffee in the next room

zoe- dennis please come to bed with me

dennis- no zoe

zoe- why not

dennis - in case you forgot youre pregnant

zoe- so come ea (reaches out to him)

dennis- just leave me alone will you i just cant i love sharon im only here for the baby (he snaps)

*LATER ON

zoe- he wont go anywhere near me den i mean it this time, theres no way im gonna get pregnant and then hell find out that ive been lying to him hell leave me anyway

den- theres always alternatives to dennis darlin

zoe- eww you cant be serious den

den- oh yeh deadly anyway i aint that bad darlin

zoe- NO WAY!!!!

theres gonna be more later please tell me what you think xxxx amelia

[Angeldelight]

Ooooohhhh... wait till every one finds out... please post more...

[ameliauk1]

i will later on when i get back from shopping !! xxx amelia

[di marco]

great! :D hahaha zoes all upset! :) more soon please, cant wait

[Layne]

Ha ha Zoe in your face!! he he! Dirty Den!! More soon
Layne
x x x

[ameliauk1]

thanks for all the great comments guys ummm i think i might be able to post some tonight if not it will definatley be tomorrow night . sorry bout that xxx amelia

[Angeldelight]

we'll forgive you as soon as you post some more... hehe... i can't wait to read it... yey

[ameliauk1]

lol thanks xxx amelia

[ameliauk1]

part 5

zoe- how can i keep doing this to him den, its all lies

den- oh and you want to lose him to sharon do you?, now wipe your eyes and stop crying you stupid girl

zoe- youre not the one in this mess den its me!

den- well you wouldnt be in this mess if youd have slept with me like we planned, dennis wouldnt have known any different

*vicki appears from the shadows after eavesdropping, dumbfounded from what shes just heard.

vicki-no but i will!!

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK GUYS SORRY I WAS LATE IN POSTING.

XX AMELIA

[Layne]

This si great, what is vicki gonna do?
More soon
Layne
x x x

[di marco]

great! :D now vikki knows! :) more soon please, cant wait

[ameliauk1]

This si great, what is vicki gonna do?
More soon
Layne
x x x

youre gonna have to wait and see heehee :rotfl: :angel: xxx amelia

[Angeldelight]

oh WOW... run to DENNIS Vicki... TELL HIM... TELL CHRISSIE TOO... then she won't have to kill him... wow... please post more SOON... NOW... pleaseeeeeee... more more more

[melonb]

come on vicki!! tell him whats been going on!!!! :cheer: :bow:
more soon please!!! :thumbsup: :clap: